独立作文练习________ kaolaliang

emmafengxiUID: 2734678

刚刚居然没发上来。。。不好意思，改晚了。。

cckkll1994UID: 2952719

TPO18
The article depicts three different ways to address the decline of Torreya. One is reestablish it in the same location. Next one is that move it to a different location far away from Florida. The other is preserve it in the research centers. However, the speaks makes the explanation about the three resolutions.
Firstly, the Torreya cannot plant in the same location. Because of global warming, the location is becoming drilling that cannot give birth to these Torreyas. And
Secondly, different places are not suit for Torreya, even more Torreya is not accepted by other locations. When it planted in different locations, because of its ability of enrolling water other plants surrounded were dead.
Finally, the research centers cannot hold Torreya for a long time.
To sum it up, the three resolutions aren’t satisfaction, and the speaker suggests that the three ways of planting may cause Torreya extinct really.

1.文章“有点”短
2.遗失信息点 <1>microclimate
            <2>example of black bulk tree
            <3>cannot surrvive the diseases
3.添加阅读与听力不存在的信息：
speaker suggests that the three ways of planting may cause Torreya extinct really.

FannieHsuUID: 2861996

TPO18
The article depicts three different ways to address the decline of Torreya. One is reestablish it in the same location. Next one is that move it to a different location far away from Florida. The other is preserve it in the research centers. However, the speaks （？？？）makes the explanation about the three resolutions.
Firstly, the Torreya cannot plant in the same location. Because of global warming, the location is becoming drilling that cannot give birth to these Torreyas.
Secondly, different places are not suitable for Torreya, even more Torreya is not accepted by other locations. When it planted in different locations, because of its ability of enrolling water other plants surrounded were dead.
Finally, the research centers cannot hold Torreya for a long time.; {- ^, p: g0 }  Q8 H$ R. c9 T
To sum it up, the three resolutions aren’t satisfaction, and the speaker suggests that the three ways of planting may cause Torreya extinct really.

楼主的听力貌似不行，比我还差的感觉，文章观点表明的不清楚。。我第三个观点也没听清楚，但是根据阅读来至少还推出来一点，加油~

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40# cckkll1994
谢谢修改， 这篇文章没听懂

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41# FannieHsu
你说的很对，我得加油了~

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11.25 独立 TPO1

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改好了，请查收

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45# WoYaoChiJiTui

谢谢，你的意见很受用

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In the busy and crowded world today, we should not expect people to be polite to each other

Nowadays, city has more crowed than before. Traffic jam is happening everyday, crowed public transportation go through every corners in city. So someone has a suggestion, it’s common that treat other people impolitely in city. I totally disagree with this point. From my perspective, although people live in a busy and crowded city, polite is the basic in communication.
First of all, to be polite is a kind of respectful. In China be respect to other people is a judge of good person and say polite words, to do something politely and so forth which are all of perfance of respect.
Further,
Last but not the least,
In conclusion,

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11.27  Should an effective leader make others have been part of decision making?

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11.29  综合 tpo4

谢谢修改

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11.30 Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? The best way to improve the quality of education in a country is to increase teachers’ salaries

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11月29日作业
综合写作TPO4 已改，请查收

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51# WoYaoChiJiTui

谢谢

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tpo5 不知道为什么 第3段一点都没听懂！