Tides 作文本

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我改好了   电脑最近不好用  文件传不上来~
明天给你传~！
我自己的也重新传了 希望LZ有空看一下~

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5# 樾悦

好的=v=。我正在改。

樾悦UID: 2689181

有什么说错的地方见谅哈~

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7# 樾悦


谢谢批改和表扬～
我就是想弱弱的说…我用satisified是想要过分作修饰…囧。其实我自己也昏的…怀疑考试的时候只会写简单句了。

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When it comes to whether moving to a new place is good or not, different people have different opinions due to their own experience. However, in response to the title statement, I believe that moving to a new city or a new country will not deprive us of old friends, and the advantages of it surpass the disadvantages. I will elaborate my points as follows.

First of all, we can constantly keep contact with our old friends after settling a new place. Now we are joining the Information Age in which information spreads quickly and widely. People nowadays can easily communicate with their friends by cell phones, E-mail, chatting programs and so on. For example, I always chat with my mother, who has settled in Sichuan province five years ago due to her job needs, by QQ or MSN. Every Friday night I can see her smile and hear her with the help of advanced video&audio technology. Both of us enjoy the great time brought by the Internet. My mother said that, thanks to the development of technology, she also kept contact with her old friends by these convenient communication tools. Seldom will she feel lonely and she is also engaged in the new environment. Overall, I do not think that moving to a new place will make us lose our old friends in 21st century.

Moreover, we can, generally speaking, make more new friends if we go to a new place. As a result of moving, we have to consort different types of people among who we may be interested in making friends with. As time goes by, these new friends may become old friends and release our homesickness. I do think that adapting a new circumstance and making new friends will not merely enrich our experience also widen our horizons.

Admittedly, no one would like to taste the sense of loneliness and lose their old friends who always cared about them truly. But, in reaction to the statement, how can we attribute the reason of losing old friends to moving to a new place? If people try their best to keep the relationship among their friends, the obstruction coursed by distance will gradually pales.

To sum up, even though people and their old friends cannot see each other every day as a result of moving to a new place, they can connect each other simply. Meanwhile, moving provides people with new friends and fresh feelings, which is always a good thing. Consequently, the haste generalization is not inappropriate at all.

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revised by Fletch to Tides

谢谢哈，改我的作文时提了很重中肯意见。