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The points made in the lecture counter arguments made by points of the reading passage. The author concludes that the small sea mammal—otter declined greatly. The experts indicated this phenomenon relate to the environmental pollution and predator. The lecture refutes the argument.
First, the lecture states that no one found any pollution objects wash up with the otters in the Alaska beach. Moreover, the dead otters’ body denies the predator hypothesis. This undermines the reading’s claim that the reason of the dead otter is the chemical and oil ring pollution.

Second, the lecture argues that the human hunters tend to prey the small mammals, such as the seal, sea lion and otter. This challenges the reading’s statement that there is merely the whale may destroy these small mammals.

Third, the lecture says that the location whish the otters survive in the Alaska are quite large. And the population in the shallow and rocket place which access the otter has not declined. This is contrary to the argument in the passage the ocean currency and otter environmental factors influence all Alaska’s otters.

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不好意思,没有看到你的链接,就没来批了T T。
晚了T T.
The points made in the lecture counter arguments made by points of the reading passage. The author concludes that the small sea mammal—otter declined greatly. The experts indicated this phenomenon relate to the environmental pollution and predator. The lecture refutes the argument.  I' v4 n- q/ X: F$ W2 ?+ A- Z
First, the lecture states that no one found any pollution objects wash up with the otters in the Alaska beach. Moreover, the dead otters’ body denies the predator hypothesis. This undermines the reading’s claim that the reason of the dead otter is the chemical and oil ring pollution.3 Y: z: B1 z& |4 j7 c

# j7 @7 u7 ]5 H4 x" G* [6 m' CSecond, the lecture argues that the human hunters tend to prey the small mammals, such as the seal, sea lion and otter. This challenges the reading’s statement that there is merely the whale may destroy these small mammals.6 l8 `( Q" J! Y) |/ z

/ a# `' x$ R+ p9 E+ l/ b2 e. B6 hThird, the lecture says that the location whish the otters survive in the Alaska are quite large. And the population in the shallow and rocket place which access the otter has not declined. This is contrary to the argument in the passage the ocean currency and otter environmental factors influence all Alaska’s otters.
基本得分点都达到了.组织再好点~就ok叻,主要是听力有些细节最好也能写进去~