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Should business do anything they can to make profit
     The recent year has witnessed the phenomenon that the economics has caused much attention among the society,and the business is not an exception.Now we are entering a brand new era full of opptunities and competition,and great changes have taken place in people's mind towards some traditional practice.Some people think business should do anything they can to make profit,but I hold the oppsite oppnion.The follow details can support my point of view.
      First,business is for the profit,every boss should be bound to his or her employers,he or she must pay them salary every month.Using justified method can elevate profit for the company.You know,there are 3 points that are important for successful of business--research,media and advertisment.Good research can make a good decision.Proper media to different custmor is also very important,for example,if you want to sell some fashional thing,you should use internet,because young people prefer to use internet to ge information.And the last one advertisment,a good advertisment can make custmor have a good impression on your product.
     Second,if a boss do anything to make profit,he may be get an oppsite result.He want to make more profit,then let his employers work longer and give them lower salary.In this way,the workers will be unsatisfied with the boss,and they can't concentrate on working,even more ,they may be hate the boss,so finally they don't work hard for the boss.A friend of mine was working in a electric industy,he averagely worked 10 hours a day and the salary was not very high,he told me that he was very tired,everyday when he was working he wanted to sleep and couldn't work hard,so at last ,he gave up his job.
    The last but not the least.Using justified method can relatively make more profit.If the boss is kind and tolerant,his workers would love him,they don't have much pressure on living.you know,pressure can cause a lot illness,such as high blood pressure,physiological problem and so on,these are bad for health.These worker will work harder for him and make more profit.