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Students should bring a certain skepticism to whatever they study. They should question what they are taught instead of accepting it passively.
论点：不仅学习而且在生活各个方面我们都要保持怀疑审慎的态度。
1.抱着怀疑的态度去学习不仅仅丰富一个人的知识同时提高一个人思考推理创新的能力。
2.抱着怀疑的态度去思考人生社会才有进步，科学才会发展，人类文明才会丰富完善。怀疑是得到真理的第一步。
3.怀疑并非一定要改正错误，而是一种严谨思考的态度，怀疑一个问题首先必须深刻了解一个问题，思考一个问题。
    同时，怀疑不是吹毛求疵，怀疑的目的也不能偏离轨道，怀疑不是攻击他人获得利益的工具。


Skepticism is an attitude of responsibility for our history, science, knowledge and even our lives. It helps to dig up more problems and urges us to solve it and perfect it, which makes the human civilization as it is now. In order to study well, to explore the unknown better and to make the society to advance, it is necessary to take an attitude of skepticism when facing everything.

It is very clear that we students should be doubtful with what we learn but not accept knowledge only. Skepticism help one to form a habit to think not only what it is but also where it comes from, why it comes into being and how we work with it. And in this way, what we get is richer especially in some ability of practice and creating. It is known to all, the difference of means to teach between China and the western country. Chinese students accept large amounts of knowledge but lack of doubtfulness while the educator in China usually teaches knowledge only. What we get is always what it is. These may prevent children to form an ability of thinking, reasoning and creating, which suffers enough from criticizing. What the society really need is not a live encyclopedia but the man who could think independently and create new.

Though skepticism motivates us to explore the unknown desperately, which greatly help to correct some mistakes and perfect our civilization, somebody hold the opinion that it is not so necessary to doubt anything about science today. They claim that what we should do is to accept knowledge in most cases, because almost everything we learned has been tested by the highly developed technology and science today while in ancient time people had no means to check if it was right. But what we should realize is that every period gets it breakthrough and people may instinctively regard it as an axiom firstly. Once people were told the earth is the centre of the universe and certainly make it correct. But the latter generation overturns it totally. I mean that no matter how we are sure about today's axiom and no matter how strongly we believe our science today, it can turn into falsehood some day. Skepticism is always the first step to truth. The medieval Western Europe was darkly ruled under the religions and theocracy and the God was made to be the absolutely authority. It is no exaggeration that the challenges and the skepticisms to the theocracy gave birth to the Renaissance, which shook the roots of feudalism and subvert the domination of religion. Therefore, to some extent, skepticism is the motivation of advancement of a society and a civilization.

Somebody says skepticism to what is true and right is a waste of time. Actually, skepticism is a responsible and well-kint attitude to think and to live. The purpose to doubt is not only to correct mistakes but also to remind us to speculate carefully and deeply since only by thinking deeply can we get skepticism to it. It means to speculate deeply and exhaustively but not to carp. Skepticism which is superficial, that is to say, Skepticism without thinking carefully is not desirable. Additionally, we should pay attention to the purpose and motivation of doubtfulness to ensure it is pure such as exploring the science. When the skepticism comes into a tool of human to seek profit and attack others between politicians, skepticism will lose its significance.

It can be concluded that skepticism always play an important role to advance our human' pace in lots of area, which make society better and better. To improve our abilities, to explore the unknown and to make our civilization perfectly we'd better hold a doubtfulness attitude when facing everything even it may be right most time.(word 634)

Andrew_zwiUID: 2670942

Skepticism is an attitude of responsibility for our history, science, knowledge and even our lives. It helps to dig up more problems and urges us to solve it and perfect it, which makes the human civilization as it is now. In order to study well, to explore the unknown better and to make the society to advance, it is necessary to take an attitude of skepticism when facing everything.

It is very clear that we students should be doubtful with what we learn but not accept knowledge only. Skepticism help one to form a habit to think not only what it is but also where it comes from, why it comes into being and how we work with it. And in this way, what we get is richer especially in some ability of practice and creating. It is known to all, the difference of means to teach(用educational mode 会不会更好点) between China and the western country. Chinese students accept large amounts of knowledge but lack of doubtfulness while the educator in China usually teaches knowledge only. What we get is always what it is. These may prevent children to form an ability of thinking, reasoning and creating, which suffers enough from criticizing. What the society really need is not a live encyclopedia but the man who could think independently and create new.

Though skepticism motivates us to explore the unknown desperately, which greatly help to correct some mistakes and perfect our civilization, somebody hold the opinion that it is not so necessary to doubt anything about science today. They claim that what we should do is to accept knowledge in most cases, because almost everything we learned has been tested by the highly developed technology and science today while in ancient time people had no means to check if it was right. But what we should realize is that every period gets it breakthrough and people may instinctively regard it as an axiom firstly. Once people were told the earth is the centre of the universe and certainly make it correct. But the latter generation overturns it totally. I mean that no matter how we are sure about today's axiom and no matter how strongly we believe our science today, it can turn into falsehood some day. Skepticism is always the first step to truth. The medieval Western Europe was darkly ruled under the religions and theocracy and the God was made to be the absolutely authority. It is no exaggeration that the challenges and the skepticisms to the theocracy gave birth to the Renaissance, which shook the roots of feudalism and subvert the domination of religion（好！）. Therefore, to some extent, skepticism is the motivation of advancement of a society and a civilization.

Somebody says skepticism to what is true and right is a waste of time. Actually, skepticism is a responsible and well-kint attitude to think and to live. The purpose to doubt is not only to correct mistakes but also to remind us to speculate carefully and deeply since only by thinking deeply can we get skepticism to it. It means to speculate deeply and exhaustively but not to carp. Skepticism which is superficial, that is to say, Skepticism without thinking carefully is not desirable. Additionally, we should pay attention to the purpose and motivation of doubtfulness to ensure it is pure such as exploring the science. When the skepticism comes into a tool of human to seek profit and attack others between politicians, skepticism will lose its significance.

It can be concluded that skepticism always play an important role to advance our human' pace in lots of area, which make society better and better. To improve our abilities, to explore the unknown and to make our civilization perfectly we'd better hold a doubtfulness attitude when facing everything even it may be right most time

整篇文章的体系比较完整。倒数第二段有对skepticism进行约束，是文章更有说服力。
LZ文笔也日渐提高。但是，读文章的时候，我感到很吃力，长句太多，希望LZ能在句式变化上多下点功夫。长短句结合。
再者，觉得这篇文章没有跑题。还是很合题目的。

jefferysyUID: 2928828

看着楼主的文章确实感觉有差距，所以就不发表意见了