请教一下大家,12.11的独立写作中开头用了“Nowadays some people think it better to work..., while others prefer working... As far as I'm concerned, I want tochoose the former work style”. 结尾用了“Judging from the reasons presented above, we may arrive at the agreement that... is more enjoyable than...”这种是不是会被判典型的模板句而分会巨低啊,求教。。