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wangweicocoUID：128563

209"Progress is best made through discussion among people who have contrasting points of view." Present your perspective on the issue below, using relevant reasons and/or examples to support your views.
      Contemporary society is sometimes portrayed as dominated by the experience of change. The break-neck speed of technological innovation and the instability of international relation are frequently cited as the evidence that we live in a world radically different from the past. More and more people question: "what means we should use to make progress, through discussion with different people or learning by oneself? As far as I am concerned, the former is the answer.
   To begin with, contrasting points of views among people can perfect what we plan or perform. As we all know that in this huge world, anyone has special characteristic distinct with others, no matter notions, thinking measures, perspective considering things and so forth. For example, when we appreciate an abstract picture in exhibition some people may think it is a person, on the contrary other people perhaps believe it is an animal .So the distinctive ideas and analysis might make the problems or plans solved by all-rounded aspects. Take enacting constitution or law for another example. The process of making a law is through discussion again and again, and experts from extensive fields express their opinions from terrain they touch. Finally the law comes into being comply with the wills of most numbers of citizens after the intense argument or debate contrasting points of views, the progress of the law also improves the growth of whole society.
    Secondly, we can comprehend the information or knowledge through deep discussion. Through the different ideas which make us think better, we can research deeply and discover the new facts. We all know the story of Copernicus, most people in Church of that days hold the opinion that the Sun surrounded the Earth perpetually, however, the Copernicus did not think so and he deemed the Earth moved around the Sun never stopped, then the drastic discussion was made. Although the discussion is sharp even cruel, after contrasting the points of views and analyzing scientifically, true theory was produced, and progress of looking for the axiom or truth of science make a stride forward.
       Last, but not least, the relationship between distinctive field people can be enhanced and they have more opportunity to communicate and understand with each other. Whatever we do, including not only geology and astronomy, but also humanity and history, it is impossible for us to have no suggestions from others because one person is single or lonely. We can get much knowledge or information by means of discussions, meanwhile accelerate the friendship with others. Without contrasting point of view from others, we might not only be easy to form the narrow or single-minded ideas, but also lose the chance of making friends with all kinds of people.
    In summary, there are still several other aspects relevant to the issue under discussion which, unfortunately, I have no time to explore in detail here. But the above-discussion reasons should in a large sense justify my conclusion that the progress is best made by discussion among those who have contrasting viewpoints

feier521UID：109747

Contemporary society is sometimes portrayed as dominated by the experience of change. The breakneck speed of technological innovation and the instability of international relation are frequently cited as the evidence that we live in a world radically different from the past. More and more people question(ask): "what(Which) means we should(should 放在we前) use to make progress, through discussion with different people or learning by oneself? As far as I am concerned, the former is the answer.

To begin with, contrasting points of views(point of view的复数是points of view)among people can perfect what we plan or perform. As we all know that in this huge world, anyone has special characteristic distinct with others, no matter notions, thinking measures（methods）, perspective（好像有点重复，想法，想法，观点）considering things and so forth. For example, when we appreciate an abstract picture in exhibition, some people may think it is a person, on the contrary（，） other people perhaps believe it is an animal(举例不是很有力。) .So（人们把画看成人或者动物，因此不同的观点就有帮助？） the distinctive ideas and analysis might make the problems or plans solved by all-rounded aspects. Take enacting constitution or law for another example. The process of making a law is through discussion again and again, and experts from extensive fields express their opinions from terrain（什么意思?） they touch. Finally the law comes into being(and) comply(complies) with the wills of most number(s) of citizens after the intense argument or debate (over) contrasting points of views, the progress of the law(法律的过程？the process of enacting law) also improves the growth of whole society.

Secondly, we can comprehend the information or knowledge through deep discussion. Through the different ideas which make us think better, we can research deeply and discover the new facts. We all know the story of Copernicus, most people in Church of that days hold(held) the opinion that the Sun surrounded the Earth perpetually, however, (the) Copernicus did not think so and he deemed the Earth moved around the Sun(and) never stopped, then the drastic discussion was made. Although the discussion is(was) sharp even cruel, after contrasting the points of views and analyzing scientifically, true theory was produced(哥白尼的理论没有得到接受), and progress of looking for the axiom or truth of science make a stride forward.
Last, but not least, the relationship between distinctive field people（people in distinctive fields） can be enhanced and they have more opportunity to communicate and understand with each other. Whatever we do（learn）, including not only geology and astronomy, but also humanity and history, it is impossible for us to have no suggestions from others because one person is single or lonely(有因果关系吗？因为一个人是孤单的？因为个人的看法是不全面的). We can get much knowledge or information by means of discussions, meanwhile accelerate the friendship with others. Without contrasting point of view from others, we might not only be easy to form（easily form） the narrow or single-minded ideas, but also lose the chance of making friends with all kinds of people. （理由不是很充分，不冲突的观点更容易交朋友啊）

In summary, there are still several other aspects relevant to the issue under discussion which, unfortunately, I have no time to explore in detail here. But the above-discussion reasons should in a large sense justify my conclusion that the progress is best made by discussion among those who have contrasting viewpoints

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