最后的战役 第一周 issue 130 by adam

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130"How children are socialized today determines the destiny of society. Unfortunately, we have not yet learned how to raise children who can help bring about a better society."
My issue:
"Youth is rich, nation is rich; youth is strong, nation is strong", noted Qichao Liang, a leading pioneer in the reformation of China's society. As Qichao Liang's words, I agree with the idea that the destiny of society is determined by how children are socialized today. But the second half of this issue assertion is too extreme. Even though the way we teach kids is not perfect now, it works in some how at least. The issue is too pessimistic.
Socializing is good for children themselves. First of all, a man who wants to be somebody needs not only to learn variety kinds of knowledge and skills, but also get on well with others. The reason why George W .Bush became a president is his talent of communication not his IQ. Moreover people in a teamwork with others is higher efficiency and more powerful than a person who works alone. Furthermore someone must blend himself into society firstly, and then can contribute to it.

Otherwise, children isolated from around could barely get love from others, who will not pay back to society, even harmful, when they grow up. That Hitler became a war criminal has more to do with his miserable childhood.
Nowadays, many parents pay much attention to their children's socialization education. They sent kids to school where children can study with other kids. They encourage kids to play with others and advise their children to take jobs in order to be familiar with the real society. So we can't ignore the fact that most parents know how to teach their children, just because a few parents don't.
In conclusion, the destiny of society is determined by how children are socialized today. Thus
it is an unshakable responsibility for us to find a better way as possible as we could to raise the children and adjust our method from time to time.写的很匆忙，大家帮忙改改