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TOPIC: ISSUE130 - "How children are socialized today determines the destiny of society. Unfortunately, we have not yet learned how to raise children who can help bring about a better society."
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This topic tell us that the destiny of society is depend on children and the way they are socialized which we have no idea how to foster them in order to bring about a better society. I concede that children will play really important roles in  future society, while whether how they are socialized now determined the future is not for sure. In addition, there's no, and it is also very difficult to set up, such  a norm which can judge if it is "a better society". I'll amplify these point of views by the following text.

First, as we all know, the society is composed of people and its social relation. The destiny of society is influenced by not only the result of the socialization, but also the human nature, which is an inner characteristic that can not easily changed. Adolf Hitler was born of wild ambitions, and because of his discouragement in Vienna, which all brought the savage Nazi regime. Think if he was a coward person, however he socialized he could not make his immanence changed, he would not be wild enough to start the World War II.

Moreover, how a society will be explored could not be predict by anyone. There is no parents who don't want their child growing up in a better way and being a good person. We shall believe that everything parents done is in a good intention even if the result does not being very good. A child may  also be leaded and guided by the people around, by whom they copy the behavior, thought, life style or even tones, the media, which is seen as the most authority method, the books full of different thoughts and theories which may be have their own opinion about things, and so on.

To bring about a better society is not such things that we can just do so that we will get what we want. Vincent Van Gogh had not a happy childhood, he delicated his entire life on painting willing some one's recongnition and  after more than a hundred years, his arts eventually being approved by the society, and more and more people like his paints and enjoy the conception Van Gogh wanted to express. Compare with the 19s, which sure is a better society, but no one could say that it is good enough. Van Gogh's case just shown that not only the way we raise children wil lead a better society, but may also be something we don't know, something we can't see, something we will never find out.
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This topic tells us that the destiny of society is depended on children and the way they are socialized which we have no idea how to foster them in order to bring about a better society. I concede that children will play really important roles in  future society, while whether how they are socialized now determined the future is not for sure. In addition, there's no, and it is also very difficult to set up, such  a norm which can judge if it is "a better society". I'll amplify these points of views by the following text.

First, as we all know, the society is composed of people and its social relation. The destiny of society is influenced by not only the result of the socialization, but also the human nature, which is an inner characteristic that cannot easily changed. Let me put Adolf Hitler as an example. Adolf Hitler was born of wild ambitions, and because of his discouragement in Vienna, these all brought the savage Nazi regime. Think if he was a coward person, however he socialized, he could not make his immanence changed, so that he would not be wild enough to start the World War II. Being socialized may change a child's some qualities, but the inner quality can never been changed. And it is the original nature but not the socialization of a person that serve the society.

Moreover, how a society will be explored could not be predict by anyone. There is no parents who don't want their child growing up in a better way and being a good person. We shall believe that everything parents done is in a good intention even if the result does not being very good. A child may  also be leaded and guided by the people around, whom they copy the behavior, thought, life style or even tones, the media, which is seen as the most authority method, the books full of different thoughts and theories which may be have their own opinion about things, and so on. Perents has already tried their best to cultivate their children, while the children may grow up in a diffierent way because of the influence of so many other aspects.

To bring about a better society is not such things that we can just do so that we will get what we want. Vincent Van Gogh had not a happy childhood, he dedicated his entire life on painting willing some one's recognition and  after more than a hundred years, his arts eventually being approved by the society, and more and more people like his paints and enjoy the conception Van Gogh wanted to express. Compare with the 19s, the nowaday's society sure is a better society, but no one could say that it is good enough. Van Gogh's case just shown that not only the way we raise children wil lead a better society, but may also be something we don't know, something we can't see, something we will never find out.

To sum up, how children are socialized sure do vital affect to the society anytime. No matter that they play positive or negative effect to the society is be decided not only by the their parents who have already try to raise them in a good way, but also by all the children surrounding.