daily writing---我的作文帖。。

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3.4 独立修改

Nowadays, the relations between each person may gradually play a more and more significant role in the society, especially in the long journey of one's personal career. However, it is too hasty to assert that our future career is more related to other people than study hard at school by ourselves.

First, the high quality of education lays the foundation for one's future career and to a certain extent it frequently determines the direction of your（one’s） career. As is known to all, our ideals, personalities and even the methods we treat people are formed at school. What's more, hard work is usually regarded as a precious wealth which can benefit us lifelong. Study hard is not only for the purpose of decent marks, but also cultivates such qualities as perseverance, self-discipline and self-realization. They（these） are deeply rooted in one's mind and never fade away.

Second, the old saying (goes delete), a man is his own muster and determines his own destiny, tells us it is better to rely on ourselves rather than others, and that is what I deeply convince. It is clear that there are no forever friends but the perpetual interests. If we real（really） want to be an independent person we should have our own expertise, depending on which at least we can earn our lives. On the contrary, overestimated relations can not solve everything, for example, peers will(would) look down upon those who use relations to get a promotion and speak ill a word, which deteriorates the ties with the colleagues.

Finally, if we put more premiums on the others, it will inevitably cause harmful deeds such as briber and corruption. It is no wonder to see, especially in China where the relations play an in important in the whole society, that the leaders get varieties of gifts in festivals for no reasons, and obviously that is corruption. This phenomenon dose unspeakable bad for the society, not mention a person’s future career.

In addition, only by studying hard which enables to have integrated skills to be qualified for the job can we have a brighter future career. Relation, may sometimes accelerate the process of career, but it can never (be) a substitute for one’s endeavor.


用词，句式很丰富，条理也是很清晰的，呵呵 学习呢~~

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45# bibby00888 3.5独立作文修改

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3.7综合

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不好意思，我把你的名字和另一位同学（bean）的搞错了，所以之前批改的是他的文章，非常抱歉

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请查收

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没事 49# Go2011Go

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3.8独立++综合

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3.9综合

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3.8 综合修改
不好意思。迟了改~~~

In the lecture, the professor makes several points about the issue of the spread of cane toad.  The professor argues that the measures will not succeed, challenging the point which is stated in the reading passage that several measures haven been proposed to stop the spread of cane.

First, the professor suggests that a national fence will cause environmental damage and can not work well. As the eggs of cane toad and young cane toads can be brought from one side of the fence to the other by rivers or steams, because the spread of toads will not be prevented. However, the reading passage insists that the national fence can prevent the cane toads moving into the regions that have not been colonized by them.

Second, according to the professor, the untrained volunteers will destroy the native frogs, and some of which are endangered, because it is hard to distinguish them from young cane toads. In contrast, the reading passage only claims that the collective effort might stop toads from spreading, ignoring the protection of other precious species.

Finally, another point the professor uses to cast against the reading passage is that the disease-causing virus may does harm for cane toads in South America and causes the ecological disaster, because the virus can be transported to America by several ways, and kill the original toads which is an essential part of the ecosystem. However, this point is neglected by the reading passage which merely insists that virus will control the population of cane toads.

观点都齐全了。。但有一段总结段落会好一点吧。。。加油啊！！！

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改好

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3.10综合

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3.10的综合作文已经看完了。
点都写到了。而且结构、用词等方面都没有发现问题。
写得很好哦~~加油！！
还有我今天状态不是很好，综合可能写得很烂，望体谅！

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3.11 两篇

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3.10 综合改好。
今天有事情，刚才改了，不好意思
请回改一下，辛苦~