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发表于 2011-3-12 03:02:43 |只看该作者
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In the lecture, the professor makes several points about the three methods to protect the endangered Torreya taxifoha, and the professor suggests none of these methods is satisfied to solve the problem, challenging what is stated in the reading passage that the three ways can address the decline of Torreya.

First, the professor argues that
reestablishing Torreya in the same location is unlikely successful, as the global warming results in the increasing temperature, extending dry area in the state of Florida, and the microclimate is inevitably influenced by it.
However, by contrast,
重复了 the reading passage states that Northern Florida's microclimate is very favorable for Torreya.
看了你的 我才明白听力里讲的怎么回事 学习了

Second, according the professor, moving Torreya to an entirely different location also can't work well; because the example the professor illustrates shows the relocation will cause unpredictable outcomes. Torreya may spread quickly and kill many local endangered species. And this point is totally contradicts the view in the reading passage.不知道这样算不算由例子里推出的自己的观点 最好就直接沿用听力里说的那个例子 不过也许是我没听好呵呵

Finally, another point the professor uses to cast doubt on the reading passage is that the research centers can not hold enough Torreya to keep the genetically diverse, which is vital for trees to resist disease. However, this point differs that it can ensure the continued survival of the species, demonstrated in the reading passage.我这个点完全听错了 原来是因为遗传问题 大囧

So, the contents in the reading passage are totally jeopardized by the professor from three aspects and the professor has totally different ideas on the topics made in the reading passage.

写的很好 学习了

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发表于 2011-3-13 08:58:19 |只看该作者
In the lecture, a part-time buzzer makes several points that the buzzing is often misleading and gives wrong impression to the customers, by telling his personal experience from three aspects, challenging what are stated in the reading passage that buzzing is not trustful.

First of all, the buzzer claims that a buzzers are real users of a certain product, only when they feel the product is good, will they agree to be buzzers of the company; and what they say on the phone are truth. However, the reading passage holds the point that buzzers just praise products for money, and ignore the real information of the products.

Second, according to the buzzer, customers will ask him questions, only if they think the answers are good, will they buy the products. By contrast, the reading passage argues that buzzers claims are questionable, and they can do harm to the consumers.

Finally, another point the buzzer uses to cast doubt on the reading passage is that it is stupid to think that the civilization will become bad just for the buzzers' claim. On the contrary, as customers ask more questions about the products, more trust will be added on each other. However, this point differs that buzzing may cause the wide spread of mistrust and impair the social relationship, demonstrated in the reading passage.(第三点中不是问了很多问题才会建立信任,是用好的他们的产品,就又有个good experience,才会产生信任,并且也对别人open to people比如说电话服务.)

Thus it can be inferred that the buzzer challenges the reading passage by giving reasons as to why he thinks buzzers are misunderstood and the really can do good to the customers.
.大体的点都写到了,写的挺好,从你的句式我也学到了很多....学习了

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