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1.Overview of the Analytical Writing Section     

   The analytical writing section measures your critical thinking and analytical writing skills.  It assesses your ability to articulate and support complex ideas, analyze an argument, and sustain a focused and coherent discussion.  It does not assess specific content knowledge.

AW综述:大M最早听一些过来人说的,越早考AW越好,早考完早结束,一方面可以为笔试做充分准备,另一方面AW与你自身长期的知识积累,思考方式相关更加密切,只要有足够的本钱,甚至你红宝没有背透,都可以临时上场,用有限的词汇堆垛起严丝合缝的辩证。而根据INTRO的介绍,AW主要衡量critical thinking and analytical writing skills ,而且明确表示了does not assess specific content knowledge 更证明思想和严密占了更关键的地位。


2.Preparing for the Analytical Writing Section      

Everyone—even the most practiced and confident of writers—should spend some time preparing for the analytical writing section before arriving at the test center.  It is important to review the skills measured, how the section is scored, scoring guides and score level descriptions, sample topics, scored sample essay responses, and reader commentary.   

The topics in the analytical writing section relate to a broad range of subjects—from the fine arts and
humanities to the social and physical sciences—but no topic requires specific content knowledge.  In fact, each topic has been field-tested to ensure that it possesses several important characteristics, including the following:

•  GRE test takers, regardless of their field of study or special interests, understood the topic and
could easily discuss it.
•  The topic elicited the kinds of complex thinking and persuasive writing that university faculty
consider important for success in graduate school.
•  The responses were varied in content and in the way the writers developed their ideas.  

AW的准备工作:时常要多重复的最关键的几处,评分标准,评分等级描述,范文,以及评语。题目不会太偏怪难,作者的思路拓展和写作内容将对最终的评判起重要作用。


3.Test-Taking Strategies for the Analytical Writing Section      


It is important to budget your time.  Within the 45-minute time limit for the Issue task, you will need to allow sufficient time to choose one of the two topics, think about the issue you've chosen, plan a respons and compose your essay.  Within the 30-minute time limit for the Argument task, you will need to allow sufficient time to analyze the argument, plan a critique, and compose your response.  Although GRE readers understand the time constraints under which you write and will consider your response a "first draft," you still want it to be the best possible example of your writing that you can produce under the testing circumstances.   

Save a few minutes at the end of each timed task to check for obvious errors.  Although an occasional spelling or grammatical error will not affect your score, severe and persistent errors will detract from the overall effectiveness of your writing and thus lower your score.

Following the Analytical Writing section, you will have the opportunity to take a 10-minute break.  There is a one-minute break between the other test sections.  You might want to replenish your supply of scratchpaper during each scheduled break.   

AW考场策略:如上,见仁见智。时间分配要合理,同时也要注意千虑难免一失,单词的拼写错误或缺失,或者别的都会多少影响到你的整体,所以要避免不必要的手误给我们带来损失。


4.How the Analytical Writing Section is Scored      

打分的规则,READER和 e-rater的打分流程。主要是说明了评判分数的公正公平客观以及对抄袭文章,剽窃整体思想的处理和警告。
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5.Present Your Perspective on an Issue Task

Understanding the Issue Task

The "Present Your Perspective on an Issue" task assesses your ability to think critically about a topic of
general interest and to clearly express your thoughts about it in writing.  Each topic, presented in quotation
marks, makes a claim about an issue that test takers can discuss from various perspectives and apply to
many different situations or conditions.  Your task is to present a compelling case for your own position on
the issue.
  Be sure to read the claim carefully and think about it from several points of view, considering the
complexity of ideas associated with those perspectives.
  Then, make notes about the position you want to
develop and list the main reasons and examples that you could use to support that position.


(关键词 COMPELLING.无关对错,只求有说服力,甚至有时不妨指鹿为马,只要能自圆其说。)


The Issue task allows considerable latitude in the way you respond to the claim.  Although it is important
that you address the central issue, you are free to take any approach you wish.  For example, you might

•  agree absolutely with the claim, disagree completely, or agree with some parts and not others
•  question the assumptions the statement seems to be making
•  qualify any of its terms, especially if the way you define or apply a term is important to
developing your perspective on the issue
•  point out why the claim is valid in some situations but not in others
•  evaluate points of view that contrast with your own perspective
•  develop your position with reasons that are supported by several relevant examples or by a single
extended example
   

The GRE readers scoring your response are not looking for a "right" answer—in fact, there is no correct
position to take.  Instead, the readers are evaluating the skill with which you articulate and develop an
argument to support your position on the issue.

(给出的切入点建议:完全同意或完全反对,部分同意,应该在文章第一段即得体现出态度,要清晰而鲜明。同时提及一些别的论证方式,如举例论证,反证,特殊情境说明等等,正面,侧面,反面等多方面下手,力求无懈可击。)

Understanding the Context for Writing:  Purpose and Audience

The Issue task is an exercise in critical thinking and persuasive writing.  The purpose of this task is to
determine how well you can develop a compelling argument supporting your own perspective on an issue
and to effectively communicate that argument in writing to an academic audience.
  Your audience consists
of college and university faculty who are trained as GRE readers to apply the scoring criteria identified in
the scoring guide for “Present Your Perspective on an Issue" (see page 27).

To get a clearer idea of how GRE readers apply the Issue scoring criteria to actual responses, you should
review scored sample Issue essay responses and readers' commentaries.  The sample responses, particularly
at the 5 and 6 score levels, will show you a variety of successful strategies for organizing, developing, and
communicating a persuasive argument.  The readers' commentaries discuss specific aspects of analysis and
writing,
such as the use of examples, development and support, organization, language fluency, and word
choice.
  For each response, the commentary points out aspects that are particularly persuasive as well as
any that detract from the overall effectiveness of the essay.

(对多读官方范文的建议:要对6分5分的SAMPLE着重研究,而READER对WRITER的评语更要深入理解,以体会AW的考察方向。
囧,上午饿晕了头脑没看到as well as..Readers 会在评论中同时指出非常有说服力的观点,同时削弱整体效果的那些方面也会指出。)


Preparing for the Issue Task

Because the Issue task is meant to assess the persuasive writing skills that you have developed throughout
your education, it has been designed neither to require any particular course of study nor to advantage
students with a particular type of training.   

Many college textbooks on composition offer advice on persuasive writing that you might find useful, but
even this advice might be more technical and specialized than you need for the Issue task.  You will not be
expected to know specific critical thinking or writing terms or strategies; instead, you should be able to use
reasons, evidence, and examples to support your position on an issue.
  Suppose, for instance, that an Issue
topic asks you to consider whether it is important for government to provide financial support for art
museums.  If your position is that government should fund art museums, you might support your position
by discussing the reasons art is important and explain that museums are public places where art is available
to anyone.  On the other hand, if your position is that government should not support museums, you might
point out that, given limited governmental funds, art museums are not as deserving of governmental
funding as are other, more socially important, institutions.  Or, if you are in favor of government funding
for art museums only under certain conditions, you might focus on the artistic criteria, cultural concerns, or
political conditions that you think should determine how—or whether—art museums receive government
funds.  It is not your position that matters so much as the critical thinking skills you display in developing
your position.

(找准目标,不必大费周章,多读INTRO紧跟ETS的考试方向才是有效的捷径。)

An excellent way to prepare for the Issue task is to practice writing on some of the published topics.  There
is no "best" approach: some people prefer to start practicing without regard to the 45-minute time limit;
others prefer to take a "timed test" first and practice within the time limit.  No matter which approach you
take when you practice the Issue task, you should review the task directions, then

•  carefully read the claim made in the topic and make sure you understand the issue involved; if it
seems unclear, discuss it with a friend or teacher
•  think about the issue in relation to your own ideas and experiences, to events you have read about
or observed, and to people you have known; this is the knowledge base from which you will
develop compelling reasons and examples in your argument that reinforce, negate, or qualify the
claim in some way
•  decide what position on the issue you want to take and defend—remember you are free to agree or
disagree completely or to agree with some parts or some applications but not others
•  decide what compelling evidence (reasons and examples) you can use to support your position  


(继续给出的一些TIPS。提醒WRITERS要申清题目,自由发挥,选择自己擅长的题目方向。)

Remember that this is a task in critical thinking and persuasive writing.  Therefore, you might find it
helpful to explore the complexity of a claim in one of the topics by asking yourself the following questions:

•  What, precisely, is the central issue?
•  Do I agree with all or with any part of the claim?  Why or why not?
•  Does the claim make certain assumptions?  If so, are they reasonable?
•  Is the claim valid only under certain conditions?  If so, what are they?
•  Do I need to explain how I interpret certain terms or concepts used in the claim?
•  If I take a certain position on the issue, what reasons support my position?
•  What examples—either real or hypothetical—could I use to illustrate those reasons and advance
my point of view?  Which examples are most compelling?




Once you have decided on a position to defend, consider the perspective of others who might not agree
with your position.  Ask yourself:

•  What reasons might someone use to refute or undermine my position?
•  How should I acknowledge or defend against those views in my essay?


(明确自己的重心,表达出自己的态度之后还要站在自己的对面,用批判的眼光审查自己有否大的纰漏,并找出反驳和自圆其说的证据。)


To plan your response, you might want to summarize your position and make brief notes about how you
will support the position you're going to take.
When you've done this, look over your notes and decide how
you will organize your response.  Then write a response developing your position on the issue.  Even if you
don't write a full response, you should find it helpful to practice with a few of the Issue topics and to sketch
out your possible responses.  After you have practiced with some of the topics, try writing responses to
some of the topics within the 45-minute time limit so that you have a good idea of how to use your time in
the actual test.

(列个简单的纲领的建议,养成习惯后对合理分配考试时间很有帮助,而且利于个人的思路拓展。)

It would probably be helpful to get some feedback on your response from an instructor who teaches critical
thinking or writing or to trade papers on the same topic with other students and discuss one another's
responses in relation to the scoring guide.  Try to determine how each paper meets or misses the criteria for
each score point in the guide.  Comparing your own response to the scoring guide will help you see how
and where you might need to improve.

(写作交流。鉴于每人对评分规则的理解不同,各补长短,共同进步。)

Deciding Which Issue Topic to Choose

Remember that the General Test will contain two Issue topics from the published pool; you must choose
one of these two.  Because the 45-minute timing begins when you first see the two topics, you should not
spend too much time making a decision.  Instead, try to choose fairly quickly the issue that you feel better
prepared to discuss.

Before making a choice, read each topic carefully.  Then decide on which topic you could develop a more
effective and well-reasoned argument.  In making this decision, you might ask yourself:

•  Which topic do I find more interesting or engaging?
•  Which topic more closely relates to my own academic studies or other experiences?
•  On which topic can I more clearly explain and defend my perspective?
•  On which topic can I more readily think of strong reasons and examples to support my position?

(一些快速选择适合自己发挥的TOPIC的建议,哪个与自身经历和所学专业更加相关,哪个更适合自己的发挥和辩证,哪个自己更能举出强有力的例子来延伸自己的观点。)
Your answers to these questions should help you make your choice.

The Form of Your Response

You are free to organize and develop your response in any way that you think will effectively communicate
your ideas about the issue.  Your response may, but need not, incorporate particular writing strategies  
learned in English composition or writing-intensive college courses.  GRE readers will not be looking for a
particular developmental strategy or mode of writing; in fact, when GRE readers are trained, they review
hundreds of Issue responses that, although highly diverse in content and form, display similar levels of
critical thinking and persuasive writing.  Readers will see, for example, some Issue responses at the 6 score
level that begin by briefly summarizing the writer's position on the issue and then explicitly announcing the
main points to be argued.  
They will see others that lead into the writer's position by making a prediction,
asking a series of questions, describing a scenario, or defining critical terms in the quotation.  The readers
know that a writer can earn a high score by giving multiple examples or by presenting a single, extended
example.
  Look at the sample Issue responses, particularly at the 5 and 6 score levels, to see how other
writers have successfully developed and organized their arguments.

(对READERS的培训时的重点,对高分文章的要求。开篇要简洁地总结和标明态度观点,明确地提出论点。高分的产生源于多个恰当的例子或者一个充分延展的好例子。举例论证说明的重要地位凸显。)

You should use as many or as few paragraphs as you consider appropriate for your argument—for example,
you will probably need to create a new paragraph whenever your discussion shifts to a new cluster of ideas.  
What matters is not the number of examples, the number of paragraphs, or the form your argument takes
but, rather, the cogency of your ideas about the issue and the clarity and skill with which you communicate
those ideas to academic readers.

(例子在精在准不在多,思想的肯切,流畅清晰和思想的表达方式,对于READERS有更强的吸引力。)


Sample Issue Topic
“In our time, specialists of all kinds are highly overrated.  We need more generalists—people who can
provide broad perspectives."

Strategies for this Topic

This claim raises several related questions: What does it mean to be a generalist or a specialist, and what
value do they have for society? Does society actually need more generalists, and are specialists, in fact,
“highly overrated?”  

There are several basic positions you could take on this issue: Yes, society needs more generalists and
places too high a value on specialists.  No, the opposite is true.  Or, it depends on various factors.  Or, both
groups are important in today’s culture; neither is overvalued.  Your analysis might draw examples from a
particular society or country, from one or more areas of society, or from various situations.  It might focus
on the role of generalists and specialists in relation to communications, transportation, politics, information,
or technology.  Any of these approaches is valid, so long as you use relevant reasons and examples to
support your position.

Before you stake out a position, take a few moments to reread the claim.  To analyze it, consider questions
such as these:  

•  What are the main differences between specialists and generalists?  What are the strong points of
each?
•  Do these differences always hold in various professions or situations?  Could there be some
specialists, for example, who also need to have very broad knowledge and general abilities to
perform their work well?
•  How do generalists and specialists function in your field?
•  What value do you think society places on specialists and generalists?  Are specialists overvalued
in some situations, and not in others?   
•  Does society really need more generalists than it has?  If so, what needs would they serve?  

Now you can organize your thoughts into two groups:

•  Reasons and examples to support the claim  
•  Reasons and examples to support an opposing point of view
   
If you find one view clearly more persuasive than the other, consider developing an argument from that
perspective.  As you build your argument, keep in mind the other points, which you could argue against.  

If both groups have compelling points, consider developing a position supporting, not the stated claim, but
a more limited or more complex claim.  Then you can use reasons and examples from both sides to justify
your position.


(实例演习,选择自己更容易发挥的一方,AGREE OR DISAGREE。当感觉两个方向自己都能做出COMPELLING的言论时,可以拓展题目,发表自己的观点,提出在自己的限制条件下两者可以和谐共处。这样不落俗套,可以使READERS在文海茫茫中感觉耳目一新,也更容易得到青睐。)
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6.Analyze an Argument Task

Understanding the Argument Task

The "Analyze an Argument" task assesses your ability to understand, analyze, and evaluate arguments and
to clearly convey your analysis in writing.
The task consists of a brief passage in which the author makes a
case for some course of action or interpretation of events by presenting claims backed by reasons and
evidence.  Your task is to discuss the logical soundness of the author's case by critically examining the line
of reasoning and the use of evidence.
  This task requires you to read the argument very carefully.  You
might want to read it more than once and possibly make brief notes about points you want to develop more
fully in your response.  In reading the argument, you should pay special attention to

•  what is offered as evidence, support, or proof
•  what is explicitly stated, claimed, or concluded
•  what is assumed or supposed, perhaps without justification or proof
•  what is not stated, but necessarily follows from what is stated


(明确考察目标:衡量WRITER对论点的理解,分析和评估,并成功地把思想转移到文章中的能力。需要根据题目中所给的内容和得出的结论,找出其中的纰漏,然后苛刻地根据自己的发现来辩驳原文结论。得理不饶人,无理也要搅三分。)

In addition, you should consider the structure of the argument—the way in which these elements are linked
together to form a line of reasoning; that is, you should recognize the separate, sometimes implicit steps in
the thinking process and consider whether the movement from each one to the next is logically sound.  In
tracing this line, look for transition words and phrases that suggest that the author is attempting to make a
logical connection (e.g., however, thus, therefore, evidently, hence, in conclusion).

An important part of performing well on the Argument task is remembering what you are not being asked
to do.  You are not being asked to discuss whether the statements in the argument are true or accurate;
instead, you are being asked whether conclusions and inferences are validly drawn from the statements.  
You are not being asked to agree or disagree with the position stated; instead, you are being asked to
comment on the thinking that underlies the position stated.  You are not being asked to express your own
views on the subject being discussed (as you were in the Issue task); instead, you are being asked to
evaluate the logical soundness of an argument of another writer and, in doing so, to demonstrate the critical
thinking, perceptive reading, and analytical writing skills that university faculty consider important for
success in graduate school.


(非常重要的几点注意事项,需要认清楚ARGUMENT的本质要求,是对原文的挑肥拣瘦和鸡蛋里挑骨头,想方设法找到纰漏的地方来进行攻击(即使你认为结论挺合理的),而不能FREE地表达你的想法。)


"Analyze an Argument" is primarily a critical thinking task requiring a written response.  Consequently, the
analytical skills displayed in your critique carry great weight in determining your score.  

Understanding the Context for Writing:  Purpose and Audience

The purpose of the task is to see how well equipped you are to insightfully analyze an argument written by
someone else and to effectively communicate your critique in writing to an academic audience.  Your
audience consists of college and university faculty who are trained as GRE readers to apply the scoring
criteria identified in the scoring guide for the “Analyze an Argument” task (see page 28).

To get a clearer idea of how GRE readers apply the Argument scoring criteria to actual essays, you should
review scored sample Argument essay responses and readers' commentaries.  The sample responses,
particularly at the 5 and 6 score levels, will show you a variety of successful strategies for organizing and
developing an insightful critique.  You will also see many examples of particularly effective uses of
language.  The readers' commentaries discuss specific aspects of analytical writing, such as cogency of
ideas, development and support, organization, syntactic variety, and facility with language.  These
commentaries will point out aspects that are particularly effective and insightful as well as any that detract
from the overall effectiveness of the responses.

Preparing for the Argument Task

Because the Argument task is meant to assess analytical writing and informal reasoning skills that you have
developed throughout your education, it has been designed so as not to require any specific course of study
or to advantage students with a particular type of training.  Many college textbooks on rhetoric and
composition have sections on informal logic and critical thinking that might prove helpful, but even these
might be more detailed and technical than the task requires.  You will not be expected to know methods of
analysis or technical terms.  For instance, in one topic an elementary school principal might conclude that
the new playground equipment has improved student attendance because absentee rates have declined
since it was installed.  You will not need to see that the principal has committed the post hoc, ergo propter
hoc fallacy; you will simply need to see that there are other possible explanations for the improved
attendance, to offer some common-sense examples, and perhaps to suggest what would be necessary to
verify the conclusion.  For instance, absentee rates might have decreased because the climate was mild.  
This would have to be ruled out in order for the principal’s conclusion to be valid.

Although you do not need to know special analytical techniques and terminology, you should be familiar
with the directions for the Argument task and with certain key concepts, including the following:

•  alternative explanation—a possible competing version of what might have caused the events in
question; an alternative explanation undercuts or qualifies the original explanation because it too
can account for the observed facts
•  analysis—the process of breaking something (e.g., an argument) down into its component parts in
order to understand how they work together to make up the whole; also a presentation, usually in
writing, of the results of this process
•  argument—a claim or a set of claims with reasons and evidence offered as support; a line of
reasoning meant to demonstrate the truth or falsehood of something
•  assumption—a belief, often unstated or unexamined, that someone must hold in order to maintain
a particular position; something that is taken for granted but that must be true in order for the
conclusion to be true
•  conclusion—the end point reached by a line of reasoning, valid if the reasoning is sound; the
resulting assertion
•  counterexample—an example, real or hypothetical, that refutes or disproves a statement in the
argument

An excellent way to prepare for the "Analyze an Argument" task is to practice writing on some of the
published Argument topics.  There is no one way to practice that is best for everyone.  Some prefer to start
practicing without adhering to the 30-minute time limit.  If you follow this approach, take all the time you
need to analyze the argument.  No matter which approach you take, you should   

•  carefully read the argument—you might want to read it over more than once
•  identify as many of its claims, conclusions, and underlying assumptions as possible
•  think of as many alternative explanations and counterexamples as you can
•  think of what additional evidence might weaken or lend support to the claims
•  ask yourself what changes in the argument would make the reasoning more sound

(完成ARGUMENT的一些官方建议,仔细审查信息,总结出其结论,越多越好;归结出在同等条件下有可能出现的不同结果,以及相反的例子,越多越好。想出哪些可以削弱或加强结论的证据,并思考如何改变会使结论更加可信。)

Write down each of these thoughts as a brief note.  When you've gone as far as you can with your analysis,
look over the notes and put them in a good order for discussion (perhaps by numbering them).  Then write a
critique by fully developing each of your points in turn.  Even if you choose not to write a full essay
response, you should find it very helpful to practice analyzing a few of the arguments and sketching out
your responses.  When you become quicker and more confident, you should practice writing some
Argument responses within the 30-minute time limit so that you will have a good sense of how to pace
yourself in the actual test.  For example, you will not want to discuss one point so exhaustively or to
provide so many equivalent examples that you run out of time to make your other main points.

You might want to get feedback on your response(s) from a writing instructor, a philosophy teacher, or
someone who emphasizes critical thinking in his or her course.  It can also be very informative to trade
papers on the same topic with fellow students and discuss one another's responses in terms of the scoring
guide.  Focus not so much on giving the "right scores" as on seeing how the papers meet or miss the
performance standards for each score point and what you therefore need to do in order to improve.

(同ISSUE的INTRO大体相同,重在与人交换思想,旁观者清。)

How to Interpret Numbers, Percentages, and Statistics in Argument Topics

Some arguments contain numbers, percentages, or statistics that are offered as evidence in support of the
argument's conclusion.  For example, an argument might claim that a certain community event is less
popular this year than it was last year because only 100 people attended this year in comparison with 150
last year, a 33 percent decline in attendance.  It is important to remember that you are not being asked to do
a mathematical task with the numbers, percentages, or statistics.  Instead you should evaluate these as
evidence that is intended to support the conclusion.  In the example above, the conclusion is that a
community event has become less popular.  You should ask yourself: does the difference between 100
people and 150 people support that conclusion?  Note that, in this case, there are other possible
explanations; for example, the weather might have been much worse this year, this year's event might have
been held at an inconvenient time, the cost of the event might have gone up this year, or there might have
been another popular event this year at the same time.  Each of these could explain the difference in
attendance, and thus would weaken the conclusion that the event was "less popular."  Similarly,
percentages might support or weaken a conclusion depending on what actual numbers the percentages
represent.  Consider the claim that the drama club at a school deserves more funding because its
membership has increased by 100 percent.  This 100 percent increase could be significant if there had been
100 members and now there are 200 members, whereas the increase would be much less significant if there
had been 5 members and now there are 10.  Remember that any numbers, percentages, or statistics in
Argument topics are used only as evidence in support of a conclusion, and you should always consider
whether they actually support the conclusion.

(注意题目中的数字游戏,以及可能造成数据变化的原因,然后思考其中的数字是否真正可以推出给出的结论.)
The Form of Your Response

You are free to organize and develop your critique in any way that you think will effectively communicate
your analysis of the argument.  Your response may, but need not, incorporate particular writing strategies
learned in English composition or writing-intensive college courses.  GRE readers will not be looking for a
particular developmental strategy or mode of writing.  In fact, when faculty are trained to be GRE readers,
they review hundreds of Argument responses that, although highly diverse in content and form, display
similar levels of critical thinking and analytical writing.  Readers will see, for example, some essays at the
6 score level that begin by briefly summarizing the argument and then explicitly stating and developing the
main points of the critique.  The readers know that a writer can earn a high score by analyzing and
developing several points in a critique or by identifying a central flaw in the argument and developing that   
critique extensively.
  You might want to look at the sample Argument responses, particularly at the 5 and 6
score levels, to see how other writers have successfully developed and organized their critiques.

(READERS对分析出多个不同的批评点或重点指出一个主要的纰漏进行深入讨论的文章更加青睐,分数也会更高。)

You should make choices about format and organization that you think support and enhance the overall
effectiveness of your critique.  This means using as many or as few paragraphs as you consider appropriate
for your critique—for example, creating a new paragraph when your discussion shifts to a new point of
analysis.  You might want to organize your critique around the organization of the argument itself,
discussing the argument line by line.  Or you might want to first point out a central questionable
assumption and then move on to discuss related flaws in the argument's line of reasoning.  Similarly, you
might want to use examples if they help illustrate an important point in your critique or move your
discussion forward (remember, however, that, in terms of your ability to perform the Argument task
effectively, it is your critical thinking and analytical writing, not your ability to come up with examples,
that is being assessed).  What matters is not the form the response takes, but how insightfully you analyze
the argument and how articulately you communicate your analysis to academic readers within the context
of the task.

Sample Argument Topic  

Hospital statistics regarding people who go to the emergency room after roller skating accidents indicate
the need for more protective equipment.  Within this group of people, 75 percent of those who had
accidents in streets or parking lots were not wearing any protective clothing (helmets, knee pads, etc.) or
any light-reflecting material (clip-on lights, glow-in-the-dark wrist pads, etc.).  Clearly, these statistics
indicate that by investing in high-quality protective gear and reflective equipment, roller skaters will greatly
reduce their risk of being severely injured in an accident.

Strategies for this Topic

This argument cites a particular hospital statistic to support the general conclusion that “investing in high-
quality protective gear and reflective equipment” will reduce the risk of being severely injured in a roller
skating accident.   

In developing your analysis, you should ask yourself whether the hospital statistic actually supports the
conclusion.  You might want to ask yourself such questions as:

•  What percentage of all roller skaters goes to the emergency room after roller skating accidents?
•  Are the people who go to the emergency room after roller skating accidents representative of roller
skaters in general?
•  Are there people who are injured in roller skating accidents who do not go to the emergency
room?
•  Were the roller skaters who went to the emergency room severely injured?
•  Were the 25 percent of roller skaters who were wearing protective gear injured just as severely as
the 75 percent who were not wearing the gear?
•  Are streets and parking lots inherently more dangerous for roller skating than other places?
•  Would mid-quality gear and equipment be just as effective as high-quality gear and equipment in
reducing the risk of severe injury while roller skating?
•  Are there factors other than gear and equipment—e.g., weather conditions, visibility, skill of the
skaters—that might be more closely correlated with the risk of roller skating injuries?

(非常全面的分析,从各个角度,需要多好防护装备的质量,伤势的程度,以及两者是不是只有入住EMERGENCY中,不戴安全护具的入住比率是比较高的,等等等等,仔细审查每一句话,对文中的每个条件都给出疑问,列好纲领,一篇好的ARGUMENT跃然纸上。)


Considering possible answers to questions such as these will help you identify assumptions, alternative
explanations, and weaknesses that you can develop in your critique of the argument.
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Nokia and Microsoft form partnership


Rory Cellan-Jones asks Nokia's Stephen Elop and Microsoft's Steve Ballmer why they chose to form an alliance
Nokia has joined forces with Microsoft in an attempt to regain ground lost to the iPhone and Android-based devices.
The deal will see Nokia use the Windows phone operating system for its smartphones, the company said.
It means that Nokia's existing operating systems will be sidelined.
Speaking at the launch of the partnership, Nokia's chief executive Stephen Elop revealed that there would be "substantial" job losses as a result of the tie-up.
Nokia will remain "first and foremost...a Finnish company. Finland is our home and will remain our home," he said.
But job losses around the world, including in Finland, will be inevitable, he added.


Windows first


Speaking about the new partnership with Microsoft, Mr Elop said that "the game has changed from a battle of devices to a war of ecosystems".
"An ecosystem with Microsoft and Nokia has unrivalled scale around the globe," he said.
Microsoft's chief executive Steve Ballmer was also present at the launch, underlining the importance of the deal to the computing giant.
"Nokia and Microsoft working together can drive innovation that is at the boundary of hardware, software and services," he said.
Microsoft's Bing will power Nokia's search services, while Nokia Maps would be a core part of Microsoft's mapping services.
The new strategy means Nokia's existing smartphone operating systems will be gradually sidelined.
Symbian, which runs on most of the company's current devices will become a "franchise platform", although the company expects to sell approximately 150 million more Symbian devices in future.

"It is a transition from Symbian to Windows phone as our primary smartphone platform," said Mr Elop.
Windows may not be the exclusive operating system for Nokia tablets though.

We reserve the right to introduce tablets using other platforms, including ones we may be working on internally," he said.
There was no specific announcement about when the first Windows-powered Nokia phone will be available.
Mr Elop revealed that the firm did consider a tie-up with Google's Android operating system.
"We spent time with our colleagues at Google and explored the Google ecosystem but we felt we would have difficulty differentiating within that ecosystem," he said.
It was also revealed that talks with Microsoft only began in November, illustrating how quickly the deal has been pushed through.

Future clashes



The move away from Symbian is a brave decision for Nokia, according to experts.
"This is a clear admission that Nokia's own-platform strategy has faltered," said Ben Wood, an analyst with research firm CCS: Insight.
"Microsoft is the big winner in this deal, but there are no silver bullets for either company given the strength of iPhone and Google's Android," he added.
Nokia's share of the smartphone market fell from 38% to 28% in 2010, according to monitoring firm IDC.
Nokia's upcoming Meego operating system will also be sidelined.
According to the company statement: "MeeGo will place increased emphasis on longer-term market exploration of next-generation devices."
The MeeGo platform was expected to form the core of Nokia's future smartphone and tablet strategy.
The company says it still plans to ship one Meego device by the end of 2011.
For Magnus Rehle, the Nordic managing director of research firm Greenwich Consulting, Nokia may have difficulty juggling its three operating systems: Windows, Symbian and MeeGo.
"Three platforms is a lot to work with. I'm not sure there is room for so many platforms," he said.
And, as with any tie-up, there could be clashes between the two firms, he said.
Earlier this week Nokia chief executive Stephen Elop sent a memo to staff warning that the company was in crisis.
The memo, published first by technology website Engadget, said that the mobile giant was standing on a "burning platform".
"Elop has to convince the best people to stay and some people will inevitably be jumping off the burning platform," said Mr Rehle.
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revealing        rI`vi:lIN        adj.有启迪作用的

rival        5raivEl        n.竞争者, 对手        v.竞争, 对抗, 相匹敌==》        unrivalled 无敌的        
        
scale        skeil        n.刻度,衡量,比例,数值范围,比例尺,天平,等级        vt.依比例决定,攀登,测量        vi.剥落,生水垢,重,攀登,衡量               

execute        5eksikju:t        vt.执行, 实行, 完成, 处死, 制成, [律]经签名盖章等手续使(证书)生效        ==》executive,        adj 有执行能力的        n.执行人员

reserve        ri5zE:v        n.储备(物), 储藏量, 预备队        vt.储备, 保存, 保留, 预定, 预约                        
        
illustrate        5ilEstreit        vt.举例说明, 图解, 加插图于, 阐明        vi.举例                        


falter        5fC:ltE        vt.支吾地说, 结巴地讲出        vi.支吾, 蹒跚踉跄, 摇摆, (声音)颤抖        n.颤抖, 支吾, 踌躇               

clash        klAF        n.冲突, 撞击声, 抵触        v.(使)发出撞击声, 猛撞, 冲突                        

convince        kEn5vins        vt.使确信, 使信服
                        
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对AW的启示:

1.NOKIA作为手机行业的巨头,市场占有率长期稳居第一位,但是在smartphone的市场上却被iphone压制,市场占有率直线下降,证明了科技含量才是销售量的保证,死守旧市场不知变通将会被淘汰;

2.NOKIA在自身发展的SYMBIAN系统被市场不太认可的情况下,与MICROSOFT联手开发新的系统,如果能够开拓新的市场,则可提出论点1:情况有变时及时调整策略,可化腐朽为神奇,枯木再逢春,思变通方能长盛不衰;若新市场依旧不景气,则可提出论点2:强强联手未必效果相乘,互补长短绝非易事,1+1>2的神奇并非唾手可得。
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继续原文抄抄抄,鄙视懒惰的我。
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Key breast cancer 'driver' gene found

ZNF703 is the first "oncogene" to be discovered in five years.
It is overactive in around one in 12 breast cancers, and could account for up to 4,000 UK cases a year.
Cancer Research UK, whose scientists carried out the work, said the gene was a "prime candidate" for the development of new breast cancer drugs.
An oncogene is one which would normally help instruct healthy cells to divide but if it becomes overactive, it upsets the normal checks and balances that control that process.
That damage is described as being "like a car's accelerator becoming stuck down", and the cell and all its daughter cells are permanently instructed to divide.
Her2 - another oncogene - is already tested for. The drug Herceptin was developed to treat Her2 positive breast cancers.
Elimination
Scientists at Cancer Research UK's Cambridge Research Institute and the British Columbia Cancer Agency in Vancouver, Canada carried out the study, which is published in EMBO Molecular Medicine,
They looked at gene activity in 1,172 breast tumour samples, as well as looking at breast cancer cells grown in the lab.

They were able to eliminate genes until there was only the ZNF703 gene left within a region on chromosome 8 that was overactive in all the samples tested.
And in two patients studied, ZNF703 was the only gene shown to be overactive, showing it was driving the development of the cancer.
Professor Carlos Caldas, of the Cambridge Research Institute, who led the research, said: "Scientists first discovered this region of DNA may be harbouring genes linked to the development of breast cancer 20 years ago.
"But it's only with the technology we have today that we've been able to narrow down the search sufficiently to pinpoint the gene responsible."
He added: "Crucially, testing whether this gene is overactive in a patient's tumour could help highlight those more likely to be resistant to standard hormone therapies, helping to make sure the right drugs are matched to the right patient."
Dr Lesley Walker, director of cancer information at Cancer Research UK, said: "This is the first gene of its kind to be discovered in breast cancer for five years.
"This is exciting because it's a prime candidate for the development of new breast cancer drugs designed specifically to target tumours in which this gene is overactive.
"Hopefully this will lead to more effective cancer treatments in the future."
Dr Rachel Greig, of Breakthrough Breast Cancer said the research was "a vital step in understanding the genes that drive the growth of some types of breast cancer".
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account for   对。。。。有责任的

prime        praim        n.最初, 青春, 精华        adj.主要的, 最初的, 有青春活力的, 最好的, 第一流的, 根本的, [数]素数的        v.预先准备好, <口>让人吃(喝)足, 灌注, 填装        

candidate        5kAndidit        n.候选人, 投考者        

instructive        in5strQktiv        adj.有益的, 教育性的        
instruct  vt. 指示 命令 教导 通知

permanent        5pE:mEnEnt        adj.永久的, 持久的        

eliminate        i5limineit        vt.排除, 消除        v.除去        

pinpoint        5pin7pCint        n.精确        adj.极微小的        v.查明        

crucial        5kru:FiEl, 5kru:FEl        adj.至关紧要的        

hormone        5hC:mEun        n.荷尔蒙, 激素        

vital        5vaitl        adj.生死攸关的, 重大的, 生命的, 生机的, 至关重要的, 所必需的
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