【1106】保4争5作文互改组 大家一起加油（已招满)

cecyleyueyueUID: 2753319

逛了逛大部分组都招满了，近期也没有自己合适的组，就主动开一个吧，诚征战友~~~
4月份的筒子们如果有之前没努力现在徒伤悲的，就振作起来吧，时间紧迫、时不我待。。。
虽然这个组名代表了对分数赤果果的、恬不知耻的追求，不过无论现在你写得多好或者多烂，只要心里也有的考好愿望就欢迎加入、一起行动起来！！
还有楼主也是新人，求斑竹们及有经验者指导帮助、分享组织计划等等资料！！

小组内容就是AW考试的练笔及互改，组员从开始练习写作到考试之时必须保证能完成写作及修改ISSUE至少20篇、ARGU至少10篇，每周不少于2篇习作，谢绝三天打渔两天晒网不能坚持者，谢绝不能及时修改别人作文者。
欢迎考试时间为4月份的战友们，中下旬优先，
想在冲刺阶段虐虐自己的大大地优先，
已经制定了可行的作文计划能贡献出来或者愿意一起做组长的破格保送进组~~

人数：5人左右 如果能有愿意一起做组长的可视情况扩容
要求：0 对GRE及AW考试有全面较深入了解 上过新东方或者看过大量复习资料 已经在上手写作的同学
         1 对小组目标保4争5表示认同 对AW分数有一定追求者
         2 愿意互相交流、探讨、分享作文思路，修改别人作文能保证认真有热情！
         3 有较强意志力并切实打算在已有基础上进行提高、冲刺
         4 能在其他组员“遇难”“受挫”时互相加油打气
         5 熟悉论坛功能 有自主自觉的学习态度

楼主大三 考试时间：4月17日
英语背景及写作风格： T100 作文28 文科 语言还行 思路和逻辑亟待提高（TAT）
QQ： 120100266
报名的按格式回帖或PM或QQ邮件我 并附一篇ISSUE习作 请大家理解支持啊谢谢谢谢啦

夏诺多UID: 2981956

4.20 北京
英语系
没考4，6级。。但是语法蛮菜的。。
除了上课就是复习gre。。
今天刚开始写了两篇.。。
qq434552212

guiyujuanUID: 2898340

4.3 广州
英语双学位
考了4级，592，六级还没出
除了上课都贡献给G了
今天刚开始写Issue。。。
qq.67865502:loveliness:

坚韧杀神UID: 2703697

4.27 新加坡
四级622 六级607
现正在新加坡交换，学习时间较多。
qq:514649666
一起加油！

ylucy1990UID: 3008689

4月底北美待定，
雅思7.5 作文6
今天刚开始准备GRE写作
qq: 18801526
楼主建议很好，大家互帮互助啊！

噜噜噜啦啦UID: 2982014

4月7日 广州
雅思7  作文6
四级634   六级未知
今天开始写提纲
qq 921952097
作文同时背词、准备阅读  每周只有四节课，其余时间奉献给GRE
一起加油！

april0515UID: 2997208

4月25日 广州
四级 550 六级未知
qq 245113175
同今天开始写提纲 ！

Adolph.hu.85UID: 2964075

4月13  广州
四级483   六级463
都是N年前考的了，记得不是很清楚，反正没上500.
QQ1062960430
开始复习5天了，今天开始写提纲，热切盼望与君同杀G！

sophie-zyUID: 2894667

4.7 北京
qq：332866358
Toefl writing: 25
上过新东方GRE强化班
强烈希望加入，尽快开始哈~

cecyleyueyueUID: 2753319

啊谢谢大家支持 现在人够多了 此楼以下不招啦暂时 楼上的都欢迎加群！
当然特别有热情或者能够一起当组长的可以再联络！

cecyleyueyueUID: 2753319

保4争5作文互改小组规定

废话不多说了，希望大家自觉自愿，一起加油，都能取得理想的成绩！

！本组规定：

每周1、3、5为ISSUE交作业日

每周2、4、6为ARGU交作业日

周日不安排作业，可修改、总结自己一周的作文

鼓励大家每天都能交作业，这样每周ISSUE、ARGU各三篇

最低要求为每周加起来习作不少于2篇，否则立踢无赦。

！交作业的时间和方式：

每晚11点前交作业，请大家在寄托开设自己的AW作文贴，每写完一次作业都发布到自己的作文贴中，再将当次作业的日期、楼层、帖子链接发布到主贴，以便组长分组以及其他组员前去修改。

！修改安排：

每天11:30之前由组长分组，按当日交作业人数分为2-3人一组互相修改习作，分组安排会公布在主贴和QQ群中。

分到一组的同学，要求3天之内将其他组员作文修改完毕，超过3天将黄牌警告，超过1周未修改或累计2次黄牌者立踢无赦。

若当日交作业人数不足2人，则由组长指定任意一名组员与其分为一组，帮助修改。

鼓励大家热心修改别人的作文，从修改的过程中相信你能学到自己写不出的短语、句子，以及自己想不到的思路、观点。

！2.26日更新的附加说明：
1、当你不能交完整作业的时候，建议可以每天按题目交详细提纲，要求完整列出1、2、3、4认真思考过的那种，包括例子也要加，以便和大家一起讨论、分析题目，在思维和知识面上互补，从而互相学习到更多东西。

**特别新增一个提纲贴，大家可以把自己每天写的作文提纲放上去，不一定是小组规定的题目，只要是题库里的都可以。标好通用顺序题号即可，I和A都可。关于提纲的讨论也都在提纲贴进行，主贴只用来交作业。

提纲贴传送门：https://bbs.gter.net/viewthread.php?tid=1235957&page=1#pid1774870586

2、完成其他组员作文的修改后，请将修改后的版本回复到他的作文贴中，方便检查大家是否都按规定进行了互相修改。

3、每晚11点之后准时分组，仁慈一点暂时接受占楼，但是需在第二天中午12点前提交作文，超过3次占楼但不按时补交的立踢无赦。

4、没有占楼的情况下，分组结束后提交的作业请自己解决修改事宜，可群邮寻求其他组员的热心帮助。

5、大家可以在10点左右尽量上线，一边等分组、一边参加QQ群里的讨论，分享讨论一天复习心得。

cecyleyueyueUID: 2753319

！写作内容：
我们主要写全国高频，ISSUE是从前30开始，尽量兼顾各主题分类。
第一周2.28--3.6
ISSUE的题目安排及分组由棉花糖负责，寄托ID：cecyleyueyue，
ARGU的题目安排及分组由guiyujuan负责，寄托ID：guiyujuan
大家对作文题目安排有什么问题和建议欢迎和我们联系。
注：题号全部为网络通用顺序

第一周安排
2.28 周一 ISSUE 138
"Only through mistakes can there be discovery or progress."

3.1  周二 ARGU 188
A new report suggests that men and women experience pain very differently from one another, and that doctors should consider these differences when prescribing pain medications. When researchers administered the same dosage of kappa opioids — a painkiller — to 28 men and 20 women who were having their wisdom teeth extracted, the women reported feeling much less pain than the men, and the easing of pain lasted considerably longer in women. This research suggests that kappa opioids should be prescribed for women whenever pain medication is required, whereas men should be given other kinds of pain medication. In addition, researchers should reevaluate the effects of all medications on men versus women.

3.2  周三 I 112
"Some educational systems emphasize the development of students' capacity for reasoning and logical thinking, but students would benefit more from an education that also taught them to explore their own emotions."

3.3  周四 A 53
Thirteen years ago, researchers studied a group of 25 infants who showed signs of mild distress when exposed to unfamiliar stimuli such as an unusual odor or a tape recording of an unknown voice. They discovered that these infants were more likely than other infants to have been conceived in early autumn, a time when their mothers' production of melatonin — a hormone known to affect some brain functions — would naturally increase in response to decreased daylight. In a follow-up study conducted earlier this year, more than half of these children — now teenagers — who had shown signs of distress identified themselves as shy. Clearly, increased levels of melatonin before birth cause shyness during infancy and this shyness continues into later life.

3.4  周五 I 170
"The surest indicator of a great nation is not the achievements of its rulers, artists, or scientists, but the general welfare of all its people."

3.5  周六 A 51
The following appeared in a medical newsletter. “Doctors have long suspected that secondary infections may keep some patients from healing quickly after severe muscle strain. This hypothesis has now been proved by preliminary results of a study of two groups of patients. The first group of patients, all being treated for muscle injuries by Dr. Newland, a doctor who specializes in sports medicine, took antibiotics regularly throughout their treatment. Their recuperation time was, on average, 40 percent quicker than typically expected. Patients in the second group, all being treated by Dr. Alton, a general physician, were given sugar pills, although the patients believed they were taking antibiotics. Their average recuperation time was not significantly reduced. Therefore, all patients who are diagnosed with muscle strain would be well advised to take antibiotics as part of their treatment. "

3.6  周日 休

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3.7 周一 I 17
"There are two types of laws: just and unjust. Every individual in a society has a responsibility to obey just laws and, even more importantly, to disobey and resist unjust laws."

3.8 周二 A 7
The following appeared in a letter to the editor of the Clearview newspaper. “In the next mayoral election, residents of Clearview should vote for Ann Green, who is a member of the Good Earth Coalition, rather than for Frank Braun, a member of the Clearview town council, because the current members are not protecting our environment. For example, during the past year the number of factories in Clearview has doubled, air pollution levels have increased, and the local hospital has treated 25 percent more patients with respiratory illnesses. If we elect Ann Green, the environmental problems in Clearview will certainly be solved."

3.9 周三 I 56
"Governments should focus more on solving the immediate problems of today rather than trying to solve the anticipated problems of the future."

3.10 周四 A 161
In a study of reading habits of Leeville citizens conducted by the University of Leeville, most respondents said they preferred literary classics as reading material. However, a follow-up study conducted by the same researchers found that the type of book most frequently checked out of each of the public libraries in Leeville was the mystery novel. Therefore, it can be concluded that the respondents in the first study had misrepresented their reading habits.

3.11 周五 I 184
"It is a grave mistake to theorize before one has data."

3.12 周六 A 203
The following appeared in a newspaper feature story. “At the small, nonprofit hospital in the town of Saluda, the average length of a patient's stay is two days; at the large, for-profit hospital in the nearby city of Megaville, the average patient stay is six days. Also, the cure rate among patients in the Saluda hospital is about twice that of the Megaville hospital. The Saluda hospital has more employees per patient than the hospital in Megaville, and there are few complaints about service at the local hospital. Such data indicate that treatment in smaller, nonprofit hospitals is more economical and of better quality than treatment in larger, for-profit hospitals."

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3.21 周一
I 88"Technologies not only influence but actually determine social customs and ethics."

3.22 周二
A45 The following appeared as an editorial in a wildlife journal.                                                                                                                  "Arctic deer live on islands in Canada's arctic region. They search for food by moving over ice from island to island during the course of a year. Their habitat is limited to areas warm enough to sustain the plants on which they feed, and cold enough, at least some of the year, for the ice to cover the sea separating the islands, allowing the deer to travel over it. Unfortunately, according to reports from local hunters, the deer populations are declining. Since these reports coincide with recent global warming trends that have caused the sea ice to melt, we can conclude that the decline in arctic deer populations is the result of deer being unable to follow their age-old migration patterns across the frozen sea."

3.23 周三
I 25"Anyone can make things bigger and more complex. What requires real effort and courage is to move in the opposite direction—in other words, to make things as simple as possible."  

3.24 周四
A 169The following appeared in a letter from a department chairperson to the president of Pierce University.                                                                                                                                                                                                                  "Some studies conducted by Bronston College, which is also located in a small town, reveal that both male and female professors are happier living in small towns when their spouses are also employed in the same geographic area. Therefore, in the interest of attracting the most gifted teachers and researchers to our faculty and improving the morale of our entire staff, we at Pierce University should offer employment to the spouse of each new faculty member we hire. Although we cannot expect all offers to be accepted or to be viewed as an ideal job offer, the money invested in this effort will clearly be well spent because, if their spouses have a chance of employment, new professors will be more likely to accept our offers."  

3.25 周五
I 130"How children are socialized today determines the destiny of society. Unfortunately, we have not yet learned how to raise children who can help bring about a better society."  

3.26 周六
A 14The following appeared in a memo from the owner of Green Thumb Gardening Center, a small business serving a suburban town.                                                                                                        "There is evidence that consumers are becoming more and more interested in growing their own vegetables. A national survey conducted last month indicated that many consumers were dissatisfied with the quality of fresh vegetables available in supermarkets. And locally, the gardening magazine Great Gardens has sold out at the Village News stand three months in a row. Thus, we at Green Thumb Gardening Center can increase our profits by greatly expanding the variety of vegetable seeds we stock for gardeners this coming spring."

cecyleyueyueUID: 2753319

资料分享层
大家共享的资料都汇总在这

老杜对AW INTRO的分析
http://www.langlib.com/webpages/Forum/ThreadList.aspx?FID=0103
另一作文组对AW INTRO的分析
https://bbs.gter.net/viewthread.php?tid=1226492&highlight=

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前辈小组的作业评分表 可参考这个标准自审或给其他组员评分
作业评分表.rar (5.26 KB, 下载次数: 15)

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cecyleyueyueUID: 2753319

3.7
1. Zerr Adolph 月桂
2.卧沙场 Sophie 夏诺多

3.8
1坚韧 Zerr 夏诺多
2 卧沙场 探险者

3.9
小照 棉花糖 Adolph
Zerr 月桂

3.10
Adolph 夏诺多 卧沙场
坚韧 小照 月桂

一定要认真修改别人作文噢！
能学习学习，该拍砖拍砖，坦诚相待，共同进步！
别忘看咱们帖子里更新的一些资料什么的啊

cecyleyueyueUID: 2753319

备用层
后面大家交作业