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3月12日独立，sorry，来晚了：）

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３.１５号独立作文
Do you agree or disagree with the followingstatement? People would be happier if they had fewer possessions

In a world where materials and money becomethe center of everyone's life, many people are addicted to the pursuit of possessionsand finally feel depressed after their possession increased. Thus many peoplepropose that the less we have, the happier we would be. However, based aobjective approach to this problem, I believe that people should first haveenough possessions to make sure they have a decent life; after that, they donot need more possessions anymore, otherwise, the possessions bring more distressthan happiness.

First of all, if you do not have enoughpossessions to meet you basic need, then you would feel happier if you couldhave more. This is a practical law and applied to most of us. I would take myfamily as an example. My family was very poor and in need of many possessionswhen I was very young. We didn't have bicycles--which was the maintransportation that time--when we visited our relatives, all four of us had tosleep together in winter because we did not have enough quilt. During that timemy parents quarreled a lot when they found they could not do something becauseof the situation. However, several year later, my dad went out and started hisown business, my family's possession increased, followed by the laughter amongmy parents.

However, once you have already leaded adecent life, then, may be you would be happier if you have fewer possessionsfor two reasons. On one hand, you can enjoy your life without being worriedabout the possessions’ you have. When you have many possessions, you have to dothe maintenance work to make sure well function well. For instance, when I wasat college, I brought several pair of sneakers a year. To keep these shoesneat, I spent much time on them and that made me very tired. However, myroommate who limited his shoes in two pair had very good time for he did notneed deal with that problem.

On the other hand, you could have more timeto explore the spirit world. After all, human need the spirit work to make themmore human. Thus you could read more books, watch more movies or appreciatefine art. My roommate who did not have so many shoes to wash could enjoy amovie when I was busy and worried to keep my shoes tide.

In a nutshell, we would be happier if youhave more possessions to ensure our basic needs are satisfied. Once we haveenough to live in this world decently, the fewer we have, the happier we wouldbe.
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不好意思改晚了，刚才发错地方发到我自己的帖子里去了

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3.16综合+独立
综合是TPO7的题目
独立是机经上的，修改的同学们辛苦了

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这个。。。明天交作业前给你改好哈~~不好意思哦

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我没做过TPO7的综合 我给你改独立吧 我也写机经的呵呵

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3.16 独立修gia

It is only worth watching movies that can teach us something about real life, agree or disagree？

As there are more and more movies on the market, we would lose ourselves if we do not have certain criteria. Some people state that we should only watch movies that can teach us something about real life. However, in my point of view, this criterion is oversimplified过于简单？不太明白在用这个表达什么？ and thus unconvincing用这个词在这里又是什么. Movies, as a form of arts, have many functions; we should evaluate them by different standards under different circumstance.

I am not denying the value of those movies that educate us. Actually I love those movies very much because they give us many useful tips for our everyday life and make our life easy. However, the educational value of movies is not contradicted with other values such as entertainment and inspiration of imagination.反驳地很好

I believe that movies that make us laugh and relax worth our attention because the primary function of movies is entertainment. After all, most of us go to theater not to be educated but to enjoy their spare time. For instance, after one week's hard study, I would like to choose a movie that could make me relax and get rid of the exhaust. Listen to the funny line and 前面动词是listen to额exaggerated facial expressions could make me bring me to a light atmosphere and have a rest. 顺便可以说为了下一次的工作做准备 因为足够的放松才能够更好让工作效率更高

Also, we could choose a movie because of its imagination. Since most of us live in an ordinary world without too much surprise and extraordinary things. Watching those fascinating movies, such as science fiction, would stimulate our imagination and keepmake our spirit transcend the limitation of everyday life. For instance, the Matrix, a classic sci-fi别缩写, brings me a lot of imagination about the robots and the artificial intelligence.觉得可以继续推，说stimulate你的imagination以后又是什么影响到你的生活工作学习了

In a nutshell, I admit educational values is of importance, However, I also value other kind of functions of movies, such as entertainment and stimulation of imagination.

思路蛮清晰的 我对这个题目有点小困惑
可以教给你一些关于生活真实的东西就一定是科教片吗？潜意识里是这样认为，可是会不会因为国家文化不同，人家原本想表达的不是这个意思？

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Do you agree or disagreewith the following statement? Does advice given by older people more valuablethan from people at your age?

Given the limited resources and imperfectinformation-processing system of humanbrain, no one could solve all the problems s/he faces. Therefore we should takesuggestions from other. However, there is a debate in this situation. Somepeople argue that the advices from older people are more valuable. However,based on my experience, I believe that the advices from different people willbe most valuable only under certain circumstances.

First of all, I prefer to turn to my peersfor help when I want to know what happen recently and what is the mostpopular thingsthe most popular things are currently.Obviously, people at my age are more open to new things and have better skillsto get the latest information and trends around the world. For instance, Ialways ask one of my best friends, who is at my age, about what kind of musicto listen to, because he is a big musical fan and track the newest songs. Andhe will recommend me the most classic or most popular songs which are verycool. However, when I talk with my friends who are older than me, they have noidea about these songs, let alone give me advices.

However, when it comesto making important decisions in my life, I would ask people who have moreexperience than me for suggestion. After all, people who older than me alwayshave better understanding of society and life, sometime they may experience theprocesses that we are going to undertake. A good example is that when I was notsure about what to do to prepare my material to apply a school in a foreigncountry, I asked for help from my friend Xiang, who is a Ph. D candidate in a prestigiousinstitution in Europe. Because he had applied and know the details andpotential traps, his advices give me great help.

Also, when I had to solve the problems inmy study, I would listen to both of my peers and teachers. In this way, I couldget more information and get a whole picture of my subject. When want to designmy own experiment to investigate a interesting subject, I first asked myteacher about the research's significance and the general direction, for theyhave much broader horizon and know whether my research proposal could makecontribution to our knowledge or not. Then I discussed with my peers who couldhelp figure out details and how to conduct the experiment step by step.Together with the suggestions from both of my teachers and my peers, I solvedall the problems I encountered and finished it.

In sum, when we can not solve the problemsby ourselves, the advices given by others always help because they may providea differentperspective and help us to reframe the problems, thus give us insights and makeus find an optimalsolution.

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3-17独立，修改后

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3.18号作业
综合TPO 4 ：

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顺便请问一下写作小错误太多怎么办啊。。。。。

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