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要上战场了,才写了第一篇,平时不好好学习打酱油去了,不才阿.大家看看,给个分,我不怕打击,就想最后看看什么水平
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TOPIC: ISSUE37 - "In most societies, competition generally has more of a negative than a positive effect."
WORDS: 466          TIME: 00:45:00          DATE: 2011-3-5 21:51:24
Since american across the continent by wagon,the spirit of aggresive have deeply root in their blood.They pursue everything they want,and never give up.Trully,even american society is search a homogenier,the society is becoming a machine for competion.In every realm,people fight for their right,fight for the fininte source which not share by every human.No one can deny that compete is a postive world in this world that power insult the result.
But competion should be made in a legal conception,that means everyone compete in a benign condition.
The competition support the society development,and push the people moving forward.No matter in the school or the work place,the compete make people work hard to devoid be the last one,and to be the leadship.For example if the pass rate is one hundred percent of the exam,the student would be lazy for they thought everyone could pass it,the condition would improve if the degree of exam is from A to F, the best one get the degree A,and the worst get the degree of F.The opponent is your classmate.Would you study lazy like before or study hard to get the leader level of the class?The same thing happen in the workpalce,the fat pay is the best respond,for no one is paid the same,you must improve your power,and make the ideal mounts of money you want.Competion is not a society law but also a nature law.
The nature of human  made competition is essential of our society.The source is limited,to survive to grasp.May be the conception of to get the source for the survive is out of date,but the famine and poverty is still in some African contry.
If you want to live,you have to compete the food and water for you and your family to live.If we expand the definition of survive to live,to live a qualify life,the things will clear.We all want better house,better car and anything better than others.That the the point of competition.its all human nature.Just like James Ameles,the one work in the Harvard Kenny Govenment department once said its normal for everyone to pursue everything they want,just they are human.
But,the overdue competition will undoult impair our normal life,to get everything illegal would at last out of control,even made a big mistake,even paid for your life.If you cheat in the exam,you would be cancel the degree of the exam and leave a dark pot in your life.If you finance cheating,you would be send to the jail and even more lose everything you own
Get a balance in the competition is the most important things.To fight for that belongs to you,but never touch the things that seemly wonderful but  belongs to you.Like my father once told me"Work hard,you would get want you want,that is the funny of competition. "Competiton made you stronger and harder to face a new world.