一个新东方老师的献身（作文修改与阅读指导）

holmeszhouUID: 2617873

太谢谢lz了，后天考试，能帮忙修改下么~~~~~~

littlefox104UID: 2751301

Question:
Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
At universities and colleges, sports and social activities are just as important as classes and libraries and should receive equal financial support.

I agree with the statement sports and social activities are important as well as classes and libraries at universities and colleges. So sports and social activities should receive as much financial support as classes and libraries.

At universities, through social activities we can acquire experience and skills we never learn from classes and books, such as how to get along with others and how to build up our confidence. We need accumulate experience and social skills in order to prepare to go out into the world in the future. Moreover, we can understand knowledge from books more quickly through social activities and use information from classes and books to solve the problems in practice.

Sport is always an important part of our life. For one thing, we do sports to keep ourselves health and to avoid obesity. We students always sit long time to study in the classrooms or libraries at university, so we need do some exercises to relax and relieve pressure from study. For another thing, sports give us chances to learn how to corporate with other. For example, through playing football game, we can gain team-work spirit.

If universities and colleges don’t spend enough money on sports and social activities, students might do exercise or go on social movements in classrooms and libraries. As a result, there will be much negative influence to students. For example, quiet will be broken by noise from sports and social movements so that other students can’t concentrate on reading in libraries or classrooms. Besides, doing sports is not safe in libraries.

For these reasons, I think that sports and social activities should receive enough money. It is a direct way to acquire knowledge from classes and books, however, it is also an important way to gain acknowledge from sports and social activities to us at universities and colleges.

独立写作常常写不完在30min里TAT....

littlefox104UID: 2751301

综合写作--TPO15

In the lecture, the speaker doesn’t think the measures which are proposed in the reading passage can stop the spread of the cane toad in Australia.

The first measure that the speaker used to cast doubt on the reading is that the national fence will be not effective to prevent the spread of the cane toads. According to the speaker, young toads and toad eggs will be carried from one side to the other by steams flowing. However, the reading notes that building a fence will stop cane toads to establish population.

The second measure that the speaker disagreed the reading is that untrained volunteers would destroy other endangered frogs because it is difficult to distinguish between cane toads and native frogs. On the contrary, the reading contends that volunteers could capture and destroy the cane toads in order to stop the spread of them.

Finally, the speaker argued that using the virus to toads in Australia will bring disaster to American cane toads. In other words, if animals with the virus are transported to America, the native toads will be infected and the ecosystem will be destroyed. This contradicts the point in the reading that developing a disease-causing virus can control the cane toad populations.

holmeszhouUID: 2617873

Is it easier to be a success in the past than today?
It is quite apparent that in the past the scientific and social achievements lagged far behind today's achievements.  When we are looking backwards, it is much easier to find setbacks and irrationalities in past society, which do stem the individual development to success. I strongly believe that it is much easier to achieve success in modern society.

First, in the past the social hierarchy determined that the education was an exclusive source limited only to upper social stratum such as gentry and aristocrats. The majority of people in the country are usually subject to tough manual work. For example, in ancient china, there are only private schools taught by several scholars in large cities which only open to certain people from upper classes. Usually, farmers which comprise the majority of China’s population couldn’t go to such schools. The reason lies not only in the high expenditures but also that a ordinary family could not afford the loss of an adult’s labor. In ancient china, where feudalism predominated, farmers have a lot of taxes and fees to charge. As a result, the departure of a young male adult can harm the sustainability of the family and thus is not permitted. Accordingly, as a result of lack of good education, ordinary people can hardly absorb useful knowledge and achieve success.

Secondly, in the past women are severely discriminated against and only have limited rights. As a female, one can hardly achieve any glowing achievement in this adverse hostile social environment. For example, in the Islam world, women are forbidden to show their faces in front of others let alone communicate with others. In islam history, almost all the names recorded to have been a success in certain field are male. Even in eastern world, such as china, these famous female names are the princess or queens who were famous for their beauty not their success. Can you imagine a female succeeding in a male-dominant society?

Thirdly, modern technology has provided convenient and efficient way for us to learn new knowledge and communicate new ideas, which is the foundation of success. The appearance of Internet makes it possible to establish online library which you can upload or download data and reading materials immediately. Also, electric books, computer equipments, and multimedia means has been widely introduced so that people can get a more thorough and vivid understanding of the knowledge. In the contrast, in the 1400s, the world can only pass knowledge on by written books of limited numbers which were only accessible to limited people. It is obvious that in modern society can people have a better opportunity to approach knowledge and learn from others’ experience.

Last but not the least, today’s booming industries have spawn a lot of opportunities for individuals and also lead to the emergence of new areas which our predecessors could never touch on. Take IT industry for example, no one in the 18th century can foresee computers and Internet dominating today’s world. The high-tech industry, provides new opportunities for pioneers and spawns thousands of successful people such as bill gates. Nowadays, millions people work and succeed in industries which haven’t appeared in the past.  

All in all, the social and scientific developments of modern world do facilitate one’s success in a certain way.
感觉自己思路还是不够清晰，不会开头，结尾没有力度，希望老师能指导下怎么让文路更顺畅些。辛苦老师了~~~~many thx

初尘TiffanyUID: 3043598

老师，麻烦您帮我批改一下 谢谢了
topic:government support art museums and music performance or recreational facilities?


Under the pressure of economic competition, our government has been so immersed in updating technology or material facilities circularly. We are living in a quick-fixed society, thanks to our biased role of shouldering this competition. We don’t have time to please ourselves by hibernation without any work or life stuff running over our head, and to treat ourselves with a little walk after nightfall. It seems that not until to be fired would we step into an exotic and elegant place, enjoying a warm, red wine in the sparkling glasses twinkling under the light, putting our heart into a soft music, having a deep talk with our soul. We would rather contribute our torso to those recreational facilities hoping to obtaining a quick and entire relax, but coming out the more exhausted and hollow spirit. Recreational facilities which used to be means of refreshing and revitalizing people, ends up degrading into such a compressed moments that stampeding from one playground to another, from one cabaret to another, people are able to derive amusement from nothing but collecting tickets and counting the clock click.

We can imagine, somewhat, this impetuous attitude towards the life would be upheld, were the government to continue supporting the recreational facilities. Eventually, this crazy era is piled up with just anxious social climbers, blindly obsessed with work in the daytime while sigh to recall what is called the real contentment and happiness.

People are always in a hurry and go far from where we started. Children seem always be enthusiastic with all purified and beautiful stuffs such as music and art, easily being caught by just simple melodies and never bored with touching a piece of architecture work even though they have no awareness of what these things are. But from which moment, the pragmatism has forced into almost everywhere in our lives? Works on literature, arts and natural miracles are left alone on the museums, gathering dusts and being the real antique. Gorgeous rhythm is abandoned on the theater, flying alone around the space, with no resonance. Do we really forget the amazing feeling these art perform on our soul? I suppose the answer is no. A subtle smile on our face when we come across an old song, passing by a store reveals how desirable we are to follow this pure enjoyment.

Therefore, I suppose government should support art museums and music performance to refine the public’s taste for art, arouse people’s passion and point a right way to pursue the true happiness. In the same time, we can totally relax ourselves via wandering on the museums as with recreational facilities do.

初尘TiffanyUID: 3043598

老师，我3月27号把我写的上面那篇文章发去您邮箱了，您看到了么

初尘TiffanyUID: 3043598

老师，我3月27号把我写的上面那篇文章发去您邮箱了，您看到了么

qyjsxUID: 2975746

Some people think university professors should spend more time doing research while
others think they should spend more time educating students. What is your view?
  In my opinion ,university professors are teachers firstly and teaching students should be their first task. I have some reasons to support my view.
Firstly ,our students go to the university to study knowledge and grasp skills for the future work., such as ,one major is accounting aims to learn some skills that can be helpful to his work. Our students’ needs require professors pay more attention to educations of their students , teach some practical skills and knowledge about their major. The professors also should try to improve his or her ability to teach then the students will be glad and active to study.
Secondly, usually weather a student has interest in one course mostly depend on the professors teaching methods. Attracted by the course or not always has s big influence on the student’ grade and enthusiasm .this declare the professors to spend more time in the teaching .if a professor mostly put his attention on his research ,his course’ performance can not be very good and the students may not be willing to attend his class ,always  the relationships between the students and professors will not be good .this may result some bad things ,such as when the professor need some students  to cope with him at the classroom and may there is not a student doing a favor to him. then students who have his class will give him a bad recommendation at the end of the semester and many bad recommendations may lead  the professors to lose his work as a teacher .
From the above discussion ,I think a professor should spend more time on teaching students rather than  doing his research .
Large families were once seen as a blessing . Today , however , things are changing and an
increasing number of Chinese parents realize that fewer is better .
qyjsx8915@163.com这是我的邮箱，麻烦您把修改后的发邮箱吧，谢谢啦，万分感谢！

ferrywinGTIUID: 2980899

麻烦老师帮忙修改下，指出我哪些方面不足，谢谢！

niehanmjUID: 3005699

是不是没在改了啊？

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story4220UID: 2973746

It is only worth watching movies that can teach us something about real life.

Along with the advance of the society, it is not uncommon for us to go to the cinema to enjoy a wonderful weekend. The variety of films provides people with considerable choices when they are in the cinema. And this is where the controversial arises. Some people claim that the movies which have nothing to do with real life should be eliminated, provided that they cannot teach people anything. As far as I am concerned, however, I totally disagree with this point of view.

The first reason I want to put forward is that, by watching movies, we can experience what we will never go through in our real life. Since the daily life is so boring, people can immerse themselves in the fantastic virtual world, and forget the painful memories in real life for just a while. When you are exploring the beautiful globe Pandora in the movie, Avatar, you will feel that you are walking in the mystical forest, appreciating the magic creature around you. You do know that this will never happen in your real life, but you are so exciting that you get lots of pleasure from the story.

Another point that shall never be ignored is that, movies can bring happiness and comfort to the audience. Rarely can we deny the fact that going to the cinema is a common and popular way to date. The advanced equipments make the sound effect so wonderful, which is in no way to be experienced when we watch movies at home. And also, the atmosphere and surroundings in the cinema make us enjoy the closed relationship with the intimate who is watching movies with us. These are all reasons why we want to go to the cinema, no matter what kind of film we are watching, or what the film can teach us.

From my perspective, the idea that it is only worth watching movies that can teach us something about real life is somewhat shortsighted. We should not seek for instant benefits when we are just entertaining or relaxing. Nothing is more important to us than happiness and sense of enjoyment. And this is exactly what movies can bring to us.

To sum up, the significance of all kinds of movies can never be doubted. In no circumstance should we only watch the movies with an educational purpose.

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请问老师，我高2 大约有一年的时间准备托福从2011.7——到2012.6（也就是高三准备高考的时间差不多吧）考到90以上困难吗？我基础还行吧，学校里的大考110左右（一般情况下）浙江省，平常有外教授课练口语能力的，每天都在背（张红岩词以类记）希望得到老师指导。谢谢了

wlihustUID: 3048995

topic：for successful development of a country, should a government fucus its budget more on every young children education rather than on universities?

to some people, university education is so important that it is reasonable to spend most of the budget on it in their opinions. although university education can provide young students good preparation for future career, and improve their many kinds of abilities which are vital for entering society, i do believe that a government should focus its budget more on every young children education instead of universities. And there are several reasons accounting for that.

The first reason lies on that, young children education is greatly essential for people's development , especially when they are staying the periods of two to five years old. during the earlier periods of their development, young people are most curious to the world, so that they are eager to learn new things and they can learn quite fast. what is more, the ability that people have learnt during their earlier ages ,will not only be hard to lose, but also play a great impact on their future life. for instance, children, as young as about two years old, will begin to learn riding bicycle. after their growing up, the ability of riding bicycle can never get lost and they can also ride even after not riding for several years . therefore, putting great attention on young children education is very important for their future development.

also, focusing the budget on young children education can save more money to do other useful things. in general, educating one young child, which may only need a few beneficial books and an experienced instructor, will cost less than educating one university student. as a result, the government will spend less money which can be used to improve facilities ,if they focus its budget more on every young children education rather than on universities.

What is more, spending the budget on young children will be more efficient than that on universities, saving a lot of time and energy. Young child, as young as two years old for example, will do exactly what we have told them to do, and they will never pretend to learn well. In contrast, students in universities are sophisticated enough to look for various excuses to escape from lessons that cost a great deal of time and energy to prepare. As a result, spending the same amount of time and energy, a young child will be able to learn more than a university student.  

in conclusion, focus budget more on every young children education rather than on universities will not only benefit students largely but also save much money and energy to to other valuable things.
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