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发表于 2011-3-30 21:33:48 |只看该作者 |倒序浏览
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题目:People who go outside are more successful and happier than people who stay in villages.

Now in the society, according to statistic, the number of the people go outside has been increasing sharply with the booming of the economy. Based on this, some members’ consider that go outside many has offer job opportunities than in villages, and has many interesting things. So they feel more successful and happier than in villages if many parsons go outside. From my point of view, it's not necessarily going outside that makes them happier and more successful.


Admittedly, go outside can widen people’s horizon and have offer job opportunities that it is mirror of social progress. In the outside have advance science and technology and best current knowledge, and people enjoy various entertainments. Just like my neighbor Mr. Li. He is studying in the university where big city and he comes from a small village. He tells me that he will take job in this city and don’t want to go back when his graduation, because he wants change his life, as the proverb goes: knowledge to change destiny. He can acquire knowledge and skills in the university and understand sense of competition and cooperation. So go outside people is well.


However, every coin has its two sides. People must suffer from heavier work pressure with the increasingly fierce social competition. Are faces with pressure, many human will been overworked both physically and mentally. Therefore we often see many people jump from a building or act as a lunatic in the TV. In some way endanger society stability and safety, and their family will been heartbreak. Though village not has advance science and technology, but the atmosphere there is very comfortable, people can have a rest when you feel tired in the village. So it’s not necessarily going outside that make them happier.

As mentioned above, with the every-increasing popularity of go outside, people must pay attention to these effects. Although go outside is a symbol of society progress, but, we must take many factors into consideration. So it's not necessarily going outside that makes them happier and more successful.
         
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