4.2作文互改“该不该做不想做的事”有改必回哈

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027 Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? People should sometimes do things that they do not enjoy doing. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Theoretically, everyone, as an individual in the society, can do whatever he/she wants, legally of course, and do not do others if not. However, I definitely agree to the statement that, in some cases, people should do things even though they really dislike to do.

Everyone is more or less a part of a group in which there must be some rules regulating the obligation of its members. No matter what the work is, interesting or not, members must finish it. Only with the efforts from everybody can the whole group develop. Take our lab as an example. One of the rules in our lab is that each person is responsible for the clean-up for a week. To be honest, I hate that work. As a member, however, I have to do it. Supposing that if no one does the work, how would the lab become? Similarly, almost all of us hate things like pausing in the rush hour, paying taxes, but these are the regulations of the society that we have no choice other than obeying.

Sometimes, even for ourselves, we also need to do things that we do not like. I bet every boy has the experience that although exhausted, he has to perform to be energetic, as well as happy, to go shopping with his girlfriend. If not, we can easily imagine what would happen. Sometimes we are really tired of our daily work that needs us to participate every morning and do the same thing repeatedly. But in order to survive, we have no alternative. What’s worse, having already been pressed by the boring work, we have to raise a kid, maybe in accord with the will of parents.

To sum up, as one says, there is no absolute freedom in the world. In other words, we are forbidden to do something and, in the same manner, we have to do something even though we do not enjoy doing actually.

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Theoretically, everyone, as an individual in the society, can do whatever he/she wants, legally of course, and do not do others if not. However, I definitely agree to the statement that, in some cases, people should do things even though they really dislike to do & Z6 W+ ]4 N. l" Z8 f) z; \) v6 w+ n# |, L* F
  Everyone is more or less(as) a part of a group in which there must be some rules regulating the obligation of its members. No matter what the work is, interesting or not, members must finish（我个人觉得这个ＦＩＮＩＳＨ用得不好） it. Only with the efforts from everybody（这句表达的也不是很理想）can the whole group develop. Take our lab as an example. One of the rules in our lab is that each person is responsible for the clean-up for a （ｗｈｏｌｅ）week. To be honest, I hate that work. As a member, however, I have to do it. Supposing that if no one does the work, how would the lab become（个人理解你这句话表达的有点中式英语的思维，我觉得） Similarly, almost all of us hate（你说的　HATE有点极端，没有说服力，你可以用缓和的语气来表达自己的观点啊，不喜欢可以，不至于讨厌） things like pausing in the rush hour, paying taxes, but these are the regulations of the society that we have no choice other than obeying.! `& c$ Y, |7 F

) C+ P$ o% T- ?8 g' O1 i: c% c" [& mSometimes, even for ourselves, we also need to do things that we dislike 。I bet every boy has the experience that although exhausted, he has to perform to be energetic, as well as happy, to go shopping with his girlfriend. If not, we can easily imagine what would happen.（也许你这个例子是很生动，但是要不换个例子吧，感觉到这个例子很没有典型性，不知道外国人和女朋友逛街时不是累也得表现出很积极地样子，得，咱为保险，换个例子吧） Sometimes we are tired of our daily work that needs us to participate后面要加上介词吧every morning and do the same thing repeatedly. But in order to survive, we have no alternative 这里要加名词吧，比如choice. What’s worse(我个人认为你不要用这个WHATis
worse，你后面列举的事情在你看来也许真的很糟糕，但是不要说得这么露骨，我觉得ETS不会觉得生养孩子是个很糟糕的事情吧), having already been pressed by the boring work, we have to raise a kid, maybe in accord with the will of parents., Z; N+ y  Y1 ]3 U' G; P* q

2 [2 |; ?8 D/ p6 ~6 k6 g  @9 d6 xTo sum up, as one says, there is no absolute freedom in the world. In other words, we are forbidden to do something and, in the same manner, we have to do something even though we do not enjoy doing actually.

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谢谢~~
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guominhuhuUID: 3018271

3# rodgood 我写了立马发你啊

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根据guominhuhu同学宝贵的意见，修改如下：


Theoretically, everyone, as an individual in the society, can do whatever he/she wants, legally of course, and do not do others if not. However, I definitely agree to the statement that, in some cases, people should do things even though they really dislike doing." ~) N# F  K* Q2 }! z2 z9 \  n0 w
Everyone is more or less a part of a group in which there must be some rules regulating the obligation of its members. No matter what the work is, interesting or not, members must fulfill it. Only when all the members undertake their duties can the whole group develop. Take our lab as an example. One of the rules in our lab is that each person is responsible for the clean-up for a whole week, by turns. To be honest, I hate that work. As a member, however, I have to do it. What if no one takes the responsibility? Similarly, some of us may complain things like pausing in the rush hour, paying taxes, but these are the regulations of the society that we have no choice other than obeying.
Sometimes, even for ourselves, we also need to do things that we do not like. For example, my roommate always grumbles about frequent shopping with his girlfriend. Although tied of it, he has to perform being happy and energetic to make her elated. Sometimes we really weary of our daily work that needs us to participate every morning and do the same thing repeatedly. But in order to survive, we have no alternative. What’s more, having already been pressed by the boring work, we have to deal with increasingly complex relationships in the society.

To sum up, as one says, there is no absolute freedom in the world. In other words, we are forbidden to do something and, in the same manner, we have to do something even though we do not enjoy doing actually.

rodgoodUID: 2619326

至于every morning那里，我觉得不用加介词哈，比如I get up early this morning. 如果是In the morning, I get up early.这里就需要in咯

还有，alternative可以用作名词哈
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