5月AW 第一篇issue。求指点~谢谢！

1989chybUID: 2751953

130How children are socialized today determines the destiny of society. Unfortunately, we have not yet learned how to raise children who can help bring about a better society.

      The speaker actually asserts two claims : 1 nowadays the socialization of children determines the destiny of society 2 we have not yet learned how to raise children who can help bring about a better society . While i agree with the first claim ,however the speaker overlooks imagination and motivation also determine our society . And i disagree with the second statement because our children know to respect black and female by learning .



To begin with , socialization means communication and respect . Communication is a social skill when we expand our social cycle . For example a child living in a rural area called baodi can make many friends who are proficient in the technology of farming and then he may be familiar with many friends whose parents focus on business when he moves to shanghai the best prosperous city in china . As a result ,he will become a successful businessman by bring the product of baodi to shanghai . Respect is a social skill when we keep our society strong and healthy . A child who stresses importance on respect will realize the value of winning and losing gracefully . More significantly , they will realize friendship goes beyond the competition and friendship is everlasting . For example , top student will hold the view that they should not pick their score on humiliate others  because respect others in his mind



Nevertheless , the speaker overlooks imagination , motivation , which from my perspective , also determine the destiny of our society . In some aspects, science is our eyes to look the essence of the world and then we can keep our society strong. No one can deny imagination is the essential block of the skyscraper of science . Einstein's relativity results from he dreams to ski on beam ; Kekule's molecular Formula results from his dream that a snake bites its own tail . All the examples i mentioned above are the facts that imagination decides the future of our society .  No one can deny motivation is the best catalyst of discovery . Planck who has a gift for music wanted to do some study of physics . His friends told him there was nothing would be found in physics because it had been perfect ,but he said he loved physics and just wanted to do some study which had been demonstrated , finally he found the Quantum theory . In my view , the facts i mentioned due to the motivation .



Turning to the second claim , i disagree with the point that we have not yet learned how to raise children who can help bring about a better society. Today , our we human have great tolerance of different culture and different standpoint . In stead of war or battle,we also discuss in peaceful way ,such as the nuclear problem of south Korea . In stead of derogation or debacement , we also respect anyone and protect their rights . Female can also go to school and black can not only sit the last row of bus .



In conclusion , the socialization of children is an aspect of determining destiny of our society and we also have the ability of raising our children .

1989chybUID: 2751953

怎么木有人呢。。。