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写了10篇左右吧,感觉这样精力消耗很大,只觉得大脑越写越乱,真郁闷啊!!
下面是俺刚写的一篇烂文,说实话我都觉得写的不好,本来没敢贴,今天拿出来作为反面教材吧。
[B]Issue 101 “the video camera provides such an accurate and convincing record of contemporary life that it has become a more important form of documentation than written records.”……(历史类)[/B]
Written records as means to document have been used for a long time, since people first learned to write. Nowadays after hundreds of years of the predominance of writing came a new "noble" - the "modern beauty" camera. Many people are enchanted by her commodity, elegance, and realicity, and even predict that she will occupy the throne of written records and become the new "queen". But in my opinion, In the fields of documentation, either the "new noble" camera and the "previous emperor" written record has its merits and plays an role that cannot be replaced by each other.
In the first place, let me fill our eyes with the mien of our "beautiful and marvelous queen" camera. This modern beauty is primarily welcome by her embracers for her "honesty". She is honesty because she is equipped with the most progressive form of "eyes" which can provide such an accurate and convincing record of our life. People cannot neglect her slim figure in most of our public affairs. For instance, in the celebration day, while everyone falls into carnivorous, camera is working busily for picking up every scene, which is filled up of happiness. And in the fields of ordinary life, our pictures of life are also greatly retraced by the emergence of camera. A camera can help us regain our happy time such as our wedding, our graduating from college, and even every trip we have had. Furthermore camera is a loyal and responsible witness and detective. For example, reporters use camera to debunk such bad things as the delinquency of government for our society, policemen apply it to inspect the over speed of a car. So in this field, she is greatly accepted by people because of her innovation of records. For example, without camera, government would spend more police to inspect drivers, and it would be impossible to watch World Cup as soon as possible.
Then let us talk about our "previous emperor" - the written record. The written record has some merits that cannot be replaced by the "noble beauty" camera. The major one is that it is easier to record abstract subject by using written record than by video camera. Camera can provides picture, which can be perceived by our eyes, but when it comes to such world of abstraction as mathematics, psychology, and chemistry, its capacity of recording will be greatly undermined. For example, it is difficult for a mathmatist to record his ideas and theories by merely using videocassette, and psychologist will find it impossible to record applied psychology just by a series of pictures. Our ability to apply those abstract words offers us a more concise and easy way to hold our opinions and ideas than retained by video. So in this case, the records by written cannot be neglect.
Furthermore, written record is cheaper and more commodities than videocassette. For example, Averages don't need to raise their expenditure for owning a camera, if they want to record some important appointments in their ordinary life. By writing information down, a reporter will not miss an unexpected event because of the limitation whether he is carrying a video camera. The retaining our ability to write provide us an inexpensive and easy-operated way to record things for our life until we lose our capacity of handling those words.
In sum, to further improve our quality of recording, we should connect the function of camera and the merits of written records. Recording things using suitable way concerning their type and character will reduce the time and expenditure and make our work more effective. |
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