悟issue的真相

angeikimUID: 4857

说实话，和老外讨论过这个问题，我问他那种让步的作文如何，他的回答是，那是中国人的英文文章不是英文母语的人的英文文章。说ESSAY就是要有鲜明的观点。

我觉得也是啊，否则，退过来退过去到底同意哪个自己的观点是什么到最后还是难以让人明白啊。让人看不明白，那么作文不就是说写的失败了？

思维跳跃呢，也没关系，但是问题是，一定要把你思维过程写下来，让人可以跟上你的思路。例子也不在于多，而在于精，对主题的支持，否则，例子堆了一堆堆，到底想说什么还是无法让人理解，那么你的作文呢，也是失败！

brilliant77UID: 11224

感觉题目好像有这两种：
1 直接论述的：
A－－－→B
如 203， 212，205
2 两个选择的：
A－－－→B  和 C，需要比较B 和 C  ，两者选一个
如 210 ，211 等
论述的时候应该可以总结出一些定式来吧，可惜偶目前还不会。

请大家指正！！

天地无用UID: 112318

让步不好写啊,每个段落写多少字不容易控制,经常写high了就把自己要让步的段落写得比主要论述段还长
还是这么好写
第一段,写自己的观点,最鲜明的,能写最多的,<我认为A好>
第二段,看看上段,想一下,自己找找漏洞(自己主动找,省的考官觉得你思危不严密)<但是在A里存在这个问题和那个问题,所以B也有支持>
结尾:总的来说还是A好

imongUID: 140258

对16楼的看法pfpf，有如梦初醒的感觉，尤其是那个“思维过程”的说法
13楼的，狂against可能是argument后遗症
狂support......ft 想不出来了

imongUID: 140258

又试了一个
63. "To truly understand your own culture, no matter how you define it, requires personal knowledge of at least one other culture, one that is distinctly different from your own."
  
I strongly agree with the claim that personal knowledge of at least one distinct culture is required for individual to understand his/her own culture. To justify this claim one need to investigate into one learning pattern of human being, that is, the comparative approach. For example, we learn that a skyscraper is tall in our childhood in recognizing ourselves or other buildings aside being much shorter. The term tall and short come along, without reference it is impossible to define each. And this pattern applies universally. As we grow up, we have discoveries everyday that enable us to tell light from dark, pleasant from distressed, explicit from obscure, distinct from commonplace. Therefore one day, if we are to meet people of other cultural background, at the beginning we often find it hard to communicate for we share less in common, comparing with people from our own culture. Americans may find the tonic Chinese language a nightmare. The relationship between father and child in Japan is often unacceptable for British households. And we all may be astonished that polygamy does exist in certain areas of this earth. Conscious or not, we immediately set out to probe into such differences, thereby constitute better comprehension of both. Without such process, Americans may neglect certain features of English forever, a British teenager may never realize that he/she relies little on his/her parents, and we may take monogamy for granted all the time. Only after this can we revise the perception of our own culture, which qualifies us to truly understand.

Moreover, scholars have demonstrated that learning diverse cultures can help people truly understand only if they conduct their study in a disinterested way. Cultural anthropologists are the pioneers in this field. Via the comparative approach, they identify the common and distinct traits in societies of various cultures. Yet academic circles are stuffed with anecdotes that two researcher draw divergent conclusions from the same statistics. Fortunately, these intellects finally get down to agree that every cultural anthropologist should stand unbiased so as to ensure the objectivity of any deduction. No wonder it is that hard as most of us are reared in one culture alone. Thus when it comes to the masses, in another culture they are more likely to find something queer or hard to bear. For instance, Chinese intellects are sometimes oversensitive towards western comments on their country, even if they are actually unprejudiced. Here we find the gap. The way to eliminate such gap requires us to give up some ideas that have long been upheld. When what we think right is considered wrong by others, we should sit down, look at the fact without any cultural patriotism, and together recognize that some principle in our culture is not necessarily essential for others. Truly we understand our own culture via this method.

It is equally important to mention that ignorance of cultures other than one's own can bring about consequences from embarrassment to warfare. Imagine, that an American reaches out his/her hand to a typical Japanese bow as both are trying to express respect. This is not yet the worst. Certain religious taboos prevent people from eating beef or pork and what a disastrous scene it will be if both have lunch at the same table. The precaution measures to such problems are to study different cultures. Therefore we can indeed be considerate for others and be tolerating when someone affronts us without intention.

In conclusion, one can truly understand one’s own culture only on having the knowledge of another. Further more, as for the common interest of human being, it is necessary that individual study other cultures objectively as much as possible.

觉得第一段有范文的水平，然后越来越差
现在真是有问题，结尾收不住，开头更是索性不写了
天哪
你觉得这篇的position又如何呢？

imongUID: 140258

earnestly expecting...

vivianjUID: 138316

觉得你的语言驾驭能力蛮强呀. 距离挺贴切
不过结构不够分明
开头结尾应该加强一下吧