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25. It has recently been announced that a large shopping center may be built in your neighborhood. Do you support or oppose this plan? Why? Use specific reasons and details to support your answer.



Have you ever been bought the food which is out of date in a small shop?Have you ever heard the complians that the shopping center is so far away from your neighborhood
that you waste lots of time on the road?Or have you ever experienced the situation where you have to buy something you want even though the weather is terrible?

If you have never experienced the situations,you will never konw how important it is to have a large shopping center in your neighborhood.

First of all,the safety of food can be ensured in a large shopping center.For example,the time you go into the large shopping center,you can always see a large sign,which says the time when the vegetables were
transported and arrived at the shopping center.Besides,other kinds of food have the product time printed on the covers.As a result,the safety of food in the larger shopping center can be guaranteed.

Secondly,the shopping center can save you lots of time.For instance,you can avoid the tracffic jam on the road ,which you have experienced before the appearance of the shopping center.And nowaday,it will only takes you five minutes to go to the shopping center on foot.So it really saves you much time spent on road.

Last but not least,the larger shopping center makes your life more convenient.For example,when it is a terrible day,you can almost avoid the bad effects because the shopping center is near your house.Besides, the shopping center can provide public buses which can take the consumer here or back home since it is not far from your house.In these ways,the shoping center really make your life easier.

Certainly,I do not deny that the shopping center also has some disadvantages,such as more noise,more thives,more environmental polution and so on.However,the shopping center has more merits,such as food safety,moe efficiency,more convenience and so on. I therefore reinforce my standpoint to support the plan to building a larger shopping center in the neighborhood.

周越峰UID：3008658

大家帮帮我啊 5.14就要考了 这是第一篇作文 求很批评 狠狠批评 谢谢啦