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(6.11)Do you agree that the government should support the scientific research even there's no practical use？

In no circumstance can we deny that we should promote the development of science. With the increasing capital and talents in investment of scientific research, we get a huge advance in almost all aspects in society. But not everyone agree with this point. They say only the practical useful ones should be supported by government. From my viewpoint, I definitely stand for that government should support all science research whether there is practical useful or not.

First of all, science and technology are the primary productive forces. If we want to create a new, thriving and advanced future, scientific research is the most reliable way to realize this. From this point, it can never be exaggerated for the government to exert every effort for scientific research. We can cite an example to illustrate this perspective. In the first decade of last century in my hometown, the main work for the government is to retain a peaceful condition and hold some religious rituals rather than developing local science research. But, now, in recent decade, our government put enormous attention and energy in science research, bringing a large amount of benefits to local society.

However, as not every research can bring us practical use, should our government only support the practical useful ones? The answer definitely is no. On one hand, most scientific researches have no practical use in the coming few years or decades. But, ultimately, these researches can bring uses to us. There is lots of examples can reflect this, such as genetic project. At the beginning of genetic research, we could not predict the uses it will produce. But our government still execute a important decision to support this scientific research. For several decade researching, we have got enormous achievements. Although we can acquire some practical uses from this, it is indeed useful to find the mysterious secrets in our body, like how can we be like this. When we gradually find the mechanism of body by the genetic research, we can ward off diseases by use the results of this research.

On the other hand, when it comes to scientific research, we could not simply use practical use as a criterion. If practical use is the only criterion for government to determinate which scientific research should be supported, we may miss lots of opportunities on the way of society development. Because the criterion should be established by the fact that if the research can lead to society advance but practical use. In most time, research may have no practical use in some time but can give rise to a spiritual improvement and acknowledge.

In a ward, from what I have said, I agree that our government should support the scientific research even there is no practical use.

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Agree or disagree? If child want to do well in school, parents should limit the hours of watching TV programs or movies.
///Should school child be limited on the hours of watching TV program and movie?///

As one of the most useful and essential part in our daily lives, television and movie have brought enormous benefits to us, such as transmitting news, educating public, and offering a virtual stage for entertaining. However, among these benefits, some advantages about television and movie may be regarded as disadvantages for children when we talk about children's study. As I concerned that parents should limit the hours of watching television programs or movies. At first place, children are easily subjected to lots of temptations, thus their immature ability of controlling themselves could lead to a waste of time. Suppose when a child watch television programs or movies freely and with out limiting, he/she may have not enough time for sleeping at night , which directly cause him/her cannot concentrate his/her energy on study. Then, consequently, behave badly in school.

Second, since there are lots of unsuitable elements like violent and erotic elements in some programs and moives, we parents should give a guide to children and limit their watching time. As everyone all need a period of time for growing up and becoming mature, if there is no guide during these time, he may have a probability to do wrong things. When it comes to child, he may do bad in school, and even commit a crime. From this point, we must take child's disadvantage of distinguishing good things and bad things into account. We should reduce the probability to contact those negative influences. And by limiting the hours of watching television is a good way to protect child away from unsuitable things. When child is guided probably in watching television, the directly consequence will come out which child will preform well not only in class but also in his interesting field.

Among the reasons to limit child's hour of watching television, physical condition is another reason to support this agreement. Commonly, although a child, who ignore the importance to improve his body condition, do well in school, he will eventually lose his advantages in school. We can see numerous examples to illustrate this. For example, one of my friends named Jack, was once a excellent guy in school. But he obsessed himself in movies, he never went out for doing exercises. At last, unfortunately, he broke his body and had to give up the opportunity for further study.

In short, child is child. He is immature and lack of doing decision and lack of distinguishing good things and bad things. so from what I have discussed above, I definitely agree with the statement that If child wants do well in school, his parents must limit his hours of watching television.

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人们应该坚持自己有挑战性的梦想还是注重实现现实的梦想

Whatever difficulty he/ she come across in his/her life, everyone will have and hold a dream all the time. However, not everyone enable to realize his/her dream in the real world. So some people insist that they should keep their dream, even though there are lots of challenges, while some people give their approvals to the point that we should take real situations into consideration. Especially/particularly, when it comes to me, I definitely agree with the former view.



Firstly, the dream with lots of challenges do not mean have no connection with realistic world, and still can be realized eventually. Because challenges can stimulate us to overcome difficulties. When I was a litter boy, I have ever dreamed to go abroad for my further study. However, for the lack of enough money and enough confidence, I nearly give up my dream because of those challenges. But, at last, with my full effort in my study, I come close to my dream. In this route to the dream, I surmount numerous difficulties by the inspiring of challenges, simultaneously, gain my confidence. And I also did several part job in my vacations to earn money. Now I'm preparing industrially for my dream. Had I give up my challenging dream, I will have a utterly different live which may be not what I want.



Second, in the dream with challenges, we may find or discovery some potential capacity which we would not notice it in the dream for realistic world. During the procedures of preserving our dream, particularly the one full of challenges, we may encounter a large number of frustrations and blocks. In order to surmount them, we must use every effort as we can. And we will find out where we are week, where are have more merits. This mostly give rise to a opportunity to recognize ourselves and improve ourselves in those points. For instance, before I prepare for the TOEFL test, I do not realize that I can speak very well in English. As I'm concerned that I was so week in speaking. But for the dream of going abroad for further study, I confirm this challenge bravely and eventually find out that I could speak better than that I have thought.



But does it all good when we keep a dream which is full of challenges? The answer should be not absolutely yes or not. It is up to conditions and every person. If some one still want to be a dancer after a serious accident, he may  never get success. Because, in this condition, he will face a challenge like a big mountain which he have any few probability to surmount it. So he should change his dream either to be a successful psychologist or any other possible one, then he will make his dream come true. It means he should pay more attention on the probability of realizing dream but the dream with lots of challenges.



After all, it is rare to suffer some terrible accident. From what I have discussed, I agree that we should choice a dream with lots of challenges. By doing so we can not only find out what we essentially be good at but have not noticed, but also can realize our dreams eventually.

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人们应该坚持自己有挑战性的梦想还是注重实现现实的梦想


Whateverdifficulty he/ she comes across in his/her life,everyone will have and hold a dream all the time. However, not everyone enables to realize his/her dream in the real world.So somepeople insist that they should keep their dream, even though there are lots ofchallenges, while some （用other会好点） people givetheir approvals to the point that we（本分句和前分句比较，用people就更完善了。） should takereal situations into consideration（这个说得有点轻了，仅仅是考虑现实情况。换一下强调有的人更注重现实的梦想，能更突出些。）. Especially/particularly, when it comesto me, I definitely agree with the former view.  

Firstly, the dream with lots of challenges do not mean have（having或者用从句） noconnection with realistic world, and still can be realized eventually. Becausechallenges can stimulate us to overcome difficulties. When I was a litter boy,I have ever dreamed to go abroad for my further study. However, for the lack ofenough money and enough confidence, I nearly give up my dream because of thosechallenges. But, at last, with my full effort in my study, I come close to mydream. In this route to the dream, I surmount numerous difficulties by theinspiring of challenges, simultaneously, gain my confidence. And I also didseveral part job in my vacations to earn money. Now I'm preparing industriallyfor my dream. Had I give up my challenging dream, I will have a utterlydifferent live which may be not what I want.在说梦想challenging的时候应该再具体一点，把challenging的地方体现出来，而不是仅仅概括地说说。
Second, in the dreamwith challenges, we may find or discovery some potential capacity which wewould not notice it in the dream for realistic world. During the procedures ofpreserving our dream, particularly the one full of challenges, we may encountera large number of frustrations and blocks. In order to surmount them, we mustuse every effort as we can. And we will find out where we are week（weak）, where are havemore merits(where we have more advantages). This mostly give rise to aopportunity to recognize ourselves and improve ourselves in those points. Forinstance, before I prepare for the TOEFL test, I do not realize that I canspeak very well in English. As I'm concerned that I wasso week in speaking.(这句话是表示我没意识到我能说英语那么好是因为我太担心了吗？？没懂。。。不过你应该摆这句话和上一句连起来，要不然这句话很突兀，而且使得意思不够流畅。) But for the dream of going abroad forfurther study, I confirm （confirmthe challenge bravely??confirm不是证实吗？confirm bravely? 用facethe challenge bravely 会更好些~）this challenge bravely and eventuallyfind out that I could speak better than that（what）
I have thought.

But does it all good when we keep a dream which is full of challenges? Theanswer should be not absolutely yes or not. It is up to conditions and everyperson. If some one still want to be a dancer after a serious accident, hemay  never get success. Because, in this condition, he will face a challenge like a big mountain（这样表述不恰当，大山一样的挑战，简单说就是挑战对应的大山，但是准确的说应该是登等大山一样的挑战，因为大山不是挑战，登大山才是。这样表述更准确。） which he have any few probability tosurmount it. So he should change his dream either to be a successfulpsychologist or any other possible one, then he will make his dream come true.It means he should pay more attention on（to ）
the probability of realizing dream butthe dream with lots of impossible challenges.


After all, itis rare to suffer some terrible accident. From what I have discussed, I agreethat we should choice a dream with lots of challenges. By doing so we can notonly find out what we essentially be good at but have not noticed, but also canrealize our dreams eventually.
除了在每段中标记出来的红色部分，我觉得倒数第二段有些多余。你的文章结构：引出自己的观点=》第一点理由，挑战性的理想也可以成功=》第二点理由，挑战性的理想可以激发潜能认识自己=》问题不是绝对的，追求过于挑战性的理想不会成功，有时也要考虑一下现实=》大多数情况下仍要坚持有挑战性的。我觉得倒数第二段的内容和你要论述的内容没有太多的联系，题目也不是绝对的，你的选择也不是绝对的，那么再去说我们不应该绝对地选择挑战性的就没有必要了。抛开这点不说，托福作文似乎不是那么注重考试者的批判性思维，不像SAT，托福更注重考试者能不能把自己的观点说明白，所以倒数第二段搞不好还会削弱你论证的强度。个人意见哈~仅供参考~~JJJ  有想法互相交流啊！！ 嘿嘿