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发表于 2011-11-24 00:39:08 |显示全部楼层

1123-100924NA Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? College or University should offer students more preparation before they start working.

College or university education plays a significant role in socialization, through which students not only learn the basic norms and customs of their culture, but also grasp fundamental knowledge and the latest development of the world, in order to better adapt to the society. As such, there is no doubt that college or university education should help students become more qualified to their future career, which however does not mean that the only task schools take is to teach their students specific skills or techniques.

Without question, in order to help students better prepare for the future pressure of finding a good job, schools, especially at the level of college and university, should design specific curriculum for their students to learn and even become an expert in that area. For example, if one's dream is to be a great sociologist, he or she will benefit a lot from the curriculum that is aimed at teaching students basic theories put forward by some greatest sociologists in the world, and from the researches which are designed to aid them to associate the theory with the reality. In this way, school education offers their students good preparations for their career.

What's more, in pursuing an advanced career and self-realization, students also need to study a broad range of general knowledge which is not only limited to their major. Let's take the position of managers as an example. There is no doubt that an excellent manager should have a profound understanding of the economic circumstances in order to maximize the profits of his or her company. In addition, he or she also need to have a grasp of the political policies and even laws in order to have a whole view of the situation his or her company in. Thus, college and university are responsible in [url=]nurturing[/url][U1] [url=]well-developed students.[/url][U2]

However, future career is not the only concern of schools or even individual student, because moral senses, responsibility as a civil man or basic ideas of human rights are more important for the future of the individual and the whole society. Even if all the students could become the leaders in their own area, the society will not be in a harmony and peace if they fight with each other without sticking to principles and laws. In a word, cultivating students' moral senses and some other qualities is also of great significance to the human society.

All in all, college and university should adopt a curriculum aimed at imparting fundamental knowledge and skills to students in order to help them pursue career success. However at the same time, don't forget to cultivate their students to be more responsible and self-disciplined.

写的很好
论证地很精彩
都不知道可以改哪里了。

[U1]查了这词，好像更倾向于是培养植物的。

[U2]不太明白不well-developed 的student就不培养吗？