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carol0607UID: 3022610

本人第一次写作文  超时是肯定的了 还自己添加修改过两回 但是字数还是没达到400  往路过的大侠们狂拍砖！
Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? For a person to succeed in life knowledge gained through study is more important than the ability to be creative.









People who succeed have many kinds of careers. Some of them maybe were a writer, politician or scientist. But all of them have common character is that they have creativity and use it to improve themselves becomes more successful.

On the one hand, new matters always replace the outdated. With the development of society, you must keep a giant leap and never stand on original place. If you want to be an engineer, then you should learn new technology to improve the aircraft, make them more efficiency. On the other hand, to gain creativity also can practice your problem-solving skills and critical-thinking skills. If you want to be an inventor, you should find problems in unknown area and come up with the new ideas rather than accept knowledge all the time.

Every single one of us should study hard in school in order to have a strong foundation of knowledge. However it just a basic abilities, we need our knowledge and problem-solving skills we learn in science and math to cure disease like cancer and AIDS, and to develop new energy technologies and protect our environment. We need our insights and critical-thinking skills we gain in history and social studies to fight poverty and homelessness, crime and discrimination to protect our nation more fair and more free. But what you learn in school is not enough, you can not come up with next Iphone and medicine or vaccine only through knowledge. You should get more experience to develop your talent your skills and your intellect so that make more surprise on your work.

Knowledge is like weapon, to be creative is like a skill to use the weapon. In the ancient world, people used same weapon, but different people make a different behavior. Soldier use their weapon to give full scope to fight in wars. We should be a person like soldier to use our knowledge create innovation.

carol0607UID: 3022610

怎么 没人啊

songwei007UID: 2878972

Successful people have various professions such as writer, politician and scientist. But all of them have one common character: creativity. What's more, they try to take advantage of their creativity to enhance themselves and become more successful.

To begin with, with the development of our society, you must keep abreast of the rapid living pace rather than stand still. For example, if you want to be an engineer, you should learn much more new technological knowledge to invent more efficient aircrafts. Meanwhile, creativity can also render you better problem-solving skills and critical thinking abilities.恩，觉得楼主这个关于inventor的例子和前面engineer的例子有点类似，而且楼主可以进一步扩展例子。举得例子详尽一点以便于支持自己的论点。

Moreover, everyone should study hard at school so as to have a good command of foundational academic knowledge. Nevertheless, what's more important is our ability to apply these knowledge to solve the pratical problems such as curing the cancers and AIDS, developing more environmentally-friendly technologies, or conducting experiments upon new clean energies. And we also need the humanitarian knowledge to fight over poverty, homelessness, high criminal rate and discrimination, making out of a more justice and free world.接着这个关于Iphone的没搞懂要说神马？楼主是想说理论要和现实结合吗？

恩，感觉把知识比喻成武器会不会太aggressive了，想想换一个。To sum up, knowledge is a useful tool in our everyday life, and to be creative is to skillfully use this tool.之类的后边改动一下？

songwei007UID: 2878972

哦，不好意思，有一个词组用错啦。第二段应该是keep abreast with不是keep abreast of 与···同步。我理解你原文的意思，尽量不改动。楼主加油，好作文是改出来的。理论+例子，例子要展开(⊙o⊙)哦

carol0607UID: 3022610

太 感谢了  我是新人

第一次有人愿意给我批改    LS是好人！！！！！

祝考试高分！！！！！！！！！！