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pengdegaoUID: 2908139

7月20日  独立
2/13/2010 Do you agree with the followingstatement? People holding different views cannot achieve success as a team.
37 minutes, 390 words


The Germany philosopher Leibniz once said:"Two leaves cannot be exactly the same in the world." Consequently, it is common that people from a team hold different views. Some people would argue that those who holding different views cannot achieve success as a team.However, as far as I am concerned, the reality is just on the opposite side: people with different views are more likely to achieve success as a team.


As an old saying goes that:" All roads lead to Rome." And another saying goes:" Two heads are better than one." People with different point of view would probably approach to the solutions of a single problem through different ways. And fortunately, usually more than one method would be feasible. Among these solutions, team members can discuss and choose an optimal one. On the other hand, if a team of people all hold the same view; there would be only one solution that people can work on.This would reduce the possibility of a team to succeed.


In addition, people with a certain way of thinking and solving problems would easily fall into some pitfalls, which is called stereotyped thinking. In this case, people would simply follow some routines and fixed process to do things and neglect certain potential hazard. Supposing that now people are working with some colleges who carry different views and thinking differently, they could easily find out the potential hazard and help the team to prevent the pitfalls. Moreover, the team could take the remarkable ideas from both sides to form a better plan, which would assist the team to achieve a greater success.


Admittedly, a team should come to a consensus to obtain success, which means, people holding different views should finally agree with each other. If this consensus cannot be reached, the team would be trapped in endless argument and finally fall apart. In this case, people with different views cannot achieve success as a team. Therefore, to become success, people in a team should try to cooperate with others despite their different ideas.


To sum up, I do not think people holding different views work together would prevent their team from success. To the contrary, I consider that diversity would provide a team with various of ideas and approaches to do work, thus enhance the possibility of a team to success.

lyn7981UID: 2758158

写得思路很清楚~还没分组，随便逛逛就看到了你的文章，特别喜欢你的倒数第二段的让步，写得又漂亮又合逻辑。大赞一个~
也帮我看看我的文章，可以吗？我也是新来的，嘿嘿~互相批改，一起提高。
https://bbs.gter.net/thread-1284659-2-1.html

theflyfishUID: 2101420

写得非常好，受益匪浅。

pengdegaoUID: 2908139

7月21日
9/11/2009 Do you agree with the following statement? It is only worth watching movies that can teach us something about real life?


Scenes in movies are just like a compressed world, which reflect almost every aspect of our real life. Therefore, some people state that it is only worth watching movies that can teach us something about real life. However, I consider the effect of movies is beyond lessons about real life. Movies provide us opportunities to jump out our daily lives and have day dreams.


To begin with, some movies satisfy people's urge to experience various life styles and to know the outer space of our planet. Science fiction movies always aim to achieve this goal. The first and most famous science fiction movie about exta-terrestrial called "E.T." is a cogent illustration. It tells a story about an E.T. land on earth accidentally and finally makes friends with some human children. That film was popular all over the world and most of my friends have seen it. It tells nothing about real life but demonstrates us a monster like intelligent creature from outer space. This just satisfies people's imagination and instinct of adventure.


Moreover, movies can provide us with an outlet of our pressures and fears in real lives. One of the most important functions of movie is to entertain. Most people including me like watching comedy movies after a period of hard working. The reason is straightforward: when watch comedy movies, you can just stop thinking and leave all the annoying stuffs of your daily lives aside to enjoy two hours of relaxation. Afterward, you will have a high spirit and get to work again.


Admittedly, most movies would implant some notions or knowledge that can teach us something about real life. Nonetheless, it should not be the only reason for people to like movies. Pragmatic principle is definitely important for our life, but sometimes, certain fantasy is equally essential for us human.


To sum up, although most movies would give lessons which would be helpful for our real life, the effect of movies is quite beyond education. It also provides us with an outlet of our emotions and satisfies our urge to exploit the unknown.

lizeeUID: 3004702

Scenes in movies are just like a compressed world, which reflect almost every aspect of our real life. Therefore, some people state that it is only worth watching movies that can teach us something about real life. However, I consider the effect of movies is beyond lessons about real life. Movies provide us with opportunities to jump out our daily lives(life) and have day dreams.

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To begin with, some movies satisfy people's urge to experience various life styles and to know the outer space of our planet. Science fiction movies always aim to achieve this goal. The first and most famous science fiction movie about exta-terrestrial called "E.T." is a cogent illustration. It tells a story about an E.T. lands on earth accidentally and finally makes friends with some human children. That film was popular all over the world and most of my friends have seen it. It tells nothing about real life but demonstrates us a monster like intelligent creature from outer space. This just satisfies people's imagination and instinct of adventure.' a# m2 Z1 O& r感觉简单句较多,按戴云教主的说法the 长er the better~可能写长句会显得更霸气
Moreover, movies can provide us with an outlet of our pressures and fears in real lives(life). One of the most important functions of movie is to entertain. Most people including me like watching comedy movies after a period of hard working. The reason is straightforward: when watch comedy movies, you can just stop thinking and leave all the annoying stuffs of your daily lives aside to enjoy two hours of relaxation. Afterward, you will have a high spirit and get to work again.或许可以再举一个例子,比如说看汽车总动员能让自己放松开心起来?* s8 @' H) l: a5 @& l. c+ j

Admittedly, most movies would implant some notions or knowledge that can teach us something about real life. Nonetheless, it should not be the only reason for people to like movies. Pragmatic principle is definitely important (indispensable)for our life, but sometimes, certain fantasy is equally essential for us human.这点好像没怎么说清楚,可能时间不够了?

To sum up, although most movies would give lessons which would be helpful for our real life, the effect of movies is quite beyond education. It also provides us with an outlet of our emotions and satisfies our urge to exploit the unknown.

在我看来,楼主句子都不错啊,变换比较灵活,也读得比较舒爽.但好像长度有点短.文章字数好像也蛮少的,因为据说500字以上比较适合~


欢迎修改我的作文哈~
https://bbs.gter.net/thread-1286628-1-2.html

pengdegaoUID: 2908139

5# lizee
此话当真！？OG上怎么说300字就够了。。。。

eclipse9614UID: 2886430

6# pengdegao
请不要听别人误导，300即可，当年gre写了700字还是低分，ets不是注重字数，是质量