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我的作文,拿TPO12的,您看看吧~~我大概写作文就这种水平,不求您逐字修改,希望您评评我的写作提点思路等方面的意见。感谢了!!!
综合:
The speaker disagrees with the passage, and he does not think the teenage girl in the portrait is Austen.
Firstly, he says although the Austen's famaily has recognized the portrait as a portaitportrait of the author, the fact may not be what as the passage asserted. Because the year when Austen's family gave permission to use the portrait was about 40 years after Austen's death, the family members might not know what young Austen really look like. Thus, the reason in the passage may be incorrect.
Secondly, Austen had a large family and she could have some relatives to look alike, so the portaitportrait may be one of her family members'. In fact, it is said the portaitportrait may belong to one of her descendant decendances'. Therefore, the passage may provide a wrong statement.
Thirdly, contrary to the main idea of the passage, the portrait painter might not be in London when Austen was a teenager. It is said when Humphery went to London, Austen had been very older than the teenage girl in the portrait.
In sum, the reasons in the passage may be unconvincing.
独立:
In the university , it requires students to take many obligatory obligory courses as well as several optional courses, and it seems such requirement is very famous in many different kinds of schools in different countries. Is it reasonable? In fact, it may be the most efficient method for the students to prepare theirselvesthemselves for their future.
There is no denyingy to say that different courescourses could help students attain different kinds of knowledge in different fields, and then they could know the world better. Being good at science may help them know the thoerytheory of nature, while being familiar with psycologypsychology could make them be aware of the inter world in one's mind. With both of the knowlegeknowledge on chemistry and biology, students may easier to figure out how the pollution comes out and how to deal with the unpleasant pollutants; understanding the main idea of the physics and painting, students may bring us more nice works.
To go further, the more they know the world, the more opportunities they could gain to find their occupations in the future. They may be more clearclearer with what they want to do and what they can do. Even though they may fail to choose a desire job at the beginning, they still have a large range of occupations that they have known well.
I acknowlegeacknowledge that specialized inspecialized in one specific subject may help them master more the information in the field and they may make some contributions in the area. However, they may looselose the opportunities to get more inspirations from the other unfamiliar fields. thatThat is to say, the subject may inhibit they from thinking from other perspectives. |
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