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TOPIC 01：Why do you think people attend college or university? Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.

People who graduated from the high schoolhas many choices about how to continue their life. There are few peopledirectly persuade a career opportunity while the other people apply for auniversity or college with divert reasons such as getting new experiences,preparing for career and increasing knowledge. In my opinion, people shouldattend college or university instead of other choices after graduating from thehigh school.

As we all know, people who want to obtaingreat honest and achievements in today's society must possess lots of usefulskills and technology, such as extremely thoughts, excellent expression abilityand extraordinary professional knowledge, which can only be found with a fatherstudying and researching in university. With the experienced and thoughtfulstudying, people would become professional and experienced with the businesswhich they majored in.

Additionally, with the study in universityfirst, people who prefer to get a career opportunity after graduate fromuniversity also can prepare the job in a useful and helpful way. It isobviously that students could use the resources such as the Internet, libraryand textbook to receive whatever knowledge such as the working preparation andincreasing experiences they want.

Finally, the faith of people about why toget knowledge could be the most cardinal ingredient in this argument. Forexample, Zhou Enlai, the first premier of P.R.China, having a thoughtful and wonderfulexplain about why he would learning and studying, "for the erection ofChina", he said. If our people who have the magnificent will pay back tothe society, that would be a great improvement to our life.

To conclude with above points, people shouldattend college or university when they after graduating from high school sincethey can learn more about how to construct a healthful and wealthy life notonly for every single people but also benefit to the entire society.


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