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199. "Truly innovative ideas do not arise from groups of people, but from individuals. When groups try to be creative, the members force each other to compromise and, as a result, creative ideas tend to be weakened and made more conventional. Most original ideas arise from individuals working alone."



Creativity may be the key ability to distinguish human beings from animal. It is important to humans especially in today’ society that highly develops and changes. The resource of the innovative idea is something like a vigorous discussion that has never unique to the sociologists. What is prevailing accepted, however misunderstand the concept of innovative ideas, is that they come from individual but not groups of people. The truth is not absolutely like the assertion.

Firstly, the concept of innovative ideas should be clearly explained. Innovative ideas mean some ideas that can bring innovation or something new, including new idea, new concept, new theory etc. All these are related with the results, but not the process. Realizing what mentioned above, then come to the assertion that the speaker holds. When groups try to be creative, the members sometimes make compromise that cause the true creativity be weakened. But the fact is that those who make compromise because they realize their ideas cannot bring more creative things than others’. Such compromise causes the result both perfect and original. If an individual do the job all by himself, his or her work may lead no result at all. It is hard to say which is the true innovative idea.

Moreover, an innovative idea is like a system that every step needs exact demonstration, only by this, the idea can be creative but not a dream. The problem provoked, how can one do such job more perfectly then a team? The cooperation makes the job easier and precise, through which the idea became more achievable. An individual can have an “original” idea, but hardly can one make the idea perfect enough to put into practice. Such idea cannot be claimed as a creative one but an absurd one. The Noble Prize winners these years are almost from some work-teams, in which they put their juvenile idea into a mature one, a more achievable one. Such process per se is an activity of creativity.

Is there any creative activity practiced all by individual? Of course there are. The realm of art needs the creativities all by the artists themselves. In this realm, the situation is just like what the speaker says. Team-work may lead to the death of innovative idea. As is known to all, Mona Lisa is one of the most great works of Da Vinci, but if he did the job with another famous painter Picasso (suppose they lived in the same period) the painting maybe not what we know today, and also it maybe not famous for the creativity.

In sum, the true innovative ideas some from both individuals and groups, because both them can bring the something new, which is most important according to the concept. The creative activities practiced by groups can be even more encouraged. Because it is more possible for team-work than individuals’ jobs to make the ideas come true.

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呵呵，我来试一试。

199. "Truly innovative ideas do not arise from groups of people, but from individuals. When groups try to be creative, the members force each other to compromise and, as a result, creative ideas tend to be weakened and made more conventional. Most original ideas arise from individuals working alone."


Creativity may be the key ability to distinguish human beings from animal(s). It is important to humans especially in today’(s) society that highly develops and changes. The resource of the innovative idea is something like a vigorous discussion that has never (been) unique to the sociologists. What is prevailing accepted, however (,) misunderstand(ing) the concept of innovative ideas, is that they come from individual but not groups of people. The truth is not absolutely like the assertion.

Firstly, the concept of innovative ideas should be clearly explained. Innovative ideas mean some ideas that can bring innovation or something new, including new idea, new concept, new theory etc. All these are related with(to) the results, but not the process. Realizing what mentioned above, then come to the [assertion that the speaker holds](the author's preference). When groups try to be creative, the members sometimes make compromise that cause the true creativity be weakened. But the fact is that those who make compromise because they realize their ideas cannot bring more creative things than others’. Such compromise causes the result both perfect and original. If an individual do the job all by himself, his or her work may lead no result at all. It is hard to say which is the true innovative idea.
（这一段，你对INNOVATION下的定义我觉得多余，而且你这一段缺少例子）

Moreover, an innovative idea is like a system that every step needs exact demonstration, only by this, the idea can be creative but not a dream. The problem provoked, how can one do such job more perfectly then(in) a team? The cooperation makes the job easier and precise, through which the idea became(become) more achievable.（这句做结论放在后边） An individual can have an “original” idea, but hardly can one make the idea perfect enough to put into practice.（你要简单表书一下原因，如一个人的观点总有漏洞，或有些IDEA的实现需要团队的协作） Such idea cannot be claimed as a creative one but an absurd one. The Noble Prize winners these years are almost from some work-teams, in which they put their juvenile (tentative) idea into a mature one, a more achievable one. Such process per se is an activity of creativity.

Is there any creative activity practiced all by individual? Of course there are. The realm of art needs the creativities all by the artists themselves. In this realm, the situation is just like what the speaker says. Team-work may lead to the death of innovative idea.（不一定吧，太绝对了） As is known to all, Mona Lisa is one of the most great works of Da Vinci, but if he did the job with another famous painter Picasso (suppose they lived in the same period) the painting maybe(would) not (be) what we know today, and also it maybe(would) not (be) famous for the creativity.
（你要给出简单的分析，和结论）

In sum, (Admittedly) the true innovative ideas （some）DEL from both individuals and groups (should be laid enough stress on), because both (of) them can bring the something new, which is most important according to the concept. (However) The creative activities practiced by groups can be even more encouraged. Because it is more possible for team-work than individuals’ jobs to make the ideas come true.

首段：合作和个人都有各自的不足1、合作容易COMPROMISE；2个人容易没有结果。
二段：个人的观点太模糊，需要集体的协作。
三段：对于艺术创作来说不应该合作。

我觉得根据你的结论，可以把你提到的个人的创作如何容入集体协作单用一段写。你的首段可以放在结尾作为让步。也就是说：1、WHY个人需要集体2、HOW个人如何容入3、但有些不可合作

总体写的还不错，注意文章段落的展开，多举例子（鬼子喜欢），最好用点题à论述à例子à分析à结论的展开方式；不好举例的用分层展开（FIRST，SECOND）或加入让步转折结构。

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3x many "a lot"
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