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舟随流UID: 3190282

不好意思，今天才改好这篇作文
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sd1053774UID: 2749829

修改好了

xiaoniao123UID: 2541605

"byebye,舟随流，sd"
Thank you a lot!

xiaoniao123UID: 2541605

11月3日 20101210NA Do you prefer to finish a project completely then to another one or do two or several projects at a time?
Most of us would like to concentrate the attetntion to complete just one project for they believe that it will distract people's vim when they do two or several projects at the same time.However,I can hardly agree with such statement and I prefer trying two or several projects at a time.

Firstly,it will save time if I accomplish several tasks at the same time.For example,if there are two projects,when you have done some parts of one project,and the leaving parts have to be done in several weeks due to some inevitable factors,like as you have planned how to build a house,but it is always rainy during the whole month,then at this time you can start to do the second project which may need to make a drawing picture about the decoration of another house,rather than waiting to build the first house until the stop of the raining,if to do so,it is rather possible that you will waste a month's time.So doing two or even more subjects can reduce the possiblity of dawdling.

Moreover,doing two or several projects not only can save time but also can make us be productive and effective.I always believe that when you make good use of the time,it is probable for all of us to complete two or even more projects during the time-limited period.There is a sipmple example to illustrate this.Taking the process of making a cup of tea,if we just do one thing every time,then we may do as the following constructions:Firstly we may boil our kettle,then after the water is boiling,we start to wash the teapot and the cup,to take out of the tea,then after completing these steps,we just put the boiling water and tea into the teapot,then a cup of tea will be well done.In fact,if we can make a good plan of the process of making this cup of tea,we can do things better and more effectively.For instance,during the period of boiling our kettle,we can also wash the teapot and cup,and take out of the tea in advance,then what we just to do is to wait for the boiling water,or maybe at the time we have washed the teapot and cup,the water is only just begingning to boil.Note that how important it is to make a good plan of doing things effectively,especially when faced with two or more projects in the work.

All in all,I consider it is better to accomplish two or several projects at a time rather than only focusing your energy on one thing,because the society will not allow us to wait with the high speed of social development,so we need to try our best to learn how to plan all the things well and to organize a team to make them in an ordered state and we should also keep in mind that wasting time is rather bad.

lizlee0420UID: 3163467

19# xiaoniao123
不好意思啊xiaoniao，今天晚了，不过改好了，个人意见，参考一下咯~~有不对的欢迎质疑~~

lizlee0420UID: 3163467

不好意思我忘了说了，我写的题目是自己的，没按着作业的题目 麻烦你啦~~

lizlee0420UID: 3163467

20# lizlee0420
真的传错了……脑残……

xiaoniao123UID: 2541605

22# lizlee0420
不好意思哦，周末一直很忙，今晚帮你改！

xiaoniao123UID: 2541605

11月7日 20100313 Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? People can learn more from watching television than reading books.
With the proliferation of television,especially in contemporay society,it is no wander that watching TV has become the most crucial enjoyment style for almost all the people,in contrast,it seems that people become reading less books.However then, will we can say that people can learn much more from watching TV than reading books?The answer is obviously no.I prefer to consider learning more from reading books rather than from watching TV.
Admittedly,watching TV can expand one's outlook to some extent,such as through watching TV news,we can know what happened in the country or even all over the world,maybe we have never been to India,but we can know they wear sari in the daily life and their computer industry is highly developed,etc.Yet few of us have ever stopped to think about what else it brings about except its positive effects.Consider,the so-called important things(which the TV station ragards) are always covered and discussed without gaps,and the uncrucial things are always ignored,or not being told.Especially in prearranging public news,television makes decision for them.Gradually,we lose our ability of critical thinking.
However,reading books will avoid this negative effect.For in books,the authors just expresses the viewpoints of his or her own,rather than considering its social effects which are always emphasized on the television shows.And through reading books,readers can learn how to think in a proper way,and reflect on why he or she say like that.We will be forced to think whether what he or she said is right or wrong.But when we are watching television,we just accept what they said in it complyingly without reflecting,then we can form our own viewpoints and gain a good sense of issues from reading rather than watching TV,because you should understand what the words' meaning is in the books at first,after then try to reflect on what you can acquire from the material,as you watch TV shows in a flash,you have no time to reflect in your brain.
Moreover,reading books can allow us to learn more about something which is not permitted in the television.As we know that authors can express his or her opinion freely as I said above,then sometimes we can obtain some more details of the event than televisions,such as a certain historical events,which will not be showed in the screen,but from one insider's narratation（always in a book）,we can be more close to the true face of the history.It is rather interesting than watching TV.In addition,when I read books,I can always find some feelings special,like I can understand the authors' inner heart well as if we have the same experiences and sentiments at the same time,in the same world,and I am always moved with what the authors have expressed.Then from reading books we make our inner hearts world enrich.But in the televison screen,that chances of gaining
that feeling are pretty few.
All in all,I would like to prefer that people can learn more from reading books rather than watching television,and I always have the feeling that I will be not comfortable if I am not reading some books in a month,but I can put up with not watching television in a year,because I can gain a lot from reading books.

Heather890704UID: 3167004

改好啦~~




11月7日 20100313 Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? People can learn more from watching television than reading books.* d+ @# P6 d. }7 _4 N
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3 P* I8 N' C/ g- M( m' C: a& OAll in all, I would like to prefer that people can learn more from reading books rather than watching television, and I always have the feeling that I will be not comfortable if I am not reading some books in a month, but I can put up with not watching television in a year, because I can gain a lot from reading books.

小建议：脉络可以更加清晰些。行文可以更加简洁些。

加油~~

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[U4]建议删除，太口语化。



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[U6]一般后面不加句子的吧，用for example吧。



[U7]有些拖沓，建议前面半句删除，后面改成even though we have never been to India,



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Heather890704UID: 3167004

哎呀。。好像看不清楚。不好意思。
要不你加我QQ吧。379374979
我给你传过去~~

xiaoniao123UID: 2541605

26# Heather890704 谢谢啦！加你为好友了，我们同一天考啊！不过你的作文我要到中午或晚上才有时间给你改啊！不好意思啦！

xiaoniao123UID: 2541605

11月8日 20101009NA 住城市还是农村更好的照顾家人？
Living in a country or in a city is always a problem that existse for all the people,especially in contemporary countries.For living in those  two different places,each has its own's advantages,like if we choose to set home in the country,not only can we feel the clearer and more fresh air,listen to the bird's singing in the morning,but also we can see the shining star in the sky in the evening,which are all lack of insight in the city.Whereas living in the city,our children can receive better education and medical care rather than in the country.However,as it refers to which  is better to live in to take care of the family members,I prefer to choose living in the city.

The two most crucial things for the family members are health and education.Every family almost has children.Then they need receive good education.In the country,there are few excellent teachers that can offer the education your children want to obtain.For example,my cousin is living in the country,and now he is wanting to learn how to play the violin,but nobody can teach him,for there is no such teacher in the country,which will not happen in the city.Moreover,children from cities have more chances to go into excellent universities.As we know that city universities often offer large spaces for local residents
，while they have relatively fewer ones for students in the country.

In addition,health is another important factor to consider whether to live in cities or countries,especially for the child and the old.In the country,if children and the old people get sick,there are no good hospitals to take them to.I have been  experienced the poor medical condition some time ago.My father was taken to a country hospital for the high blood pressure,after living in the hospital for one week,his blood pressure is still high enough that we have to send him to a famous hospital in the capital city of our province,then after three days living in that hospital,my father's blood pressure
turns to the normal state.

All in all,hearlth care facilities and schools are of excellent quality.Children living in the cities can aquire the education they want and expand their outlooks which are all beneficial to their growing up and development in the future,at the same time,the old can obtain immediate and convinient medical care when they are in cities.Consequently,people should
choose living in cities instead of in countries.

byebyehakuUID: 3124349

11.8改好了 这是我的作文，欢迎批改https://bbs.gter.net/viewthread.php?tid=1292096&extra=&highlight=&page=17

xiaoniao123UID: 2541605

11月9日 20101029NA 你同意或不同意，那些成功的人的 character，communication skill  是最重要的:
Almost every people desired to achieve success,then how to become one member of the successful people's group need us to reflect.Obviously,learning the characters of those people is a good vehicle for gaining success.From those vast excellent qualities,which are some common characters leading to their successful ways?It is no denying that we should give priority to the communication skill that to bring about their succuss，no matter it is in the political,business or scientifical area.

In the realm of politics,it is crucial for a political leader to own the communication skill.Without the ability would Obama collected enough money from the common people who supported him to have access to the way of the America president.Moreover,if Premier zhou did not possess the excellent ability of deplomatical strategy and communication,the leaders from other nations will not approvel of the famous Five Principles of Peaceful Coexistence,and Zhou will not become well-known to the world.Thus,I think the view is realistic.

Accordingly,in the business realm,the communicating skill is indispensable,too,if you want to make a deal with other business man.Such as you want to promote a new product to the consumer,you need to present the merits of it,how well it works,and what benefits and conviences they will bring to them.Lacking such ability,the consumer must not be attracted to your products, much less to buy your products.Then you will gain the failure of the deal.

Maybe someone may argue that in the sciences,people would not need to be in possession of such quality,they may say some other qualities will dorminate the role of people's success,such as the intelligence,the working ability,whether can endure
the high pressure,etc.Indeed if a scientist lacks of the communication skill,he may have narrow visions of the field,even lose the opportunity to access to the way of success.An apt example to illustrate this is the relative theory of Einstein,if he did not keep in touch with the English Lord Eddington using the letters,his thoery will not be accepted so fast.

All in all,everyone is not a lonely island,each of us has to keep in touch with varieties of people,then if we want to be the successful people like Bill Gates,Obama,or Einstein or Eddington, the first thing you need to do is to own the character of communication skills.