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11月11日占座

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11月12日作业占座，拖欠了好多作业！

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2011.11.14100522NA A or D?Working at home by using telephone and computer is better than working in company's office.
With the highly development of the technology,especially the advent and popularity of the telephone and computers,the working style of people has changed dramatically from the past to today.In the past,people must go to work in a certain location,most of it is in the company.However,more and more people choose to work at home nowadays,because they can employ those advanced tools,like the two popular and effective ones referred to above.Then if someone asks me which I will choose to work,at home or in the company's office,I will have no hesitation to select the former---working at home.
Firstly,working at home,I can take care of my family more well rather than staying in a company,especially for a woman,if she wants to act well as a good wife or responsible mother.When getting up in the morning,firstly I can prepare the breakfast for my husband and children,after they leave home,one goes to work,the other goes to school,then I can begin my working.And when they go back to home,they can have delicious food for them.However, if you work in a company,after a whole day's hard work,do you have enough energy to prepare for a rich dinner?Or in the morning,you have to work in a hurry,will you prepare the porridge or baozi which will cost a large sum of time for your family?The answer is no most of the time.One of my earlier dream is to set up a small but warm family,I think it is happy to have someone in a family,especially when other family members go back home,they will feel  comfortable if they see their wife or mother at home.
Moreover,working at home can save time and avoid having much relationships with other people.If you need to work in a company which is far away from your home,then you had to spend a wealth of time on the way.In fact,many probems are easier to be solved in the telephone than in the company.Because we can use telephone to communicate with the boss or collegues to discuss the problems we faced,and use computers to collect data which the work  is desired, all of these can be done at home,which can also reduce the collision among collegues, which is what I appreciate,for I hate to keep relationships with everyone.Working at home will reduce the chaces to keep in touch with other one,if you have telephone and computers at home.
Lastly,you can do many things you really like in your inner heart if you have a good plan about the usage of time.Like maybe you need not work for a whole day,then after you finish your work,you can do the things of your own.If I can work at home,accomplishing the work,I will learn how to cook,how to picture a beautiful secenery，etc.
All in all,working at home can benefit you a lot,especially if you are a girl or a woman,because you can take good care of your family at the same time you will not lose your work.

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字数 相当的多啊。。。。但是长句 太长了.....

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Working at home by using telephone and computer is better than working in company's office.
With the highly development of the technology,especially the advent and popularity of the telephone and computers,the working style of people has changed dramatically from the past to today.In the past,people must go to work in a certain location,most of it is in the company.However,more and more people choose to work at home nowadays,because they can employ（这个词用的不合适） those advanced tools,like the two popular and effective ones referred to above.Then if someone asks me which I will choose to work,at home or in the company's office,I will have no hesitation to select the former---working at home.5 [$ n' {  L9 ^) [
Firstly, working at home, I can take care of my family more well rather than staying in a company,especially for a woman,if she wants to act well as a good wife or responsible mother.When getting up in the morning,firstly I can prepare the breakfast for my husband and children,after they leave home,one goes to work,the other goes to school,then I can begin my working.And when they go back to home,they can have delicious food for them.However, if you work in a company,after a whole day's hard work,do you have enough energy to prepare for a rich dinner?Or in the morning,you have to work in a hurry,will you prepare the porridge or baozi which will cost a large sum of time for your family?The answer is no most of the time.One of my earlier dream is to set up a small but warm family,I think it is happy to have someone in a family,especially when other family members go back home,they will feel  comfortable if they see their wife or mother at home.
Moreover,working at home can save time and avoid having much relationships with other people(与别人的交流少做正面的好处似乎不妥）.If you need to work in a company which is far away from your home,then you had to spend a wealth of time on the way.In fact,many problems are easier to be solved in the telephone than in the company.Because we can use telephone to communicate with the boss or colleagues to discuss the problems we faced,and use computers to collect data which the work  is desired, all of these can be done at home,which can also reduce the collision among collegues, which is what I appreciate,for I hate to keep relationships with everyone.Working at home will reduce the chaces to keep in touch with other one,if you have telephone and computers at home.
Lastly,you can do many things you really like in your inner heart if you have a good plan about the usage of time.Like maybe you need not work for a whole day,then after you finish your work,you can do the things of your own.If I can work at home,accomplishing the work,I will learn how to cook,how to picture a beautiful secenery，etc（外教说，托福作文里面其实还是不写表示”等等“的词比较好，不明确”.
All in all,working at home can benefit you a lot（from working at home),especially if you are a girl or a woman,because you can take good care of your family at the same time you will not lose your work.这。字数和长句都很多，是加分点
同学，别忘了标点符号后面是要加一个空格的，不加空格是不符合格式的。
拼写错误有点多，字数为王，但是不能写错字啊。
逗号不能连接两个句子，其实没必要那么多长句的，长短结合，才有感觉！

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37# chrisliang
谢谢修改！你们的作业我只能今晚十一点后改了！抱歉啊！

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36# liang0603
谢谢修改啊！你的作业我会今晚改好！不好意思啊！

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11月14日TPO15综合作业

In the lecture,the speaker considers the mearsures as the reading suggsests are probably unsuccussful or may result in an environmental damage.

Firstly,the national fence will not work in stopping the spread of the cane toads,because young toads and their eggs are living in steams,and this water way would carry them to the other side,which can help them to get through the fence in order to eatablish population,then the fence is unlikely to be effective.

Moreover,volunteers could have successfully trapping or destroying toads,but those untrained group may be likely to inadvertently destroy many of Australian native frogs,some of which are endangered,because it is difficult to differentiate toads from the native frogs especially when they are young.Thus,this measure is still not efeective.

Third,using virus is a worse idea,because it could terribly contaminate the original habitat of the cane toad,where it is in the central of the South America,as researchers and pat collectors often transport those Australian reptiles and amphibians,but if these aniamls infected by the virus reach the central South America,the virus will attack the native cane toads,then the number of this spiece will decrease dramatically,which will cause the whole ecosystem vulnerable to break down.Consequently,the third solution may solve the problem of elliminate the number of the cane toads in Australia,but at the same time it will bring about some disasters to the entire environment.

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11月15日作业TPO16综合
In the lecture,the speker refers to  the new rules in guidelines to improve  the whole field of archaeology in the  UK,and the new guideline could solve  the problems in all three areas  discussed in the passage.
First,the rules in the new guideline  can stop building companies dig  foudations on their own,which could  reduce the chances of the valuable  artifacts being lost or destroyed  during the process of the construction  projects,because the construction site  must be examined by archaeologists to  see whether the site is of  archaeological interest or value  before any construction can begin.
Moreover,an crucial part of the new  guidelines is that the construction  companies should pay for the fees when  any archaeological work done on the  construction site,instead of the  government,which can address the fund  problem.The funding offered by the  construction companies can allow  researchers to study more ranges of  sites than before.
Last but not the least,the new  guidelines can offer a lot of working  chances for archaeologists，whereas  work did not exist in the past.Because  expert archaeologists can be hired at  all stage,such as they can help the  construction company to examine the  site for archaeological value,to make  the preservation plan,or do research  in the professional scientifical  manner,then as a result,this policy  has increased the number of  professional archaeologists in  Britain.

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11月15日独立作业TPO16 Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? The best way to travel is in a group led by a tour guide. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer
With the development of the society, more and more people chose to travel  when they are on vacation. Thus, which way will you like better, to go traveling alone or in a group led by a tour guide? Obviously, each of ways has its particular merits, however, I prefer to traveling on my own.
Firstly, traveling alone will help me find interesting things, because I am a person with strong curiosity ,then I enjoy exploring different places and discovering cultural customs which is special to me, likewise I may live in a local resident's home and observe what their living style and eating habits are, especially those delicious food that I have never eaten before, or some strange artifacts I have never seen before, which appeals me dramatically, for example, I feel very strange about how to cook ciba(one traditional food in north of China),then if I live in a local home,
then I can ask the local people what the process it is, and maybe I can see the real process how they cook this kind of food, which is absolutely more impressive than an detailed instruction of a tour guide.
Moreover, walking alone on the road can make me more relaxed and have more novel feelings than traveling in a group, still following a tour guide. What is the purpose of traveling? The crucial goal is to relax ourselves, if someone who is not related to you exists around you, you will not feel free. And I think they may destroy my good mood about enjoying the good scenery of the nature. While walking alone, I can do what I like and what I want to think, even though I desired to share something special, like the sudden feeling about the life, or the flashing moving about the beauty of the nature with someone, we need not the tour guide, the best way to keep such emotion is to stay alone, keep silent and just digest slowly about what you have felt, or you can record it in your diary, at this time, to keep far away from the noise and people is the most comfort state to collect your comprehension about life, then this can be called the real happy and satisfied traveling.
All in all, I prefer traveling alone, even though sometimes I desired to have someone accompany with me, to share with me about the feeling of the nature, the society and the life itself, I will not choose to travel in a group, because I can not concentrate my attention while there are a lot of people, and they might be likely to influence my good mood in the traveling.

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加油把 ！共勉

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43# liang0603
谢谢你的修改！我没写作业里的题目，已经写过了！

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谢谢你的细心修改~