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题目：Nowadays, food has become easier to prepare. Has this change improved the way people live? Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer

Indeed, food nowadays is found much easier to prepare, as opposed to the old days, people now are less likely get into trouble for starvation. However, this, to some degree, doesn’t improve the way people live. The reasons for this are not far to seek.

First, a growing number of people in most areas all over the world now have problems not in the deficiency of food, on the contrary, in overeating. Why is that? It is because of the better availability of food that people who suffered hunger in the past now have chance to realize their earlier simple dream: just to have good food to eat. Then the phenomena are easy to found: regardless of their health, people eat and drink merely to satisfy their mouths, their tastes, thus they eat whatever taste delicious, yet let the nutritious constitution and quantity alone, getting a growing number of digestive illness. To live in this kind of way really brings detrimental effect to people’s health, so to this degree people haven’t improve the way they live.

Second, apart from food, people now tend to have far more things to pursue, such as knowledge, art, belief and harmoniousness with nature. Just as the saying, ”we eat to live, but not live to eat.” Not only distinct foods can improve our liveway, we can also do it by learning more knowledge from a number of volumes so as to have a better understanding of life, by listening to a diversity of music even try to play some instruments so that we can have an elegant quality of life, besides, by eating more organically grown food so that the soil and water are less likely to be polluted by chemical fertilizers. In a word, all these ways are effective to enhance the way we live.

All in all, the fact that food now is easier to prepare, in my opinion, doesn’t mean that the way we live will improve accordingly. To achieve this goal, we’d better have some temperament on food to improve our health as well as have some spiritual content in our life.