自己在家准备托福，能否请参加过考试的人帮我看看这篇作文如何评分？

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The lecture and the reading passage give contradictory opinions on the topic of "buzzing". the passage explain that the buzzers who personally promote products to people they know usually misleading the customers and spread mistrust to the society, while the lecture provides several counterarguments to this view.

The person who gives the lecture, himself is a buzzer, he tells the experience of being the buzzer to introduce the good phone services to his professor, and the professor took his advice. So he think firstly the buzzing is not lying ,but an non-ordinary promotion. He argues that only the buzzers who believe it is a good product will introduce to others they share the good experiences with people, not lie to people.

The lecture also refutes the second point in the reading ---that the customer usually don't know the people who is selling them products are buzzers, it is harmful for customers for buzzers cannot provide the specific information .the professor contends that the buzzers actually know a lot of information about the product then sell it .with the success of answering all the questions from customers, they could make the promotion smoothly.

Finally, according to the professor ,the buzzers are building a new way of sales which lead more trustful environment , it can be open to anyone. According to the reading, however, consider buzzer are dangerous who will make people less trustful in general.

是练习的TPO19里面的第一篇听文章的作文。

我不太清楚评分标准，需要注意些什么。帮我看看这样写行吗？
谢谢！