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4级水平。估计很多句式都不对，求高人改改吧。还有半个月就考了
27Do you agree or disagree with the following statement:All high-school students should take basic economic courses.(Education)
People seldom agree with each other even in such trivial issues as necessity between take basic economic courses or not. it is not true to say that it is better to students to take basic economic courses. However, we live in a world that more and more people choose to take economic courses. Obviously, in most cases students who take basic economic will have experience to deal with some trouble. But I strongly disagree this, especially when some example take into account.

First of all, it is hasty to say all high school should take basic economic courses, as a normal high school, student’s main responsibility in the classroom is studying there specialize subject, student should put our agenda on specialize subject rather than basic economic courses. For me, I am a high student and study is so stressful to me. I make great effort to study my specific subject, even occupying 6 hours of the day, but the result leaves much to be desire. Moreover I also love to play basketball after class, it help me to relax myself. So I don’t have time and energy to study other courses like economic. If any students are in the same situation as I do, he will absolutely abandon the basic economic courses, too.

In addition to waste time, as a student, we don’t have money to be managed. For example, I’m a poor student, I have to do housework after class, it is no need to me to take a basic economic courses. Instead of taking a basic economic courses, I’d like to go to a economic corporate. In a sense, practice is far more important than book knowledge. It is possible to image circumstances that even I don’t have money to pay for my dinner, what the big deal with taking basic economic courses anyways?

To conclude, economic courses play a non-essential roles with high school students. Therefore,
We should put more of times to study our specialize. In a word, it is superficial to simply say that all high-school students should take basic economic courses.

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Which is better, challenging plans about one's future or practical plans about one's future?
Nowadays, there are heated debates about which are practical plans about one’s future. I believe to be successful in life, one should have a very closely and detailed plan. By a very closely and detailed plan, one is capable of concentrating on the right target , analyzing insightfully. Thereby turning out a better result.
First of all, a closely and detailed plan can help one concentrate on right target and setting out our minds and belief towards our goals. We all have only and exactly 24 hours a day, but we always have mountainous work to do in hands, along with which many personal affairs seem equally urgent. Listing a detailed plan is necessary. For example, I was a poor guy who worked in a small industry ten years ago, I dreamed to be a rich people and dissatisfied with the conditions in the dusty environment. In my spare time, I store my mind with knowledge. Moreover, I had list a very closely and detailed plan even in some everyday trivial things: having a dinner from 5pm to 6pm, going shopping from 6pm to 8pm, taking a bath from 8pm to 9pm and sleeping from 9pm to 7am, etc. Finally, now, I shake off poverty and become a teacher. So you can see how important to make a scheme to be detailed and closely about our future.
Secondly, a closely and detailed plan can enable one to realize and analyze the target insightfully. We live in a world where we are often facing up with difficult problem and we trying our best to solve the problem and list a sketchy scheme. However, it is not as much impact as we expected. Realizing the target insightfully and determining whether or not to be worthy to do the target is probably the only way to overcome the dilemmas. For example, once my parents came to me with a problem, and I made the project that seem to spent a lot of money, so I give advice that cease to deal with this problem to my parents. Indeed, the result proves me are right and I rallied for the final effort.
In conclusion, I believe we should have a very closely and detailed plan about our future.