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骆嫣婷UID: 3179118

11月17日 请大家多拍砖，互相交流~谢谢~
Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? People today can solve many important problems so they do
not need help from the government

Currently, an increasing number of people can deal the every problem with their own ability, so many people hold the idea that they don’t have to rely on the government even habitually ignore the function of the government.
But I have the opposite view that people should seek help from the government.

Above all, the poor must rely on the government to rescue them from starving to death, they have to get relief from the government. Midde class should employ the government to get a better life. Every citizen pay duty to the government, they deserve to have rights to enjoy the service provided from the government. People should rely on the government to build large scientific institution for their country’s development, they also rely on it to establish public medical systems to secure them medical insurance and the government also help their people in youngster’s education, also for the future development of their country. In  addition, large campaign and projects can’t be done without the government, every citizen’s safety can’be guarantee without the government. We can’ live without the services come from it.

Second, the government should take the responsibility to better take care of its people. Because the meaning of establishing the government is to improve the quality of people’s lives.  Officers should serve their people all the time for they get their salaries from people’s duty. They are responsible to build the country economically stronger and a more cozy place to be dwelled and to meet the needs of every citizen. Even citizens are relatively satisfied with their current lives. The government should take its people into consideration manage to provide satisfactory services to people.

Third, when coming to crisis like the previous financial crisis, only the government can handle that kind of severely national crisis, without the government, even the richest person can’t have all the people get rid of the crisis. When coming to wars, only the government can have resources and financial force to protect its people from invading by other enemies. So the government give people protection all the time, even the richest people should rely on the government on this situation.

in conclusion, we can get many benefits and welfare from the government. most of us must rely on government in every day and night. The government adjust the country’s economy every day and provide us a relatively cozy environment. Never can we ignore the significance of the government, we should have the sense as a citizen, and actively participate in politic life to fulfill one’s responsibility as a qualified citizen.

骆嫣婷UID: 3179118

上贴为11月17日的独立作文。。

骆嫣婷UID: 3179118

11月18日  请大家批改~多拍砖谢谢~
If you need to discuss upsetting or controversial problems with others, you will use e-mail or text messaging, or
use the telephone or voice-messaging.

Nowadays, people communicate with each other more frequently using multiple ways, unavoidably confront many upsetting or controversial issues may lead to unexpected contradiction and conflicts. I prefer to use an efficient way to decrease or eliminate the contradiction by using e-mail or text-messaging rather than use telephone or voice-messaging.

First, we may all have the experience that when we communicate on telephone, we may get angry easily for some little things. Because we can’s really think over what happens but just talking and listening.
Take an example, one person want to persuade the other one by powerful arguments, so he spoke louder and louder to get the other person clearly
understand the idea of him, but the voice of aggression may annoy the other one. what’s more, they can’t see each other’s facial expression and physical language, they will misunderstand the other’s point of views. But using e-mail just can let us look over and over to think about the issue, at last come up with respective reasonable ideas and views to negotiate with each other patiently and carefully or just give a response in another e-mail.

Second, when we talk, we can inevitably talking something improper to say. we can easily get ruled by impulse. But in written materials we won’t put much wounding words or sentences on it. For the reason that when we read this e-mail again we will find how wounding the words are and will alter these sentences with much more rational expressions.


Third, when coming to a better result by discussing, we should read the other’s e-mail over and over to summarize the main idea of the letter, then we can focus on one point to solve the problem and think over and over to refine the e-mail for better express our ideas and give response to the previous person’s view, avoid causing unnecessary conflicts or misunderstanding. What’s more, we can save considerable time for other things, we can efficiently solve this kind of work.

In conclusion, personally, I am in favor of using e-mail or text massaging to solve some tricky or upsetting problems, in this way we can efficiently and properly accomplish these work without hurt or unnecessary problems.

骆嫣婷UID: 3179118

11.18的综合写作（tpo19)
In the listening material, one buzzer hold the opposite view about the professor’s negative comment about advertising company’s new tactic---buzzing. He oppose by the following three points.

First, he think that he is chose to be a buzzer because of he has ever used the products and have a good impression of the products. The buzzers are not paid to lie to potential consumers but reflect the feelings of using the products. And if the
advertising company don’t think the product’s qualified it won’t manage to find buzzers.

Second, the potential customers won’t accept whatever the buzzer’s introduction. Instead, they will ask you a great number of questions such as price, services or how long did you use the products. If the buzzer can’s precisely answer the questions, they won’t believe in what the buzzer said and won’t buy the products.


Third, he thinks buzzing wound not harm the social relationship. He take the example that if one potential consumer use the product praised by the buzzer and the product is also of good quality, the user will be satisfied with the product. He will love the product and consequently become more trustful about the buzzer and open to social relationship.

海风吹过UID: 3199801

4# 骆嫣婷   11.18综合改好了，加油！

骆嫣婷UID: 3179118

5# 海风吹过
谢谢你啊~大家一起加油~我一会儿马上给你改，最近事儿太多了:loveliness:

liang0603UID: 3182007

综合，加油！

Fenjuan.HuUID: 3104413

改好了，呵呵。。加油！！！

骆嫣婷UID: 3179118

7# liang0603

谢谢你啊~请问，那个修改的小工具在哪儿能下载？

骆嫣婷UID: 3179118

8# Fenjuan.Hu
谢谢你啊，你的意见很中肯，受教了，另外修改的小工具在哪儿能下载？

liang0603UID: 3182007

[local]1[/local]9# 骆嫣婷
就是用word 修改的哈`本帖最后由 骆嫣婷 于 2011-11-18 17:09 编辑
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11月18日  请大家批改~多拍砖谢谢~
If you need to discuss upsetting or controversial problems with others, you will use e-mail or text messaging, or+ l7 F% b* q7 ?, Q/ `
use the telephone or voice-messaging.

Nowadays, people communicate with each other more frequently using multiple ways, unavoidably confronting many upsetting or controversial issues may lead to unexpected contradiction and conflicts. I prefer to use an efficient way to decrease or eliminate the contradictions by using e-mail or text-messaging rather than using telephone or voice-messaging.

First, we may all have the experience that when we communicate on telephone, we may get angry easily for some little things. Because we cannot really think over what happens but just talking and listening."
Take an example, one person want to persuade the other one by powerful arguments, so he spoke louder and louder to get the other person clearly
understand the idea of his, but the voice of aggression may annoy the other one. what is more, they can’t see each other’s facial expression and physical language, they will misunderstand the other’s point of views. But using e-mail just can let us look over and over to think about the issue, at last come up with respectively reasonable ideas and views to negotiate with each other patiently and carefully or just give a response in another e-mail.

Second, when we talk, we can inevitably talk something improper to say. we can easily get ruled by impulse. But in written materials we won’t put much wounding words or sentences on it. For the reason that when we read this e-mail again we will find how wounding the words are and will alter these sentences with much more rational expressions.

Third, when coming to a better result by discussing, we should read the other’s e-mail over and over to summarize the main idea of the letter, then we can focus on one point to solve the problem and think over and over to refine the e-mail for better expressing our ideas and giving response to the previous person’s view, avoiding causing unnecessary conflicts or misunderstanding. What’s more, we can save considerable time for other things, we can efficiently solve this kind of work.

In conclusion, personally, I am in favor of using e-mail or text massaging to solve some tricky or upsetting problems, in this way we can efficiently and properly accomplish these work without hurt or unnecessary problems.

文章很顺，就是长句长的伴随状语 都弄成动词原形了。。。还有貌似托福考试最好不要用缩写的说。


今天改六篇…有没找到的错误，请原谅哈！

骆嫣婷UID: 3179118

11.19日独立 期待你的修改~

Some people believe that people should follow their ambitious dreams and goals even they are not realistic, others believe that people should focus on achieving realistic goals      With the development of society, people are increasingly eager to fulfill their dreams. We all have dreams. Comparing with just follow some realistic goals as other people, I would like to pursue my ambitious dreams with courage and idealism.  Firstly, ambitious goal don’t mean totally unrealistic daydream, but to follow my heart to fulfill something not much people would like to take the risk to do. In my view, some ambitious goals can be achieved by elaborately planned plot, maybe in others eyes, these ambitious goals can be interpreted to be daydreams.  secondly, when I pursue extraordinary goals, maybe I will achieve a middle-sized accomplishment. If I pursue a common success, maybe I would just get a smaller achievement than I expected. Because everyone has the limitation in his or her capacity, and everyone have inertia(惰性). He or she can give up these opportunities just out of laziness. In today’s fierce competition environment, every one has to exert all his or her strength to secure their positions not to be eliminated in the competition. Furthermore, I would love to enjoy to step on a thorny path and enjoy the biggest fruit not everyone can have but only a few of people can .Ambitious dreams mean more devotion and more sweat and pain in the process. If I can achieve these extraordinary goals, which will give me a sense of extremely satisfaction. In contrast, general goals can’t arouse the highest level of enthusiasm in me to further efforts. In ancient times or today, the most gigantic achievements can be achieved by the ones who bear the most ambitious goals, like Einstein, Madam Curie, Edison or Bill Gates. Actually, I just want to pursue spectacular career life like them. A few days ago, I saw a TV program saying the people in an area dare to find some fantastic delicious seafood which can be sold to gain an unbelievable amount of money, but they must take the risk to lose their lives, they were stepped on slippery rocks in sea to pick up the seafood by hands, they are in great possibility to be engulfed by great waves. Life is like that, if we don’t dare to take any risk, we will reap no big fruits . To summarize, as far as I am concerned, dedicating myself to choose ambitious goals and fulfilling them is my choice. That is my way to live a satisfactory life.

libby000UID: 3206644

写得不错，只修改了一些细节的地方。:)
With the development of society, people are increasingly eager to fulfill their dreams. We all have dreams.  Unlike some people who just follow some realistic goals, I would like to pursue my ambitious dreams with courage and idealism. Firstly, ambitious goal doesn’t mean totally unrealistic daydream. but to follow my heart to fulfill something, not much people would like to take the risk to do. In my view, some ambitious goals can be achieved by elaborate plot. Maybe in others’ eyes, these ambitious goals can be interpreted to be daydreams. Secondly, if I pursue extraordinary goals, maybe I would achieve a middle-sized accomplishment. If I pursue a common success, maybe I would just get a smaller achievement than what I expected. Because everyone has the limitation in his or her capacity, and everyone has inertia(惰性). He or she can give up these opportunities just because of laziness. In today’s fierce competition environment, everyone has to exert all his or her strength to secure their positions not to be eliminated in the competition. Furthermore, I would love to enjoy to step on a thorny path and enjoy the biggest fruit, which can be acquired not everyone but only a few of people. Ambitious dreams mean more devotion, sweat and pain in the process. If I can achieve these extraordinary goals, I will have a sense of extremely satisfaction. In contrast, general goals can’t arouse the highest level of enthusiasm in me to further efforts. In ancient times or today, the most gigantic achievements can be achieved by the ones who bear the most ambitious goals, like Einstein, Madam Curie, Edison and Bill Gates. Actually, I just want to pursue spectacular career life like them. A few days ago, I saw a TV program saying that in an area if someone dares to find the fantastic delicious seafood, which can be sold at unbelievable high price, they must take the risk of losing lives. They stepped on slippery rocks in sea to pick up the seafood by hands, and they were in great possibility to be engulfed by great waves. Life is like that. if we don’t dare to take any risk, we will reap no big fruits. To summarize, as far as I am concerned, dedicating myself to choose ambitious goals and fulfilling them are my choices. That is my way to live a satisfactory life.