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同组的Partner帮忙了 求各种狠批。

嗯、淡定努力UID：3209005

11.23

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College or University should offer students more preparation before they start working.

Many of my friends complained to me that they can not adapt days after working. They also mentioned that if college or university provides more preparation on them before working, they can do their jobs with full easiness. However, I do not put it that way. It is stupid and irresponsible to blame others whiles troubles come to them.

Lots of college offers student internship opportunity in big company. Student can experience working days in advance. Besides, during the process, they can learn how to cooperate with others, and develop communicating ability. See? What on earth people are looking for from university? May be find job for every student?

Student should find a way to be more competitive. This is a difficult thing others can not help. When people get nothing on job hunting, the first they should blame to is themselves. A report in TIMES indicates that doing a job well is not easier than finding a job. People need maintain competitiveness in case being replaced. To this point, university can do nothing at all.

Some might say the position for internship is limited, which is unfair to student who did not have the chance. Nevertheless, it is a perfect moment to make student aware of the brutality of the competitive market. So that they can wake up to reality, but do not wasting their study time in party or computer games any more.

At last, I still stick to the point that college or university has no need offer more preparation to student before they start working, since student should prepare it on their own.

自评：
全是在论说，没有展开，并且解释苍白没有说服力。
要有例子支撑和其他才能使论点饱满起来。下次一定改。

两个字 空洞。


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TPO3
听了两遍

The reading passage’s author is convinced there were several reasons why some paintings attributed to Rembrandt, who is a famous Dutch painter of the seventeenth-century, yet the woman disagrees that they were the mains reasons why those paints do not paint by Rembrandt.

First of all, the reading shows that the servant-like dress did not fit the luxurious fur collar while Rembrandt was a detailed person. However, the truth is that the fur collar was added after the paint was made for some reason.

Second, the author notes that there is something wrong with the light and shadow of the painting. Nevertheless, since the fur collar is added, the professional staff checked it and said that the original face just appears partially in shadow like it should be.

At last, the reading author said that the paint was painted on a panel made of several pieces of wood glued together while Rembrandt always only used wood panels. On the contrary, the woman said that the wood of tree is as the same as a wood he used in another paint. (大错)

自评：
语言组织很不当 感觉要讲的很不够很不到位
最后个论点的直接听错掉

liang0603UID：3182007

fighting !

闫颜UID：2788503

fighting！

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11.24

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Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Parents should allow their children to make mistakes and let them learn from their own mistakes.

Making mistakes is an important way to reach success. Without trying, people can not know that they are making mistakes or achieve success. For children, it is good to try things since they can learn a lot from it, and parent shouldn’t stop it.

It is easier to learn a lesson from making mistakes when it is not caused by others. After finding that the decision was wrong, they will think of the reason deeply. So that they will not make the same mistake any more.

Children can develop the ability to be independent or solving problems. The process of making mistakes is also a course for learning. For instance, they can think for themselves when difficulties come to them.

At last, giving the children a chance for making mistakes doesn’t mean parents should not help. Parent does not need to solve it for them, but they can teach them how to do it. However, the right of decision is still mastered in children’s hands.

自评：

论点完全不知道该怎么展开。超烂的一篇作文。语法和中式英语也严重了。

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In the Lecture, the professor made several points about that dinosaurs were not endotherms. However, the reading passage contends that it were endotherms. The professor’s lecture casts doubt on the reading by using a number of points that are contrary to.

The first point that the professor uses to cast doubt on the reading is that Polar region weren’t the place endotherms to live, since it was cold. Nevertheless, the reading states that only animals that can maintain a temperature could be active in such cold climates.

Another point the reading claims is that dinosaurs’ legs are positioned underneath its body while the legs of all modern endotherms are underneath the body. However, the professor says when dinosaur’s legs on the body, they can grow to a large size, which means more energy for them.

Finally, the reading indicates that dinosaur’s rapid body growth is a characteristic of endothermic. （这边听力的Professor说了什么没听懂，就好像在什么cooling period之类）

Fenjuan.HuUID：3104413

嗨，你这个昵称，我也不知道该怎么称呼，哈哈。淡定？努力？
其实你的文章没有你自己说的那么糟糕，我觉得还是可圈可点的。加油哦。我明天考试，今天改得稍微有点粗糙，等我考完咱们再交流哈

闫颜UID：2788503

详见附件

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嗯、淡定努力 ，综合改好了，加油！