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I do believe many producers exaggerate their products’ functions, others to a even worse extent that called misleading. Successful ads also grasp consumers’ eagerness and anxiety during their publicity. We consumers only hope they never harm our happiness.
Advertisements as one way of disseminate messages continue its revolution from its birth and has never stopped. Our generation growing up with accompanies of ads, we accept it without thinking, also my elder family members treat them as usual cases. In ads’ stride to become massively acceptable, it also need to take charge of consumers’ reliance and confidence. Ads is not simply personal opinions and ideas that project through minutes of DV, it affect may public decisively if it’s a big hit!
News often criticize some ads need to be abandoned as some teenagers may mimic them in which lead unwanted results. On the other hand ads is occasionally accused
of swindle. From personal respect cheating ads result in consumer accident and the company’s loss in addition of bad reputation. Take Sanlu milk powder as an example, it not only destroy china’s new generation’s health but also damage Chinese milk industries’ domestic and international reputation. As a result, terrible supply for consumers diminishing social welfare.
Ads suppliers need to take account of all these.
So, what can we do to restrict illegal ads enter public fields in order to forestall burst of next series of disasters？ Citizens from countries to countries
need power of law, what’s more completed law of advertisements, in which include tunnels of scrutinize, different punishment of responsible persons run different functions in that ad .
These will protect us fully. If more ads producers have higher moral status, as they think from consumers’ positions( they are consumers in other conditions). That will be very helpful as in our progression to our perfect laws, there are always some leaks that black hearted producers try to strip through.
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Tour group as a traditional way of traveling scheduled by traveling agency is our long choosing option. Its opponent, independent travel bring fresh air in, as during travelers progress schemes that have projected by themselves after consulting from well-experienced people or long time website searching and booking, they can use their limited amount of money to maximizing their needs of particular respects, Art museum trip throughout capital,
deep experience about human landscape…
Public acceptance of self-guide travel may with key words such as: cheap, self-sufficient,
young people’s monopolization etc.
In a fiercely competed tourism market, like China. Group trip often cheaper compared with independent trip about the same area. Points that Agencies make money during consumption conditions, and tour agencies often try hard to minimizing airplane tickets and accommodation fees in order to make the trip’s total price lower. As I chose independent-trip I would spend my money on the points that attract me most, but the total sum may not lower than the agency price. Those money I spend on my high-personal-valued goods is eliminated from all the ways in addition to make a consumer more comfortable during a group travel.
All above require the traveler’s high flexibility and acclimation. That is one of reasons that usually young people adopt independent travels.
Have you ever taken spot of travelers with over-head bags? The bags contain all they need during the journey that means no more expenditure of goods that they already have in their ‘warehouse’. Self-sufficient baggage is another signature of these independent people.
These travelers spent as much as they like in comparison with guided trip rush through all known sight points as if they want to leave proofs that they have been there. Independent
trip is closer to nature and local culture, that’s why I chose it.
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My answer is certainly yes. Children’s financial education is essential for modern world. And the early one usually begin around 4 to 5, from that age children have became curious about what is money( that differently colored papers) and where are they come from. It’s a good chance for parents to open outside markets for their children.
Joke that formed from daily lives that a child thought money is produced automatically through ATM machine, when his mother pushing a button on the machine. We can derive from it that children can think parents’ incomes as windfall. The idea only contain withdraw and no help to children’s value judgment.
There are ways to train children learn more a

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My answer is certainly yes. Children’s financial education is essential for modern world. And the early one usually begin around 4 to 5, from that age children have became curious about what is money( that differently colored papers) and where are they come from. It’s a good chance for parents to open outside markets for their children.
Joke that formed from daily lives that a child thought money is produced automatically through ATM machine, when his mother pushing a button on the machine. We can derive from it that children can think parents’ incomes as windfall. The idea only contain withdraw and no help to children’s value judgment.
There are ways to train children learn more and associate with real world. According to their curiousness, we can explain what these colored papers represent and how their parents obtain these papers. In supermarkets, children show their unlimited wants of snacks and toy, with little resistance to persuasive advertisements. We need to let them claim down then tell them the opportunity cost of one more snacks or toy that will cost them other goods which they want even more in the future. And let them to observe how their parents make choice to arrange limited amount of money to maximize the whole family’s welfare. After known the importance of money and thrifty, they also need to know how to spend them. Parents give their children a small amount of money let children themselves spend during a period of time. From experiences, if parents give children money on a specific event, children will not reserve money as they thinking not spend equals to waste. Parents and children can write account’s of pocket money, then feed little porcelain pig together. That would be a good habit forming process.
Some parents make agreements with children that pay for their housework. This can be a good idea only if it incite children’s incentives to do housework and spare parents. But as many of us have evolved from all that policy, help in housework is a family member’s responsibility. We can adopt other ways to encourage children as journeys during weekend or verbal appreciation.
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