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It has recently been announced thata new movie theater may be built in your neighborhood. Do you support or opposethis plan? Why? Use specific reasons and details to support your answer.

Recently,whether a new movie theater should be built or not has aroused a lot ofattentions in the public. Some people hold the issue that it is necessary forus to build a movie theater near us. However, there still a lot of people holdthe opposite idea. As far as I am concerned, I step in the former concept.
First of all, whata new theater meaning for us is we can gain more entertainment just in a placenearby. And I am sure it can bring us convenience. The quantity of our lifewill be advanced. Secondly, movies can media the newest culture, news, spiritsand so on. And now because we don’t have a theater in our neighborhood, itleads to us should spend a lot of time driving our car to see a film. All thesefactors cause us don’t have many chances to feel that spirits. So it is ofnecessity to build a new movie theater. What’s more, a new movie theater canbring us enormous weather which could benefit us improving our life. And afterthat, our lives are going to be better than now. However, there are still manycons exist. For instants, a new movie theater will appeal a serious of peoplecome to. And it would disturb our lives sometimes.
Compared withall of the pros and cons, I do believe a new movie theater is good for us. And Ithink our lives will be better in the future.
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