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megcityUID: 124421

130."How children are socialized today determines the destiny of society.
Unfortunately, we have not yet learned how to raise children who can help bring about a better society."

The philosophy of teaching is always under hot discussion and one factor in carrying on a successful teaching, as well as, concerns our social development and destiny is that how to teach children who are the future of society, in other words, how to raise children to who can help bring about a better society just as the author speaks.It is a pity that even all of us know it though we have not yet learned how to raise them, therefore, we have to ameliorate our education form and people's mind in order to accomodate children well to the future development of our society.

There is no doubt that most important aspect in doing so is because children are the extreme hope of our society and world.As famous American president Franklin Roosevelt once said:”We can not build the future for our youth,but we can build our youth for the future.”This illustrates the point that how important children are for our society. In this era of rapid social technology change, parents, educators and schools have built up a set of education system, but the traditional educational form appears a little lagged compared with the development of socirty. In most cases, children are more curious than adult people and they want to know everything that they interset in or they know little about and had a very strong desire to find the reality. For instance, like Tomas Edison,a worldwide famous American scientist who contribute more than a thousand inventions to the human society, and we can say that he was interest in almost every useful things when he was a young boy what could be the basis for his further achievement. Also,children can accept and learn knowledge that is tought to them much more quickly than adult .Besides, we should provide children healthy environment and atmosphere in which they will take part, in that way,they will probably become people who can contribute much to the society, even some of them will become leaders in various fields in the future.

However,most children cannot distinguish which is correct while others are wrong, so we should guide them into the right direction for making them much easier to face any diverse and paroxysmal situation.Children are young and they haven't really entered into the society and the outside world is full of temptations and traps to them.Without abundant experiences and principles to behave rightly, children are lack of discrimination between the right and the wrong. As a result, they are easily to be cheated and they will probably go astray and childeren would treat teachers parents and other adults as their examples .Therefore, making childeren to choose the right way and develop healthily could be an imperative task put presently in front of our family, school or even the whole society.In order to solve the problem, not only parents because they are children's first teacher ,but also school teachers and other people who concern about it must teach them basis knowledge and an the same time tell them what social morality which is more pivotal is to make them a real person who can help bring about a flourishing, equality and steady society.

Furthermore, nowadays ,people's life has gone through great changes since the development of technology, which provids totally new and different ways of living, and the traditional education form could be no longer adequate for children in the current situation. I suggest that school could begin some more elective and minor courses about morality and humanness which can infuse them with the basis principle of the society , and also other practical knowledge courses ,otherwise, they could hardly know themselves well.

To sum up, I believe children are the destiny and hope of society, and it is not late when we realized the lack of raising children, so we have to give them a healthy atmosphere they lived in and help them to know the society ,the world and themselves deeply and correctly, then, let's anticipate a better society and future.

又没限制时间，郁闷~

我觉得这个比较好确定，但是好象还是想不出太多的例子和方面，谁来指点指点我啊~

megcityUID: 124421

没人看吗？哎~要考了，现在还没底啊

megcityUID: 124421

求大家帮看看拉，心里实在没底啊~

imongUID: 140258

有人！

题目是how children are socialized，你默认这个socialize就是education，但是为什么没有说出来？
这个题目我想重点还是在socialize上。你也给了我一个提示，教育是一种socialize的过程，而是去教育机会的人呢？不妨比较一下。
不过光这样也是不够的，还是缺一些东西，再看看别人的意见？
文笔还不错

megcityUID: 124421

Thanks a lot.是啊，这种题目看上去很好写，但是真的写起来就感觉好象还是有点空洞啊，怎么办？大家有什么想法，来指点指点~

jfly2000UID: 42379

socialize我理解为适应社会，不知是不是准确？

megcityUID: 124421

我觉得前面这句是个限制，后面才应该是议论的重点吧~不是对否？

yuyuantanUID: 128559

我理解的socialize 是成为社会人,  就是适应社会, 生存于社会.  并有利于社会的人。
因此同意第一句话。 但不完全同意第二句话，基于的是人们对更好社会的认识需要不断的提高与改进。 how to raise chilren 只能基于我们现有的认识和对未来的判断。因此，我的提纲是
1。significance of children socilalization to future society on
a. children are the main force for the progress of future society
b. socialization ensure their well-being in society. Socialization means having abilities to survive, improve, communicate, etc.
2. raising children becomes important. but what we can do is based on our understanding of the curent society and the prediction of the future.
a. we're not absolute idiots on raising children.
b. we have much room to improve
Summary.

acolyteUID: 143406

假设socialize是适应社会，我们可以看到适应社会的人决定了社会的发展命运，也就是说社会的destiny是它本身的demand决定的，这里就使得children在将来成为了社会发展自身的tools，这显然于情于理都很难让我们接受。个人认为这是ets的疯话。我觉得socialize所指还应该再斟酌一下。