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3月18的T 准备的很不充分 还请路过的筒子 给些意见 不甚感激！
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3月5日 独立 ： A or D with：People who cannot accept criticism will not succeed in a team.


With the development of society, sense of team is playing acrucial role in every aspect of different career. Peoplewho work or study, combining together as a group, have more opportunities thanindividual left alone. What a team could achieve depends on the quality of eachelement inside and the interaction among them. Undoubtedly, criticism is inevitableduring the period team members collaborating. People who cannot acceptcriticism will not succeed in a team.


In a team, the aim that somebody who criticizeon you is for your own sake. Some of our team mates, when it comes to theprofessional, have plentiful experiences. Perhaps they realize the way of your behavioris repeating the identical mistake like that of them. Even though theircriticisms lose your appeal for continuing listening, or maybe infuriate you,the propose is leading the team forward to a greater good. Two dancer guidecarrying two dance teams, in a famous show in China named “Chinese Dreams”, tooka battle on the stage. One guide criticized his students for not being withpassion in front of the screen live. Then on the final, his students won thechampion. Similar stories occur every single day around us. Criticism from ateam is also significant advice.


Accepting reasonable criticism and keepingfix bugs on ours is the path to success of our whole team. People are likely tocriticize on us because of our erroneous habits that we have even never realized.I used to have lunch in laboratory for saving time until one day my partnertold me it is toxic if the atmosphere here is not sterilized and what I havedone probable excuse others. Without his word I would never realize that iswrong. From then, I finish my lunch at the mass room instant of the studyenvironment. In that case, we, my study team and I, have better communicationsand more efficient than ever.


No one can deny that few criticisms arefrom nowhere and with absence of sanity. On that condition, as far as I amconcerned, we may reflect what the specious criticisms on ourselves. If weinsist on our style, just take that as a ridiculous lie.


In final analysis, most of criticisms arehelpful and improve situation of relationships among the team. People who cannotaccept criticism will not succeed in a team.

CaptainALUID: 3167765

哎 自己看了下 实在惨不忍睹 自己改。。。
With the development of society, sense of team is playing a crucial role in every aspect of different career. People who work or study, combining together as a group, have more opportunities than individual left alone. What a team could achieve depends on the quality of each element inside and the interaction among them. Undoubtedly, criticism is inevitable during the period team members collaborating. People who cannot accept criticism will not succeed in a team.
The aim that somebody, in your team, who criticize on you is essential for your own sake. Some of our team mates, when it comes to the professional, have plentiful experiences. Perhaps they realize the way of your behavior is repeating the identical mistake like that of them in old time. Even though their criticisms lose your appeal for continuing listening, or maybe infuriate you, the purpose is leading the team forward to a greater good. Two dancer guide carrying two dance teams, in a famous show in China named “Chinese Dreams”, took a battle on the stage. One guide criticized his students for not being with passion in front of the screen live. Then on the final, his students won the champion. Similar stories occur every single day around us. Criticism from a team is also significant advice.

Accepting reasonable criticism and keeping fix bugs on ours is the path to success of our whole team. Erroneous habits that we have even never realized become the source that people are likely to criticize on. For a couple of time, I used to have lunch in laboratory for saving time until one day my partner told me it was toxic if the atmosphere here is not sterilized and what I have done probable excuse others. Without his word I would never realized that was wrong. From then, I finish my lunch at the mass room instead of on the study environment. In that case, we now, whole study team, have better communication and are more efficient than ever.

No one can deny that few criticisms are from nowhere and with absence of sanity. On that condition, as far as I am concerned, we may reflect （X what X） the specious criticisms on ourselves. If we insist that our style will not fail to be a wiser and safer choice, just take those as ridiculous lies.

In final analysis, most of criticisms are helpful and improve situation of relationship among a team. People, on no account, can obtain the victory ignoring criticisms.