马甲之daily writting

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As movies and television have become more and more popular among society, parents have blamed television more on affecting children negatively. They attribute children's weird dressing and dyed hair to movies and television. Yet I don't agree with this opinion, on the contrary, movies and television can have a positive effect on the young, depending on the way their parents tutor them.

Admittedly, there are plenty of unhealthy elements showing on movies and television, violence, drugs, robbery, as many as you can name it. And without appropriate guiding, children are probably to learn these evil（这里用名词evil的话要加s吧） from movies and television. However, it’s not the movies or television who have the ability to affect the youth. Rejection of the devil doesn't the devil is not exist.(这句话感觉有点怪，是本来就有这种说法么？) And even without movies and television, children can get their way to the dark side of the world if they want to. Furthermore, what movies and television can really affect children on the negative side is no more than dressing strangely or acting adultly. A movie will never be able to teach a child how to be evil.（这一段用evil蛮多，是不是可以换一些别的表达）

Besides, movies and television programs are graded, a film reflects too many evil or cruel aspect of the world will not be allowed to the youth. Like in America, a 14 years old girl will not have the chance to sit alone in the cinema watching "The graduate"（是不是简单的说一下有哪些不合适的情节会好一些）. In this situation, not any movie can have a negative effect on any child.

Moreover, compared to their negative effects, movies or television can influence a child positively in many ways. The youngster can learn the skill of speaking through a talk show,分开的 ,the ability of cuisine through a cooking show, and the sentiment of protecting our homeland through watching a movie like the planet earth. Like sunny days will always appear more than the raining ones, a positive guide from the movies and television will definitely more than its bad influence.

In sum, although there may be a negative effect on the youngster of a movie or television, the positive ones will always be much more than that.

感觉作者这篇作文写的很好，论点清晰论据也很有道理，句式的变换也比较丰富，托福作文的要求都符合了，我要向你多学习啊。

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马甲兄，你的3.16独立。

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我的3.16的独立。辛苦啦~