Issue147

GcanadaUID: 118286

Issue: “Tradition and modernization are incompatible. One must choose between them.”

Admittedly it is true that tradition sometimes is incompatible with modernization, which is developing with the society and represents the new ideas, fashion thinking, and the technology. However, we should not turn blind eye on the compatible between tradition and modernization although the society has developed. Hence, I stand the side of the assertion that tradition and modernization are compatible.

In the first place, tradition and modernization are compatible. Although the society has been developing and many new changes occur there, modernization still comprises tradition and they can be compatible. We can see so many examples like this: firstly, the Beijing, the capital of China, is a civilization and the developed city, and there is the true modernization, but if people can go there, one can find so many traditional constructions there such as the Palace Museum, the Summer Palace, and the Great Wall and so on. People want to visit them when they go there. The constructions represent the tradition, but they are not incompatible with modernization. Besides, they take in so many people to come there and impetus the development of the society. And they can leave so much admiration to people because of their construction style, and let people look through the history of China. We can take another example for granted: the old style clothes, which represents old fashion, now can match the style ideas of the clothes designers, who can make use of traditional style to match the modern style in the clothes, which makes clothes more fashionable and upper. And thus it also represents the compatibility of tradition and modernization.

Moreover, modernization also plays an important role in the tradition. In most time, modernization stand for the technology that makes people in this era more convenient and improving.  We live in the modern society with the development of the world, and we cannot turn back to the old days. But there is so much tradition in our life, which can be seen often by us. The Spring Festival, the important festival of China, is a very traditional day. Because people in this time have computers and have the network knowledge, unlike before, we can send our greetings to our friends through the Internet, which has be a fashion in these days. And now we need not send our mails by the post office to them after a few days, and they can in time receive our best wishes in the festivals. Besides, nowadays, we can take part in the rituals and dance, where there are many modern instruments that represent the modernization. Through that, we can appreciate more beautiful music and dance in the more melody background of the music, which makes us more happy and high. And see, this is the influence that modernization has on tradition.

All in all, tradition and modernization are not incompatible, through the analysis above, and we can see the compatibility of the tradition and modernization. Moreover, modernization also has effect on tradition and embrace tradition, which make tradition more beautiful. Therefore, I cannot make the pace with the opinion the title says.

GcanadaUID: 118286

顶一下!
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feier521UID: 109747

Issue: “Tradition and modernization are incompatible. One must choose between them.”

Admittedly it is true that tradition sometimes is incompatible with modernization, which is developing with the society and represents the new ideas, fashion thinking, and the technology. However, we should not turn blind eye on the compatible(compatibility) between tradition and modernization although the society has developed. Hence, I stand the side of the assertion that tradition and modernization are compatible.

In the first place, tradition and modernization are compatible. Although the society has been developing and many new changes occur there, modernization still comprises tradition and they can be compatible. We can see so many examples like this: firstly, （the删掉） Beijing, the capital of China, is a civilization（civilized） and （the删掉） developed city, and there is the true modernization, but if people can go there, one(they) can find so many traditional constructions there such as the Palace Museum, the Summer Palace, and the Great Wall and so on. People want to visit them when they go there. The constructions represent the tradition, but they are not incompatible with modernization. Besides, they take in so many people to come there and impetus（名词！motivate） the development of the society. And they can leave so much admiration to people because of their construction style, and let people look through the history of China. We can take another example for granted: the old style clothes, which represent(s) old fashion, now can match the style ideas of the clothes designers, who can make use of traditional style to match the modern style in the clothes, which makes clothes more fashionable and upper(?). And thus it also represents the compatibility of tradition and modernization. （写的不错）

Moreover, modernization also plays an important role in the tradition. In most time, modernization stand(s) for the technology that makes people in this era more convenient and improving（？）. We live in the modern society with the development of the world, and we cannot turn back to the old days. But there is so much tradition（可数的） in our life, which can be seen （often在can和be之间） by us. The Spring Festival, the important festival of China, is a very traditional day. Because people in this time have computers and have the network knowledge, unlike before, we can send our greetings to our friends through the Internet, which has be（been） a fashion in these days. And now we need not send our mails by the post office to them after a few days, and they can in time receive our best wishes in the festivals. Besides, nowadays, we can take part in the rituals and dance, where（?） there are many modern instruments that represent the modernization.(那你应该说rituals和dance是traditional的) Through that, we can appreciate more beautiful （traditional and classical如何？）music and dance in the （more删掉） melody（名词，euphonious） background of the music, which makes us more happy and high. （一连3个more！）And see, this is the influence that modernization has on tradition.

All in all, tradition and modernization are not incompatible, through the analysis above, (and删掉) we can see the compatibility of the tradition and modernization. Moreover, modernization also has effect on tradition and embrace(s) tradition, which make tradition more beautiful. Therefore, I cannot make the pace with the opinion the title says.

这一篇比那个写的好的多。例子举的也好，上一篇老是primary school university students 的！
嘿嘿，要是明天你遇到了，就爽歪歪啦。

blake_wangUID: 9871

面对考试，心态放低些就行了。

GcanadaUID: 118286

谢谢!