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发表于 2012-3-19 18:39:07 |显示全部楼层

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发表于 2012-3-19 21:08:36 |显示全部楼层

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It's known to all that a school with many famous teachers may be highlighted by all. Excellent teachers play an essential role in teaching and helping students. On the other hand, thanks to the development of technology, facilities in school become much more widely used. So we will have a debate that which of them is more significant, the teacher or the facility? I do have supported that improve facilities can help more students and be in more helpful. I will presence （present）some evidence （to）strengthen my notion here.
First and foremost, famous teachers just some elites in the group of teachers, hence, they can be only a little part. With realizing the importance of knowledge eventually by people, our desire for studying are （is）urgently. By the growing numbers of students, teachers' requirement is more large（这一句换个说法比较好，more and more teachers are required）. As a consequence, lacking of famous teacher is to be common in many places. On the compotatory（这个词是？）, improving good facilities for required cost far less time than to train a famous teacher, so paying more attention to building technical facility will slove the lack （of teachers）well.
What I rely on is the reason that, nowadays, students shall develop their self-study ability. Teachers' function is not only to teach knowledge but also the skill in learning. Students need to test their harvest in somewhere. At this situation, facilities can offer good service. For instance, my experience extraordinarily proved that facility can help develop ability of self-study. My university built an high-technology library for students with high-speed Internet and admitting us to research for resource of all topic form all over the world. By the help with that, I finished my creative test and gain award in country's competition. Teachers help me with the way of research and then I do the work in the library myself. As a conclusion, maybe you can't be teached（taught） by a famous teacher, but the high-tech facility can also improve your work and study in the excellent way.
Last but not least, facilities can do good to students' comprehensive ability. In the modern facilities of school, computers and many technological equipments are open up to students. These things may be beyond a famous teacher's knowledge. So the students must use the equipments by themselves to further their skills of these tools. For the knowledge can really be use in life or work, good facilities is needed.
After ruminating all above, from the cogent evidence I can safely confirm my notion that facilities play a more important role in school than hiring famous teachers. To be helpful with more students, to be improving skillful comprehensive abilities and to be perfectly solving the lack of famous teachers. Facilities should be pay more attention（to）!

作者这篇文章思路很清楚啊，句式的变化也比较丰富，我还学到了不少表达哈哈。我的水平很一般，希望能有帮助。

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