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[求助] 关于综合写作字数的疑问~~芸芸广告中不知道大家能不能看见我的贴。。 [复制链接]

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发表于 2012-3-20 18:00:00 |只看该作者 |倒序浏览
比较想知道大家综合一般写多少字,我写到290左右但是有很多是模板里的字,会不会点覆盖不全啊,但是确实是把来得及听到的都写进去了。。
附一篇刚写的吧

The reading material raises the issue that in order to reduce students' nonacademic stress, they should wear the same school uniform. However, this is strongly questioned by the speaker, who argues that the policy will have no significant effects.



First of all, the reading material says that the policy will make school more affordable for parents because students' clothing bill will go down drastically. In contrast, the speaker points out that students are still likely to spend lots of money on clothes. When they meet with their friends after school, they still need to wear fashionable clothes. Thus, their wardrobes will be full of clothes. By this way, the speaker contradicts the first point made in the passage.



Second, the reading passage claims that the policy will reduce discomfort and self-consciousness for teenagers. However, according to the speaker, this is not the case. Students will be worried about how they look if they do not have the chance to select clothes themselves and they will be puzzled about how to present themselves. Besides, they are likely to de-emphasize on other features which could make them more attractive. In this sense, the policy increases their discomfort. Thus the speaker refutes the second point in the reading passage.



Finally, the reading passage says that wearing the same uniform will reduce the amount of teasing and bullying among students, while the speaker believes the policy will not have such effect. From the speaker, students are in this particular stage of life and it is common for them to form groups and tease each other. Besides clothes, they could pick on other aspects, such as choice of music.



Therefore, the reading passage is totally challenged by the speaker.


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发表于 2012-3-20 21:41:44 |只看该作者
不错  就这样吧~~~

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发表于 2012-3-27 01:37:22 |只看该作者
规定是150到225,我上次写了244,不知道会怎么样诶

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发表于 2012-3-27 06:01:43 |只看该作者
理论上字数与水平没有直接关系  但是作为非母语 很难在极短的字数内涵盖大量信息 所以低于150字又写的很好的不多见  一般多于225的很正常

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