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linlinUID: 137589

今天又写了，不知道怎么样？只知道现在快OverHeating了。

Issue 24. "The human mind will always be superior to machines because machines are only tools of human minds."

I agree with the author's assertion that due to AI (artificial Intelligence) subject to the human minds, human intelligence is superior to computers. Admittedly, in some respect, computer is turned out to be more efficient than human mind. After all, human has some merits that cannot be replaced by AI.

The major reason of my fundamental disagreement with the assertion is the human minds' unique availability in active learning and emulating from their precedence. This kind of special function provides us a distinct capacity of adaptation and opportunity to survival. Due to this distinction, we are differentiated from other beings on the earth. A newly-born-baby, after 1 years, should learn from his parents how to walk, and then 2 years, he should change from a "crier" to a relatively adept speaker, and then after several years, he should go to school to gain enough knowledge such as writing, reading and calculating and so forth. Moreover, considering scientists' marvelous ability of exploration, we can conclude that human minds are so wonderful. Admittedly, with great development and the emergence of high-technology program, Artificial Intelligence has some function in learning, Yet this kind of function is too tentative to emulate human mind.

In addition, my agreement are also supported by the facts that different from computer, human mind can make decision after receiving enough data. Commonsense tells me that during his or her whole life, an individual may confront lots of challenge of determination. As a consequence, Circumstance and our own brain provide us the ability to make decision. To the contrary, even though computer can help us gather and analyses information, the final determination is on our own hand. For instance, In modern war, Artificial Intelligence could help the commander transmit satellite-information, estimates the opposite forces, and communicating with all other officers, it cannot take the place of general to determine the following tactics. Thus without the command of humane mind, the computer, no matter how accurate and swift it is, is just a tools or at best advanced secretary of human.

Admittedly, it is undeniable that in some respect, the Artificial intelligence is superior to human mind; and perhaps in the future, because of development of technology, computer will possess intelligence as complex and functional as human's. For instance, recently scientists have designed a special computer, named Deep Blue, which own an expertise - playing chess. After an informal "competition" with one of the best players, artificial intelligence attains the final achievement. This illustrates us the great capacity of artificial intelligence. However nowadays artificial intelligence cannot parallel human mind at least insofar as considering human brains' complexity.

To sum up, considering its ability in determination and adaptation, human mind is superior. And at the same time, it is undeniable that artificial intelligence has its merits in accusation and swiftness.

realturtleUID: 69047

我觉得写得很好！^_^
真的，你的观点和例子很不错哦
这个时候放心去上考场吧，你最需要的reassurance :-P
Good Luck!

linlinUID: 137589

呵呵，谢谢斑竹的鼓励。我过几天才上场9。8号，这几天准备天天做模考，我不打算让两个月的努力白费了。^_^

yemy_usUID: 143352

my personal opinion,  the last but one paragraph being placed in the second paragraph would be better, both logically and structurally. anyway, nice developtment of the topic.