【daily writing 作业】4.4日开始写啦~忐忑中。。。

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4月5日 110708 the friends that can have fun with are more important than the friends that can get more help from?

Human beings are gregarious species that no one can live without accompany. Friends can divide in different kinds, some can give you support when you in trouble while some make you feel fun and can’t help laughing all the time which consist of your social life, so there’s not an absolute criterion to evaluate which kind of friends is more important. But when it comes to my mind, I will prefer to make friends with those who can give me a hand.

First, it’s well known that a friend in need is a friend indeed. It’s very common that students leave their hometown to a remote place where without great care of parents any more, so they have to learn how to face their own lives and become independent. During this period, they may face many situations beyond their experience. Many students will turn to their friends for help. Only the real friend will stay patient and always be delightful to help. And friendship based on offering help to each other will last long because everyone has his own issue which can’t get through by oneself. On the other hand, figuring out the solution with peers or friends is a good way to grow independent.

Second, friends who like to offer help often considerate and kind, making friends with them will always feel warm inside. Personality is an important consideration to make friends. A good friend should always know your embarrassment and help you without letting you feel burdened or abashed. A friend who can just make you feel fun may tease your dilemma because they are not aware of your inner reality.

Last but not the least, a good friend will enlighten your whole life and make you hopeful. Good friends will spur you to pursuit a better future and set an example to you. While friends who just give you fun will make you lose your faith and ambition by indulging in dissipation. Admittedly, getting fun is a proper motive to make friends which can’t be blamed too much. But real friendship contains much more attribution than just being playmate.

In conclusion, people have different needs to make friends as getting rid of loneness, sharing something in common, or supporting each other. What we should know first is how to distinguish the real friend and the playmate. A real friend is much more meaningful than playmate which can be tested in adversity. So I will feel grateful if I can build a friendship with those who love to help me.

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已经改好啦~~~加油啦~~ LincolnScofield.doc (32.5 KB, 下载次数: 11)

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写的真好..向你学习..希望有时间可以多交流交流你的写作经验..

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4月6日 110319 do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Movies and television have more negative effects than positive effects on the way young people behave

It’s an inevitable issue to discuss how our lives changes under the impact of technology progress. Take movies and television as example, some people think they benefit our lives by bringing us a colorful and interesting world which can’t be imaged in ancient times, others strongly hold a view that the negative effects have already surpass the positive effects. Personal speaking, I would like to take the former opinion.

First, I recommend that movies and television are few of top inventions in recent centuries. Before they are invented people live in the printed times when the world is divided into several parts since the limitation of language and culture. As the world develops, movies and television which are the production of progress actually benefit the globalization in turn. One of the advantages of them is the capability of storing voice and picture which offers a new method to record the history of the world instead of using words only. On the other hand, they also make people from different cultures know each other more easily. It can’t be denied that the two inventions do promote the civilization.

Second, as new media, movies and televisions change our value and help build up the modern lives. You can get the information from the other continent without stepping out of your room, you can watch a football match of your favorite team even though you can’t afford the ticket, and I’m sure it will be a good memory if you take your girlfriend to watching movie during your date. It’s hard to imagine life without movies or televisions which broaden our horizon and arouse our interests to get closer to the mysterious world.

In addition, the industry of movies and television is developing prosperously meanwhile the standards of the industry is increasingly perfect. There’re various resources to meet your taste and professional production teams to ensure the qualities of programs. Despite the advantages, some undeniable flaws actually exist such as detriment to physical health, improper content for juvenile, even some denouncement of interpersonal alienation. And the industry has set up some rules just like the film rating system. What I would like to say is that just like other technology, movies and television just are tools in nature which depend on how people use.

In conclusion, movies and televisions do play important roles in our daily life, we has more to gain than more to lose. We should set up a positive and healthy attitude toward them first.

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3# lizhichaols 谢谢修改~第一次写~很感激呀~不过亲。。。你的作文我没有看到呀？能不能给个链接，马上帮你回改

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写的不错..继续努力

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10# wuyahao159 :loveliness:一起加油~

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6# 青鱼 已改，加油！

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