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发表于 2012-4-4 15:14:44 |只看该作者 |倒序浏览
4.14 求互改,同奋战,有改必回!求给力!
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发表于 2012-4-4 15:18:30 |只看该作者
2011.5.28 NA题目:
Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? You can know a lot about a person through the types of friends this person has.
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发表于 2012-4-4 15:51:38 |只看该作者
额。。。文件损坏了什么。。。那我直接贴出来得了

Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? You can know a lot about a person through the types of friends this person has.

It is safe to say that we gain certain information about a person by observing the types of his friends. However, it is not true when acclaimed that through this way, we can know a lot about this person. Because in different situations, what we acquire from that is not same, including which we gain little.

The statement is incorrect when consider one’s capability of self-control. When referring someone that controls himself well, the environment has little affection on him, thus barely any correlations can be deduced from the environment surrounds him. I have a classmate in senior high school. He can make friends to anyone, including those who are with excellent academic performance and high honor, and those so-called bad students. So, knowing what type of friend he made is meaningless since he can make friends with all kind. On the contrary, we gain much more from those who lack this ability.

However, to those who need support from friends, who rely on others to get improving, the statement is correct. Because this kind of person wants to acquire certain abilities that he desires from his friends, or owns the skill that compensates with him. Thus, by observing the type of one’s friends, we can gain a lot. For instance, making friends with those of high honor surely proves that this person has the willingness to improve himself. On the contrary, spending all time with poorly behaved person shows lacking the motivation of keep learning.

In all, the statement is partially correct. We can get to know a lot about a person through the type of his friends when he can be easily influenced by his surroundings. However, to those who have fully control to themselves and keep his own character in any situations, little information can be acquired.
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发表于 2012-4-5 13:35:50 |只看该作者
3# lizhichaols 已改
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发表于 2012-4-6 12:54:32 |只看该作者
谢啦,好认真确实好多问题的~互改啊~~ 4# 可他媽學點習吧
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发表于 2012-4-6 13:00:36 |只看该作者
第二篇~~
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Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Nowadays, it is not important for families to eat meals together regularly. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.

I disagree with the statement. For a family, eating meals together is not only important, but also essential. Because the functions it provides to us are positive and significant.

Besides the time of eating meal, there is hardly any time for families to gather together. Parents need to work day and night in the office, while children need to go to school to carry on learning. If eliminates this precious period, family members will have little time to make conversations to share their feelings and concerns. Then family means no more than any other person in our life. I have a friend in senior high school that did not prefer to go home. Even though his house is quite near, he lived in the school and seldom leaved. This led to a terrible relationship between him and his family. It would definitely be better if he chose to eat meal at home.

What makes families different to other persons is that they do no harm to us. All their actions and words have the purpose of benefiting us. What they do are most possibly right since they know us best of all. So another function for families to eat meals together is that they could tell each other their problems. Then members can discuss it during the meal to figure out the best solution and offer encouragement. I once failed a competition which I had prepared for a quite long time. I was really upset at that point. When talking to my friends, I felt not a bit better since they only told me to let it go. During the dinner that day, my parents know the result of the competition. Instead of say any meaningless and boring encouraging words, they showed me a film named Facing the Giant. Due to the similarity of me and the main actor in the film, I was deeply toughed and encouraged since he carried on fight and won at last. This cheered me up immediately and helped me get through it. The next year, I tried again and won the prize. This could not be done without my experience during the meal time.

In all, the time when families get together for meal is of vital important and cannot be ignored.
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发表于 2012-4-6 14:59:29 |只看该作者
原来大家都在写规定好的题目哈,呵呵,么注意,那我也写这些题目啦~~
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发表于 2012-4-6 15:00:04 |只看该作者
欢迎猛批啊~~~求给力~~~求加油!

46 110319 do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Movies and television have more negative effects than positive effects on the way young people behave2

Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Movies and television have more negative effects than positive effects on the way young people behave.

Though some people, focusing on the negative effects of movies and television programs, point out that it’s mainly function is to mislead individual's behavior, I still hold the believe that they own more advantages than disadvantages. Moreover, through certain method, problems about those negative effects can be solved.

First, great deals of movies express optimistic attitude, providing us motivation to keep fight in our life. As young people, we are quite likely to encounter difficulties and suffer setbacks. If lacking of motivation to overcome these problems, quite likely, we behave like a loser and admit the fact. This may possibly lead us to a normal life, instead of the one we been dreamt of. This phenomenon can be solved since a great deal of movies and television program provides us such motivation, such as Facing the Giants, which enables us to be confident, and King Arthur, which stresses the significant function of never give up. Benefits from this, we can better get improving and earn a better life.

Next, in a more direct way, some programs are aimed to educate our generations to behave properly. The show Study Everyday teaches us how to perform well in class and improve our academic performance. Meanwhile, Travel around the World tells us how different person in varies places behave and deal with certain circumstance. From these programs, we acquire knowledge that persuades us to make the right behavior. Thus, we can deal things more smoothly and leave others a excellent appearance.

Finally, to those who stress out that we gain negative effects on our behavior, such as following its plot to commit a crime, or addict to drug since there are plenty of people in the movie taking drugs, the government should do its part. That is, to regulate the movie and television market, and eliminates those low-quality ones.

In all, movies and televisions influence our behavior positively. And even negative effects exist, they can be fully prevented.
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发表于 2012-4-8 11:18:59 |只看该作者
挺好的~加油
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发表于 2012-4-8 12:38:36 |只看该作者
呵呵,这么一看好多不足啊,这两天模考了,没怎么看呢,呵呵,这就回改~~ 9# 青鱼
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发表于 2012-4-8 13:02:03 |只看该作者
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发表于 2012-4-8 13:28:34 |只看该作者
这两天都模考,呵呵,作文荒废了会,那就越轨一下,反正要去大使馆面签了,就传一下刚写的面签用的学习计划吧,字数结构和时间都按托福的标准~~~~
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发表于 2012-4-8 13:42:50 |只看该作者
呵呵,谢啦,我觉得你这几个替换比我的好多啦,马上回改~~加油~~ 11# cherish2332
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发表于 2012-4-9 09:51:52 |只看该作者
谢谢lz的修改,已回改
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发表于 2012-4-9 16:00:03 |只看该作者
呵呵,谢啦,得赶紧完成今天的作文了 14# Arthur2012
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