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1. People attend college or university for many different reasons (for  example, new experiences, career preparation, increased knowledge). Why do you think people attend college or university? Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.  

Despite education accompany us lifetime,it is not only because of our innate demand for knowledge but also the society's requirement for us if we are in need of a more successful  career that motivate us to attend university.Here I would like to say that people virtually go to university for a bound of reasons as the world is more and more diversity today.
First of all,as I mentioned above,a person's inner desire will drive him to pursue knowledge and the university is the right place to provide such a valueble opportunity for him to further his education.University is not build in a day.It is created by and made up of countless professors and students.
Second,a degree gained after one attending college is in the position to strengthen his abilities to compete with others in a fierce job market.According to a survey conducted during financial crisis in 2009,persons with a  bachelor degree or above has less tendency to lose his job.What's more,the number of those that didn't attend college amd lose jobs is twice as much as those who went to college.The university do not only satisfy your achievement but also teach you how to think,how to work with others and indepently,whch guarentee you a broader eyes and quicker minds.There is no doubt that you have an advantage over others if you have a degree granted by u universty when others do not.
Apart from two reasons I mentioned above,there is another reason that can be taken into account.It's the pure happiness and joy to experience the college life.Meeting different professors can broaden your horizon and meeting different students come from other areas can bring you a wonderful experience.Never would I have chances to gain an unforgettable and hard experience if I hadn't creved for a mathematics test.In college,there are good times and hard times,but there aren't bad times.I cherish every minute spent in my college.
University and colleges are appealing and worths going.

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