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4月6日 110319 do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Movies and television have more negative effects than positive effects on the way young people behave
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It has always been a complex and controversial issue whether movies and television have more negative effects than positive effects on the way young people behave. Different people hold varied opinions due to their respective ways of looking at the problem. As to me, I hold the general disagreement towards it. My view will be further strengthened in the following discussion.; X' E1 \+ H$ L1 v
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Admittedly, movies and television do some harm to juvenile in certain scenarios（aspects). For example, nowadays an increasing number of movies and television contain some violent plots, which is highly possible to lead to the juvenile delinquency. What is more, watching too much （media like可以去掉） movies and television will actually cause severe short eyesight（你是想说会导致严重的实力下降还是短浅的眼光？无论是哪个表述都不对吧） for young people.: Q' V& A; D: c

However, after profound consideration(long deliberation), young people will gain much more from these media. There is no doubt that the去掉 plenty of information brought by movies and television have totally changed our daily life. We are aware of every big events of(那么多个of，换个around好了） our world by sorts of news in television. And provided that we are willing to take a foreign travel, climate forecast in television will inevitably（indispensable） help a lot.

Furthermore, some movies and television program could absolutely encourage young people to overcome difficulties. For instance, Forrest Gump, a great American movie, tells us no matter under what condition (dilemma we have to face), one must stay optimistic and keep forward. For the essential reason that life was(is) like a box of chocolate, you never know what you are gonna get. With such movies and television programs, young people will benefit a lot.

As is mentioned above, I hold the general disagreement towards the issue that movies and television have more negative effects than positive effects on the way young people behave. Although movies and television do some harm to juvenile, young people gain much more from movies and television.例子举得挺生动的，说理也很充分。加油~

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