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发表于 2003-9-4 18:11:41 |只看该作者 |倒序浏览
157.There is no such thing as purely objective observation. All observation is subjective; it is always guided by the observer's expectations or desires.

简要提纲:
1.        观点:部分否定题目的后半句
2.        让步:我们对事物的认知确实会受到主观因素影响-排比举例
3.        转折:我们不断努力摆脱主观因素,追求客观事实并取得了成效-例子:1.科学实验的标准;2.商业领域:ISO的标准化
4.        总结2、3段并点出重点:认知是可以做到客观的

Although I concede that when we observe, we cannot completely escape being affected by our subjective factors, I think it is a sophistry to assert that all observation is subjective and are always guided by our wills.

Admittedly, many non-objective factors will function in our observation. Different people observing the same thing may reach various conclusions considering their individual variance coming from a number of reasons such as the environments where they live, the academic backgrounds, the experiences and their emotional inclinations. For example, watching the selfsame rainy sky, an ordinary person, that is without any artistical training, finds the color is grey; whereas a professional painter may notice the subtle gradation of colors from maize, dark yellow to grey. Similarly, a Chinese traditional therapist may explain the syndrome of the same patient most differently from that of a doctor trained in western medicine. More often, our observations are shaped by our feelings. An ambiguous foul of the adversary team in a football match can be immediately picked out by the frenetic audience though they may not be so sure of what they have observed.  

However, none of these will sway our volition to pursue the real facts. Actually, we have for long been exerting to adjust our observation to the objective track. This is especially true in the scientific studies. It is a principle to scientists around the world that any scientific experimental result cannot be acknowledged until the experiment is done by several other authoritative institutions with the same result. This tenet effectively helps avoid any subjectivity in the experiment and assure that the result is an objective one. Our stickiness to objectivity can also be demonstrated in the business field. The International Standardization Organization, for example, sets up a series of standards, both in productive industry and service industry, aiming at offering a standardized and objective way to evaluate the enterprises in the market. By applying the standards, we may no longer be colored by the subjective words depicting the situation of the companies.

In sum, since each individual is different and sees things differently, we may not expect an absolute absence of subjectivity in observations. However it is unfair to draw the conclusion as the statement says that all observations are subjective for our ceaseless effort on chasing factuality. Therefore, I would like to say that our observations could be objective.

自评:我觉得没写好,3段说服力不够,我应该把重点放在一些客观认知的成果上,而不是人们追寻客观化的努力。
呵呵,不过贴出来让大家看看,不要犯这样的错误。
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发表于 2003-9-4 23:31:30 |只看该作者
hehui, 你一天能写好多篇啊,吱吱,真是羡慕的流口水,我都没时间,今天中午写那道天才儿童,正写到才思泉涌之时被领导抓去大大地干活,郁闷:(
这篇也没写过,先把个人意见发表一下,给你提供一下反面意见。
我觉得观察就是主观的,在科学实验中也是如此,同样的现象不同的科学家根据他们不同的知识背景和角度,以及期望信仰偏见,往往得出截然相反的解释,例子很多。但是通过不停的实验验证推论,主观的观察结果是可以无限接近客观世界地。但是只要是观察就必然带有个人主观色彩,因为观察的结果必然是要得出什么结论或者对这个现象的解释,这种解释必然渗透自己个人的理解。

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发表于 2003-9-4 23:40:35 |只看该作者
hehui,你的语言,句法上边,我相信随着不断地写作很快就会成熟,所以建议你现在多注意自己的逻辑严谨,思维线索。
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发表于 2003-9-5 01:02:03 |只看该作者
试验的结果是客观的,但对它的解释分析是主观的。

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发表于 2003-9-5 18:07:53 |只看该作者

谢谢各位拉!

对于科学实验,我基本想表达的就是ilse的那个意思:发现是可以客观的,科学实验在经过不同机构、人员及其他客观条件下 操作后仍一致,这个结果就是客观的。

我引ISO-9000的例子也是一样,一个人的评价或少数人的评价都会偏颇,但经过标准化的评定过程后,经多人评定结果一致的话,那这个结果也是客观的。

maidu,

我觉得发现是发现,解释是解释,这是任何研究中都有的两个过程。虽然有人把二合为一,并把他的解释当成发现本身,但这证明他本身的研究步骤有误。

但是,当然,观察也是因人而异的,就是你所说的人们水平、背景不同拉。。。什么的

写的时候最好不把“解释”这个问题写出来,要不然会搀和乱的。

不过你知道有个外国人的280篇吗,那里的这篇范文就是往你这个方向写的,可以看看去。

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